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    Lupin, Sirius, Lily, James, Pettigrew, OC
    Primary Relationship
    Secondary Relationship(s)
    James/Lily, James/OC, Sirius/OC
    Young Adult
    Strong Language, Mild Violence, Scenes of a Mild Sexual Nature, Substance Use or Abuse
    Story Reviews
    Work In Progress (WIP)
    First Published
    2010-11-01 7:41pm
    Last Chapter
    2011-09-20 9:32pm
    Last Updated
    2011-09-20 9:32pm

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    Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
    1 Bonnie Ralph’s biggest fault.

    I knew it was wrong, I always hated myself afterwards but I couldn't bring myself to walk away from him. I loved him, oh how I loved him, it was my biggest fault how much I loved him. Dean Martin was my, Bonnie Ralph’s, biggest fault. His good looks, charming personality and his intoxicating presence. I cursed them all.

    1,857 14
    2 Letters from Home

    “Oi Ralphie, isn’t that your boyfriend over there, making eyes with Andrews?” Sirius whispered to me as we all listened to Babbling Bathsheba drone on about the lovely topic of Ancient Runes. Usually I found the class quite interesting but I found it rather hard to concentrate when I could feel Deans penetrating glare.

    1,550 8
    3 Truth, Bitter, Truth

    “Are you jealous Sirius?”

    That shut him up. “No,” he finally said. “I just want to be your favourite. So Bon, who is your favourite?” he grinned.

    1,045 7
    4 Where did you sleep last night?

    Bonnie pulled her shirt up and over her head, her white lacey bra enhancing the slight tan her body had. I didn’t care after that, i just went for it, i could deal with it all later, tonight it was just Bonnie and me.

    1,045 4
    5 Somewhere a clock is ticking

    “James,” I said, but he just shook his head and walked away. I looked down at the others who all looked baffled except Sirius who looked rather annoyed.

    1,017 3
    6 Life in a glass house

    I did what James asked, I stayed away from him for the next week, I got blind drunk at Gryffindor’s victory party, and woke up in Dean’s bed. I spent the majority of the time before the holidays avoiding the James and everyone else. Dean and I spent the train just sitting in each other’s arms, he promised to write, I knew he wouldn’t but I hoped anyway.

    1,113 5
    7 Can't stop this thing we've started

    “Ralph,” James’ expression softened, and pulled me into a big hug. “Don’t ever think about yourself like that. What happened wasn’t your fault, I reacted like a git, it’s that it meant something to me, too much in fact. I can’t do this to Sirius, he’s my best mate.”

    1,083 4
    8 How Can You Be Sure

    “Look, if I knew you were coming I wouldn’t have invited Lily,” he started.

    “It’s fine James,” I cut him off.

    1,109 3
    9 The lies that divide us.

    “Night Ralphie.”

    “Night Sirius.”

    I headed back inside to find Dean coming down the stairs, he smiled at me.

    “I missed you, you were taking forever,” he said. “Who was at the door?”

    “Oh just the neighbour.”

    Well it wasn’t technically a lie.

    1,721 1
    10 Suddenly Everything has Changed.

    'Well Bon, you do deserve to be treated the way James treated you and you should never let anyone treat you any less especially dean,' she said as if it were the most helpful thing in world, but to me, now it didn't help one bit. 'And Sirius, don't be mad he can't help it, he didn't just decided Bonnie. Do you really think that out of all souls in the world some paths cross? Try not to dwell too much on it sweetie. I’ll see you next holidays,’ she kissed my head and left my room, leaving me more confused than before she entered.

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