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Hermione, Snape, Lucius, Narcissa, Voldemort, Draco
Primary Relationship
Secondary Relationship(s)
Harry/Ginny, Lucius/Narcissa, Ron/OC
Drama, Romance, Action/Adventure
Mild Language, Strong Violence, Scenes of a Mild Sexual Nature, Sensitive Topic/Issue/Theme
Story Reviews
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2011-04-11 10:09pm
Last Chapter
2013-01-09 9:11pm
Last Updated
2013-01-09 9:11pm

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 The Transforming of a Child

The man who still stood before me smiled wickedly, “The process is not yet complete! It’s time for the most crucial part!” He took a few steps back, pulled out a wooden stick from his robes, and while pointing the stick at me he screamed, “Crucio!”

2,764 10
2 The Bigger They Are, the Harder They Fall

“What has he done to you?” he cried. I smiled, everything that is for the better,” I whispered to him and whipped out my wand, pointing it at him. His eyes widened, but before he could say anything, I whispered one spell, then yelled out, “Avada Kedavra!” A burst of green light shot out of my wand.

2,785 6
3 Hunting Down Prey

Just barely, no more than a breath, I heard someone whisper behind me, “Imperio.” Then everything went black.

2,618 6
4 Taking Chances

Now knowing our past I knew this would be the hardest thing for her to accept me. But I hoped she would. I hated to say it, but I knew she was my only hope. She was the only one that could help me now. I needed her.

3,347 6
5 The Blur of These Events are Blinding

"Bloody hell woman! If I stay with you any longer I'll be in crutches!" he whined as he scooted away from my injury inducing hands.

My time spent with him began to show as I sent a brilliant orange hex his way, promptley changing his appearence. His hair turned as black as a raven's and as unkempt as a sloth's. In short, he looked like Harry.

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6 The Snakes' Meeting

The snake’s slit eyes continued to size me up and I could tell he was strategizing on how to kill me. I backed up a step and stared at the snake in horror. Voldemort hissed, “Kill him!” And the snake sprung at me, fangs bared.

5,938 5
7 Pure Terror and Skyward Beauties

Ginny looked down at me with a cruel grin on her face. She looked down at me and began to laugh. Her fiery, red hair was blowing behind her as if she was in front of a fan, and her eyes blazed a bright blue. Ginny stepped forwards to me before mocking me,

“You are such a pathetic older brother, you know that? Not like Charlie or Bill. You think you can ‘protect me’?”
Ginny paused to flick a strand of hair behind her shoulder whilst laughing,

5,657 6
8 The Secret Labyrinth of the Mind

My eyes were so focused on searching for a little patch of platinum locks, I didn’t notice the dark figure creeping towards me. Suddenly a hand shot out, muffling my scream, and a second one pinned my wand arm painfully behind my back. I felt a tear slip through my lashes at the pain, and a soft voice whispered into my ear behind me, “Got you now my filthy mudblood. The Dark Lord will be so pleased.”

3,898 3
9 Operation Prison Break

I was ripped from the warm cradle of my dreams by someone shaking my shoulders vigorously. My eyes snapped open to behold a shadowy figure looming over me, his entire being indiscernible by the hooded cloak he wore. The hand that had shaken me started to reach for me once more, but was interrupted by a sound, my earsplitting scream.

“Malfoy!” I hissed once he removed his hand, “What do you think you’re doing?”

He opened his mouth to answer, but was interrupted by the sounds of the surrounding occupants stirring and mumbling as they woke.

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