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Rating
15+
Chapters
18
Words
56,690
Characters
James (II), OC, OtherCanon
Primary Relationship
OC/OC
Secondary Relationship(s)
James/OC
Genre(s)
Drama, Mystery, Romance
Era
Next Generation
Advisory
Scenes of a mild sexual nature
Story Reviews
112
Status
Abandoned
First Published
2008-07-12 12:16am
Last Chapter
2011-01-11 10:29pm
Last Updated
2011-01-11 10:29pm

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 Start of the Holidays

Basically picking up where its prequel, "More Than Meets the Eyes", left off with James and Marisol, next chapter Holden will enter as a main character instead of just a minor character like he was in MTMTE.  I'm so sorry that it took me so long to get this story up, but here's the first chapter.  I hope you enjoy it!

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2 Eventful Holiday

Still setting up in this chapter, but Holden enters in this chapter as promised.  I hope you enjoy it!

4,897 13
3 New Year's Masquerade

Here's chapter 3 and as promised a lot more happens in this one than the first two chapters.  I'm not going to say anything here since I'll let you read to to find out what happens, plus I think the chapter title pretty much gives enough of it away on its own.  :P  I hope you enjoy the chapter!

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4 Search for Masquerade Girl

This chapter has now been beta'd by my wonderful beta, Whitney, aka slytherinprincess over in the forums.

Edited/// 2008.08.15

3,352 10
5 Secrets 101

This chapter is now beta'd by slytherinprincess over in the forums.

Edited//  2008.08.28

3,102 10
6 Gossip and Emotions

This chapter has now been beta'd by my beta, slytherinprincess.
Edited// 2008.09.24

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7 Discovered

Here is the long awaited chapter 7, by the way I'm so sorry about the wait.  I've been pretty busy with RL at the moment.  Enjoy!

Edited// 2008.10.12

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8 A Note and Dream

Okay, so I'm sorry for abandoning this story for a little more than a month, but I participated in NaNoWriMo (I reached 50k on Thanksgiving and completed the novel Sunday morning... 51k).  This chapter is now beta'd by my marvolous beta, slytherinprincess.

*Edited 2008.12.22*

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9 Frustrations

Here's an early x-mas present.  Hope you enjoy it!  This Chapter is now Beta'd thanks to my Beta, slytherinprincess.

Edited:  2009.01.15

3,468 4
10 One More Note

I'm so, so, so very sorry for not updating in a couple of months.  Things have been pretty hectic since this semester started, but I promise to make more of an effort to update more.  Especially since we're about to get to all the drama ;) This chapter is now beta'd.

Edited: 2009.04.28

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11 Lost in Thoughts

Chapter title by "Acompletemarauder"!

Here's the awaited Ch. 11!  I actually liked how it turned out, so I hope you guys enjoy it as much as I did writing it =)  This chapter is now beta'd.

Edited: 2009.04.28.

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12 Atop the Astronomy Tower

I'm terribly sorry for the long delay on this chapter!  I've been very busy with the spring semester, but now that I just finished with all my classes and have a week off before the summer semester starts I will be getting plenty of writing done.  Plus, I have a lot more free time over the summer.  This chapter is now beta'd.

Edited: 2009.04.28.

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13 Friendship

Un-beta'd

3,409 1
14 Late Night Meetings

I'm so sorry that I haven't updated in a while.  First I was working on a new story, then my laptop crashed, but I have my laptop back and have finished this chapter for you.  It's shorter than I normally would have written, but it just felt like it was finished and ready to start the next chapter.  I hope you enjoy this chapter!
This chapter is Unbeta'd.

2,102 2
15 A Decision in the Making

So, it's been awhile since my last update and I just wanted to apologize yet again for the long wait for this update.  Good news, though, is that we're heading into the final stretch for this story and I couldn't have made it this far without all of you guys reading and reviewing!  I hope you like this chapter and I'd love to know what you guys think of it!  ll Un-beta'd.

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16 Out in the Open

And here is Chapter 16; so sorry for the delay, but I've been busy with classes and work. I'll try to have the next chapter up sooner but no promises. I hope y'all enjoy this chapter!

2,630 1
17 Quidditch Cup

Is exactly what the title implies, this is the Quidditch Cup.

1,911 1
18 The Decision

In which Holden decides the girl he wants to be with, BUT that this story is far from over as there will be drama that follows.

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