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    Harry, Ron, Hermione, Ginny, Scorpius, Albus, James (II), Lily (II), Rose, OC
    Primary Relationship
    Secondary Relationship(s)
    Harry/Ginny, Ron/Hermione, Rose/Scorpius, OC/OC, Other Pairing
    Humor, Romance, Angst
    Next Generation
    Strong Language, Mild Violence, Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Substance Use or Abuse, Sensitive Topic/Issue/Theme, Contains Spoilers
    Story Reviews
    Work In Progress (WIP)
    First Published
    2011-07-23 12:57am
    Last Chapter
    2012-01-06 11:15am
    Last Updated
    2012-01-06 11:15am

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    Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
    1 Back to Hogwarts

    They searched for a compartment alone, but of course all of them were taken by now.

     “This looks okay.” James gestured them over.

    The three of them entered and Al realized exactly why he chose this one.

    Sitting there was, true to James's nature, a lonely looking girl who was very pretty.

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    2 Taking the Castle

    She looked concerned. "Was that... too mean?"

    "Are you kidding?" Rose rolled her  eyes. "We've been waiting for that to happen for years."

    1,327 5
    3 Actions and Consequences

    "I solemnly swear that I am up to no good."

    "Alright, thats the weirdest thing I've ever heard..."

    1,968 6
    4 Boys, Girls, and Quidditch

    "I won't." He promised. Al wasn't as competitive as James, but he certainly was looking forward to taking Jacqueline down a peg or two.

    "Okey then little brother. Let's do this."

    3,218 7
    5 Surprise Surprise!

    "Going to be such a lovely holiday with the two of you around."

    "For our cousin at least." Rose glared at Avery.

    Yes, it was true. James Potter had a girlfriend.

    2,194 6

    "Don't you love the feeling that we could say ANYTHING and no one would notice?"

    2,988 7
    7 Bad News

    "She's in your year." Victoire turned to him, "Do you know her at all?"

    "Not really." Al felt secretly guilty as he heard this. "We have a few classes together..."

    3,520 7
    8 Forgive and Forget? Not Likely.

    And he was REALLY hot. Like INSANELY hot. Too hot for Rose to even think about in her brain...

    Did she mention that he was hot?

    2,939 8
    9 Big Plans

    "Oh come on Avery! Do you really think James doesn't deliver on his birthday?" Christie asked, giggling.

    "What's this year's theme, mate?" His brother asked excitedly.

    "Well..." He grinned. "Its my last one at Hogwarts. It needs to be something really special, really memorable."

    1,792 10
    10 EPIC Proportions

    "James, you're like a bridezilla."

    "Shut it Al! This is my day! It has to be perfect!"

    2,941 6
    11 More Than a Hangover

    "Has someone had a rough day?" Came the distinctly American voice of Avery Hudson.

    Jacqueline wiped her eyes and desperately tried to get her composure back. "I've had a rough time for the past month or so." Dementor attack was a fabulous excuse in this case.

    3,147 15
    12 Princess Confessions

    Maybe Jacqueline didn't mean everything that she'd said to Avery.

    Then again, it was all true.

    2,460 5
    13 Knowledge is Power (or pain)

    "Do you want to talk about that night?" Al asked, putting his hand on her shoulder.

    She stepped away from him, despite how nice his gentle touch on her felt. It got her heart racing.


    4,223 8
    14 "Good" Night

    Rose nodded. "So what does that all mean?"

    "It means that I can only tell you the facts. I can't tell you what to do." Harry sighed.

    2,551 3
    15 Chain Reaction

    "Al, are you going?" Rose asked, ending James and Avery's comedic banter.

    "I have to. It's McGonagall. Besides, she can't... know, can she?"

    "Where do you think Jacqueline is?"

    He glared at her and cursed her logic.

    3,926 7
    16 No Pointe

    "I just lost my balance."

    "I'm not talking about that."

    4,073 8
    17 Life's a Beach.

    “This is the last thing I thought would happen to Jacqueline. She’s always been… So…”



    4,782 8
    18 Passion and Whatnot

    “I can’t do this.” She said, backing away from him through the crowd of people.

    “Yes you CAN Jacqueline!” He brought his voice down, as he was finally catching up with her. “I know you’re scared.”

    4,107 13
    19 Reality Check

    "You don't get it, do you?" She whispered, tears gathering.

    "Aw Jacqueline..." He pulled her into his chest, hating seeing someone so impeccably strong and stoic cry.

    3,651 10
    20 Bittersweet

    When he saw Jacqueline, though… And that rare, soft smile...

    It was like the sun kind of got a little brighter. Her eyes were wide with a healthy vulnerability, with a strange kind of innocence that no one would ever expect from her.

    3,386 16
    21 How Inconsistent

    Rose nodded. “I think that she doesn’t know what she wants. And I think that you’re missing a lot of backstory here…”

    “What do you mean?”

    “That there’s obviously something that went very wrong in her childhood.”

    4,054 10
    22 Patients

    “Why don’t you go back to the dark dungeon you came from and hang out with the rats?”

    “Rats are welcome company compared to the imbeciles you hang out with!”

    4,091 11
    23 Daddy Dearest

     Rose was frozen as she waited for him to notice her.

    It wasn’t until Draco was about three feet away from her that he abruptly took a step back.

    Oh Godric, this situation could not be worse.

    4,776 15
    24 Revisited

    “So back to my original question,” she began without missing a beat, “What happened with you and Scorpius?”

    He kind of had to laugh at that. A lot had happened.

    “He and I might have had a small disagreement.”

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