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Don't Even Think It!
Here we go. A true heroic figure is someone who grows in tragedy. Harry and Ginny are two very heroic people. One wishes he was able to move on with his life – while the other wants him to do the same – and not forget why he came back.
Back to the Burrow
Okay - My fantastic BETA sanidad said I needed to break up my chapter - I trust him - because he's just that good. He knows how to spell too! Anyways, here's chapter two - I hope you liked the first chapter enough to keep going.
Because I Love Her
So, as you can tell, I'm running Harry and Ginny down a much different path than expected. I don't doubt that you'll learn to hate Healer Garzino - but at least give him the benefit of the doubt. Hate the hater, not the fic writer - Don't forget, I respond to all of your reviews - you may not like what I have to say, but that's why I get to write back
Sorry About That
Here we are. I love reading and responding to reviews - don't worry, I won't throw a garden gnome at you :-) I will however answer as many questions and concerns as I can. So now Harry's isolation begins to come to an end...Read on.
Getting to Know You is Half the Fun
Back again - I thought I'd recognize my beta talent - I have two now - one who is my language and canon guru and the other who gives me language and feelings. I highly suggest having a couple of editors - they make me sound brilliant!
Intimidation Won’t Work
Thanks to all of you who have reviewed. I really appreciate it. Much thanks to Sanidad for his beta prowess.
A Brother's Surprise
So this is turning into a career getting this chapter uploaded - first, I put up the wrong chapter, then I can't get the tags right...blah, blah, blah. Oh well, here it is now.
Well my dear readers - Thanks for holding on. I'm writing as best I can - and updating as best I can as well. I ordered a new computer so I could write without going to the internet cafe - amazing the things they have in Iraq - but Circuit City went out of business and seems to have lost my order - Cracks me up! Maybe they'll find it before I leave - LOL! Go on, read away - remember, make sure you leave a review - that's the only payment I get.
You Even Broke Their Dragon?
Many thanks to my Betas who keep me from going too far off the deep end - Sanidad and Tom Not Riddle.
Thanks as always to my betas Rich and Tom - you both make me a better writer - Now get back to work on your stories :-)
Did This Really Just Happen?
See - This didn't take too long. Well long enough I'm sure. Thanks to everyone who reviewed - As you can see, I try to answer back as soon as I see them - please continue. The only pay I receive is your reviews.
The Defender of the Light’s Opening Act I
I originally submitted this chapter before I left Baghdad - I was so happy that I was rambling - I just got my return orders and was sweating from the heat. Then I got home WITH REAL INTERNET. Thanks so much to those of you who have sent good thoughts - I very much appreciated your concern -- It really helped! Now I'm in Kabul where I just about am out of time to write - AH THE LIFE OF A SOLDIER!
The Defender of the Light’s Opening Act II
Okay, I had to break this chapter into two pieces. Enjoy and review! Come on...It's not like you are paying for this.
The Enemy Plans
Here's yet another installment - You may be able to tell it was written using some of the cool experiences I had while in Iraq. I love the reviews - see if you can identify where the story foreshadows the plotline - I like most of what you see because if I didn't put it in...and I really like it...I steal it.
The Dagger of Fear
Okay - so I'm actually writing faster than this - but I'm having issues with my tagging skills. Please enjoy and those of you how are on my list of favorites - PLEASE leave a review.
The Royals and the Sword of Gryffindor
Hi everyone! As usual, thank to Sanidad and Tom notRiddle for their beta and story help. Please take a moment to let me know if you are enjoying the fic. I hate begging - right now, though I am having a very nice conversation with Vicky - sorry about your i-phone. You know if you leave a little message, I might use it in future chapters - or even another fic. I have been thinkiing about using a certain character I know here in Kabul - he might fit nicely into the next chapters.
The Dagger of Misery in the Mind
I was walking on patrol we came up to a bazaar that reminded me of something out of Indiana Jones. I went into the bazaar and found the hand-blown glass bottles I’m writing about. To make things stranger – hey what could be stranger than a U.S. Soldier walking around looking like the terminator, with body armor, helmet, gloves, eye shields, and rifle? – the guy selling the bottle just about looked like he came from Diagon Alley. When I approached and picked up one of the bottles, the story surrounding them came to life. I wasn’t expecting this.
The Dementor’s Fear
Well – here I am…Still in Afghanistan. I know the news seems bad. But, it is all just a media construct. Sure bad things happen. But we are in control and will stay that way as long as people realize that this truly for the best.
What’s Really in Your Heart
Well Then...let's try this again, shall we. I've posted three times with no success. This time should be the charm - From my friends here in Afghanistan - ala Kah Farihm.
Foolish Isn’t the Word I’d Use
Well, what can I say? I've been writing along - mostly stuff unrelated to H/G. But hey, that's the problem with having a real job to pay for my hobby. For those of you who celebrate Christmas - Happy Christmas - in the U.S., Merry Christmas! I decided to cancel the bazaar here in honor of Christmas -- and take my own day off - I think I deserve one.
Playing Jax Can Be Dangerous
I know it’s been a while since I’ve updated – things in Kabul have finally started to settle down a bit. I think it’s because of the snow – come on snow!! Here’s another chapter. I’m leaving a trail of bread crumbs for you – someone has already started following them.
No Introductions Necessary
Hello my friends! I am back home finally and writing…somewhat. My beta told me that my writing is a bit off in this chapter. I sort of agree. BUT, that is what this site is for – improving your writing while providing cheap entertainment for all. Well, maybe not, but that makes me feel better. Please leave a review – especially now – I need a little help.
Well here's the next chapter - I'm posting here first because this seems to be where I get the most feedback. So, please continue leaving reviews. I do read them and answer them as well - and sometimes I take ideas and write them into the story.
Here's another building chapter - WHEN WILL I START TEARING DOWN THE SETS?? I don't think like that. As always, Beta love. My beta is TomNotRiddle. He's the best. While I sometimes ignore his comments, I find the majority of them make me think more like a reader, than a writer who already knows what he's thinking...so why can't EVERYONE understand.
Now This Can’t Be Good
We're moving toward the finishline...Leave a review...PLEASE.
So begins the ending. I want to get at least two more chapters in surrounding the wedding and New Year's day.
The Ties That Bind Us
I can't believe it! I received so few reviews before posting this one. That hurt my feelings - I really liked that chapter...it had everything - love, drama, angst. Well, then forget it, now I'll just make the characters beg you to review. Well, maybe not.
Let’s Get It Started
What happens after an attack - a Counterattack, if you are able...if not? Let's allow Hermione to figure that out, shall we.
She Won't Lose
Read and Review - Thanks
There’s Another One?
And the hits just keep coming!
What Did You Expect?
More of the same - no cliff hangers...I think
Mother Knows Best
There are many things in this world which we cannot explain. These are the things we cover in mystery and superstition so we do not cause ourselves so much pain as to wonder their true origins. Most times, the origins of our fears are simple. You should fear the shebear when her cubs are at stake. She will fight to the bitter end.
I Found a Way In
Okay folks – this is a very dark chapter. I want to know what you think about it, so pull out the tissues and curl up tightly. The when you are finished, write a review ;-)
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