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Lupin, Sirius, Lily, James, OC
Primary Relationship
Secondary Relationship(s)
Drama, Romance, Action/Adventure
Mild Language, Strong Violence, Scenes of a Mild Sexual Nature, Substance Use or Abuse, Sensitive Topic/Issue/Theme, Contains Spoilers
Story Reviews
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2009-05-25 1:12am
Last Chapter
2010-06-26 2:33pm
Last Updated
2010-06-26 2:33pm

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 Just Mack. Prologue.

“Can I be Captain?” Remus asked.
Mason immediately shook his head. “No, Mack is always Captain.”
Remus glanced at me. “But, she’s a girl.”
I frowned at him. “Well, you better get used to it, Remmy, ‘cause that’s all I’ll ever be.”

4,028 9
2 Plan Lesbiano. Chapter One.

“Ah, I’ve got it, Rule Five: The Marauders must solemnly swear to always be up to no good.”

4,242 10
3 Inconspicuous. Chapter Two.

"Didn’t you hear her screaming?! She can’t swim! You should bloody well know that something is wrong if someone is screaming at the top of their lungs for you to put them down! She could have bloody well drowned!”

2,984 5
4 Nightingale to the Rescue. Chapter Three.

That’s why I worry so much, Mack. Because I promised your mum that I would take care of you.”

3,440 5
5 Infatuation. Chapter Four.

“Oh, I may be fat, but you're ugly, and I can diet.” Score! That was amazing! How do I come up with this stuff?

“Excuse me?”

2,075 9
6 One More Glass. Chapter Five.

"Mackenzie, this is Mark. Mark, this is Mackenzie."

4,742 9
7 Ready to Go Home. Chapter Six.

"I do not fancy him. I don’t even know him. It’s impossible for me to fancy him.”

7,542 11
8 Pogrebin. Chapter Seven.

"Maybe I should go find a best mate who's gay. Would that make you happy, Moony?"

4,121 15
9 A Complete Mess. Chapter Eight.

"Remus, I'm just a stupid girl, who trips over herself and doesn't know how to love. I'm nobody worth fretting over."

5,740 14
10 Happy Christmas. Chapter Nine.

"Why won't you say my name?"

3,828 12
11 Killing Butterflies. Chapter Ten.

"Some help you are," I mumbled, pushing past him.

"I love you, too, Sis!" [Mason] shouted after me, obviously trying to give me some much unwanted attention.

2,096 9
12 Kissable. Chapter Eleven.

"Nightingale, you look like a girl."

"That's what I am, halfwit."

"Yeah, but today, you look it."

4,125 8
13 Paper Faces On Parade. Chapter Twelve.

"It's weird, you know," he said, keeping his gaze on the lake.

"What is?"

"I don't really know how to explain it. It'll just sound strange. For some reason, I... I feel like I have this connection with you."

7,473 11
14 Crowd Surf. Chapter Thirteen.

"I'm ecstatic! I really can't believe it's you! Oh, my God!"

"Well, it is me. Flesh and bones," he grinned widely.

1,862 14
15 Numbers. Chapter Fourteen.

"Want — to — to die," I answered him, between sobs.

3,172 19
16 Ciggies. Chapter Fifteen.

"I... Uh... I was thinking."
"With a cigarette in your mouth?"
"Erm... Yes."

4,598 13
17 Tattoo. Chapter Sixteen.

"Did he kiss you?" he asked, quietly.

I took a second before answering. "Yeah. Yeah, he did."

"Like, a lot?"

"No, just once or twice. Don't worry, Rem. He was very cordial."

4,160 10


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