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    Narcissa, Draco, Ginny, Luna, Neville, OC, OtherCanon
    Primary Relationship
    Other Pairing
    Secondary Relationship(s)
    Drama, Mystery, Romance
    Contains profanity, Strong violence, Scenes of a mild sexual nature, Sensitive topic/issue/theme
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    Work In Progress (WIP)
    First Published
    2013-06-19 2:02am
    Last Chapter
    2017-08-15 10:17pm
    Last Updated
    2017-09-20 11:17pm

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    Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
    1 An Unwelcome Visitor

    He was the one who was invading her home, and he was the one who would have to deal with the consequences of that decision.

    1,934 57
    2 The Lady of Greengrass Hall

    It appeared that Lavinia Greengrass had perhaps, in the end, learned one secret too many.

    2,051 40
    3 A Dangerous Revelation

    "So you're saying this is about revenge?"

    2,929 32
    4 The Malediction Perfidious

    “We all have scars, Mr. Malfoy."

    7,066 19
    5 The Stolen Truth

    Here was one threat Astoria had no strategy for, one thing she hadn’t prepared to fight against.

    5,413 18
    6 A Changing Tide

    “Somewhere, Draco Malfoy,” she said, tapping him lightly on the chest, those eyes, captivating and insistent as the tide, still pouring into his. “Somewhere, you still have a soul.”

    7,467 16
    7 A Family Affair

    She wondered if he had always believed this, or if it was the madness speaking.

    5,143 12
    8 The Writing On the Wall

    “Tell me you’re not doing something stupid tonight, Weasley.”

    5,837 12
    9 Behind the Bleeding Walls

    She could live with not being a particularly good person, if it meant that she did get to live.

    5,281 8
    10 In Dark Spaces

    People look away from tragedies.

    6,988 6
    11 An Admirable Thing

    That is something that cannot be taken from you unwillingly. You certainly will still have your soul. 

    2,105 8
    12 Into The Sanctum

    “Headquarters, Ernie. We agreed to call it Headquarters.”

    5,605 4
    13 A Rattle of Keys

    Astoria, personally, did not think ‘the castle sent us’ was a highly compelling argument.

    2,348 6
    14 The Edge of Insanity

    "There’s nowhere safe, so I suggest you pick a side, and bloody well stick to it.”

    3,607 15
    15 The Eyes of the Crowd

    I suppose the invitations to the secret room, from the secret army just got lost on their way to the dungeons, did they?

    7,703 7
    16 The Weight of the Curse

    She didn’t want to do this. This wasn’t a minor cruelty--a mocking laugh or knocking the books from someone’s arms--to make certain that she fit in, that she wasn’t suspected.

    This was an Unforgivable.
    (trigger warning for violence)

    4,322 5
    17 A Trace of Home

    “I spent months as a prisoner with Mr. Ollivander. He taught me a lot about wands. They’re very interesting, you know. Yours especially.”

    3,660 3
    18 Beyond Blood and Bone

    "Everyone inside is more or less a hostage."

    2,971 3
    19 An Unofficial Assistance

    “This is going to blow up in your face. I’m telling you, I can feel it.”

    7,966 7
    20 A Dangerous Game

    “Perhaps I should remind you that I don’t need magic to kill you and make it look like an accident.”

    4,824 3
    21 An Unexpected Ally

    She was. In this moment, in this corridor, in her life. She was entirely alone.


    TW: just to be on the safe side, due to some mentions of violence and a certain Death Eater being just...generally a creep. If you are sensitive to that sort of thing, this might not be the chapter for you. Leave a comment that you'd like a summary - sans creepiness - and I will do my best to provide one

    4,015 2
    22 A Dire Task

    "We’ll talk later. But I need your help with this now. Neville isn’t out of danger yet.”

    4,517 2
    23 Gone to Ground

    "This isn’t Hogwarts anymore. It’s time we started acting like it.”

    3,242 2
    24 An Intervention

    It was fine. Astoria didn’t need Daphne. She didn’t need anyone. She could handle it all on her own.

    5,063 5
    25 An Uncomfortable Truth

    It was about time the rest of them got a healthy dose of reality.

    5,563 5
    26 The Man in the Mirror

    It wasn’t that he had some delusion that Astoria Greengrass had made him a better man. It was that she gave some home some mad kind of hope that, one day, he could be.

    9,122 7


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