The Quidditch Commandments: Ravenclaw by The Phantom
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Ch. # | Chapter Title | Word Count | Reviews |
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Hostility is Saved For the Opposing Team, Not Your Fellow Teammate “Oh no, they’re at it again?!” Lee’s voice was appalled at the interruption of the eerie silence, now replaced by the incessant slams of rage between the two Ravenclaw Beaters. “SAMUELS! DOBBS! Quit it!! You’re supposed to be hitting the other players, not each other!” |
1,553 | 34 |
2 |
Never Show Your Weakness I, Emma Dobbs a.k.a. ‘The Better Beater’ of Ravenclaw, am not attracted to him in the least bit; ughh gag me. An attraction between us is as unlikely as Dumbledore being gay! Ha! |
2,552 | 31 |
3 |
A Clever Strategy Includes Sabotage “Everytime you and Jason are together….You both look as though you either want kill each other with excruciating brutality, or kiss each others’ face off with excruciating brutality.” |
3,081 | 26 |
4 |
Never Get Too Close To The Enemy Suddenly, a figure enclosed my entire body, pushing me against the wall. I wanted to scream for help, because Samuels was committing sexual assault on me. But then, I realized that he was reaching for Davies’s broomstick, and I was just oh so conveniently in the way. |
3,844 | 56 |
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Remember To Keep A Safe Distance Away From Your Opponent “Well, let go of me, then!” I shrieked, looking like an impatient toddler attempting to escape the clutches of an evil nanny. “People may start to get the impression that you might actually like me.” |
3,832 | 58 |
6 |
Keep Your Teammates Close, Keep Your Enemies Closer As his touch became hotter than a flame, I realized something utterly and impossibly inevitable: Jason Samuels was going to snog me. |
4,862 | 66 |
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Challenges Are Made To Be Accepted, Not Refused My eyes were fixed on him, as though doing that would help me read his thoughts. I used to just not even care what he said. Now I was having internal arguments about his every thought. |
3,513 | 62 |
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Never Leave A Teammate Behind Disbelief flooded through my veins. If I didn’t know any better, I would’ve thought that he just gave me an open invitation to snog him senseless. |
7,333 | 80 |
9 |
Players Must Bear The Consequences Of Their Actions But I found that I could not move at all, nor did my body want to. I was torn between what I wanted and what my body wanted; I was in dire need to move a bit, but my body was content with its position. |
4,884 | 45 |
10 |
Minor Obstacles Affect the Game, Major Ones Altar It Entirely Lust. I didn’t like it at all. |
5,196 | 76 |
11 |
You Can't Spell Teammates Without The Words 'Team' and 'Mates' “Oh, come off it Davies,” Jill chuckled nervously, obviously trying to cover up the tension. It wasn’t working whatsoever. “Stretton isn’t really the new captain, is he?” |
5,720 | 51 |
12 |
The Only Interesting Game Plans are the Insane Ones “Good.” Jacob smooth voice spoke in a naturally persuasive tone. Slowly, his eyes caught onto mine, looking straight at them. “Don’t break my brother’s heart, Dobbs.” |
5,344 | 60 |
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Trust Your Own Instincts Before Anyone Else's At least if I made Samuels mad, there would be some argument, and then furious snogging at the end of the tunnel. |
6,916 | 75 |
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