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Sirius, Lily, James, Neville, Luna, Ginny, Ariana, OC, OtherCanon
Primary Relationship
Other Pairing
Secondary Relationship(s)
Drama, Mystery, Angst
Mild Language, Mild Violence, Sensitive Topic/Issue/Theme
Story Reviews
First Published
2008-04-15 12:58pm
Last Chapter
2009-09-25 2:29pm
Last Updated
2011-02-25 6:14pm

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 In Between

"It’s funny how it always rains at funerals, isn’t it? It’s as though all the sorrows of the world are combined and emptied from above."

2,177 71
2 The Lady Who Was Not Death

“Are you death?” I whispered, hoping this kind lady would assist me.

The lady laughed, and her voice tinkled softly in my ears. “Heavens, no!”

1,734 52
3 Skeleton Wood

"Voices danced around me as if they were echoing off some barrier between us, and they seemed strangely distant in my ears; almost as if I were underwater."

2,990 38
4 Lessons In Forgiveness

“Why is it that white gives the impression of perfection? All I saw was a lack of colour. The exact thing the white world personified; a lack of life.”

2,575 45
5 The Pool Of Reflection

"I looked behind me, seeing the orange tree standing out against the grey horizon. Its old and twisted branches were stiffened at an odd angle, almost as if they were waving goodbye to me."

2,370 36
6 Dead Or Alive

"My hand covered my mouth, trying to stifle the horror that came from deep within me. As I saw Lily’s ashen face beside me, I realised that she was about to fall. My shaking arm gripped her shoulders, allowing her to lean against me as she sobbed."

2,258 29
7 Sense Deception


"I stared through the whiteness, looking past my orange tree. It’s branches framed my view, the gnarled and twisted fingers caressing the corners of my eyes. There was nothing beyond it, even though I could feel that there was something there."

2,582 21
8 A Silent Salvation


"I’d never really found another person quite as strange as me at home, other than Luna, of course. She and I were quite alike, even in her younger years. There was something so gratifying in seeing some of my own traits in my daughter."

2,497 18
9 Segmented

"“What’s happening to my Luna?” I demanded, raising my voice in order to attract her attention. “Take me back there, let me go back!”

“No,” she said, her eyes still focused on the blemish on the horizon. “I cant allow that.”

“I want to know what’s happening to my daughter!” I drew my arms around my chest and hugged myself tightly. If I uncrossed my arms, I feared I would try to strike out even though I knew it was impossible to hurt her. “Please.”"

3,354 14
10 Eleven O'clock

"I waited for the chiming of the clock as eleven o’clock came and went, but my ears were met with silence. It was the silence rich with baited breath, the air electric with anticipation."

2,928 19


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