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Dumbledore, Lupin, Sirius, A. Longbottom, F. Longbottom, Lily, James, Bellatrix, Lucius, Pettigrew
Primary Relationship
Secondary Relationship(s)
James/Lily, Lucius/Narcissa, Remus/OC, Sirius/OC
Drama, Romance, Young Adult
Mild Language, Mild Violence, Scenes of a Mild Sexual Nature, Sensitive Topic/Issue/Theme
Story Reviews
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2007-05-09 1:12am
Last Chapter
2008-04-15 12:52am
Last Updated
2008-04-15 12:13pm

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1 Prologue/ Act One Scene One: Welcome to the Show

A sound called me from my dreaming state, drawing my eyes to the door. Standing there, in all his glory, was James Potter. I rolled my eyes as I turned my back to him, ignoring his pleas to allow him entrance. Slowly the door opened, obviously he had finally used his wand. The stupid git.

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2 Act One Scene Two: Sympathy and Differences

“Sirius ran away this summer.” Remus said as he looked at me with an undefined expression. I gasped as I covered my mouth with my hands. I knew what it meant for a Black to turn his back on his family. “He always used to talk about doing it, but I never thought he’d do it.” Remus had a small smile on his face that was almost proud.

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3 Act One Scene Three: They Did It

A Lawyer, of all the dirty, sneaky, dexterous people I could have been born into my father was a bloody Lawyer! He had always been persuasive, but he had out done himself this time! I felt my cheeks glow with anger, was there truly no where I could escape him? I growled, you can’t run from your destiny or so they say. The hell I can’t! Watch me!

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4 Act One Scene Four: Of Lessons and Surprises

I looked at my timetable as I walked, noticing the Dance Studio to be in the dungeons. The thought of doing point on a hard and uneven stone floor did not sound at all good to me. Still I continued moving, a slight bounce in my step. I was going to be in an Advanced Class, my parents had set this up, I was going to be the Wind Up Doll as always.

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5 Act One Scene Five: Competition and Blood Prejudice

“What are you doing here, Malfoy? This is Advanced dance.” I snarled watching as he smirked at me.

“I could ask you the same question, Miss Evans. I would certainly imagine that all that mud in your blood would throw your balance.”

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6 Act Two Scene One: Baggage

I could see tears in his eyes, and all over again we were eleven and he was getting bullied by James and Sirius. All over again someone was hurting him, only this time it was me. I turned my face away from his, trying to push past the tears as I placed my hands on his chest and pushed him away.

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7 Act Two Scene Two: Hatred

“There… I’ve let you in, Lily.” He whispered as he stood up. “I’m trusting you with the biggest secret I have. I hope soon you can trust me with yours.” And just like that, he left

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8 Act Two Scene Three:Regret and Confusion

I turned in time to see James Potter offering me his hand, with a smile I daintily placed my hand in his, almost amazed as he pulled my hand into the perfect position and placed his hand on just the right place on my back. He led me around the room, both of us getting used to the feel of each other.

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9 Act Two Scene Four: Grace

It was really amazing how James moved up there on his broom, much like me when I’m dancing. He spun and rolled and did things that made my breath catch in my throat. He was so graceful, like a bird on the wind, it was easy to see now why he was Captain.

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10 Act Two Scene Five: Self Satisfaction

I preformed because it was expected; I joined the Quidditch team to spite my parents. But this, this was for me.

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11 Act Three Scene One: Making Friends and Fighting Desire

It was when I felt James's lips on my neck that I realized just how far my little joke had gone. He turned me to face him, pressing his lips against mine. He tangled both his hands in my hair, holding me completely against him, and I couldn’t help but wonder if I even wanted to stop what I know he was thinking of.

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12 Act Three Scene Two: Broken Legs, and Halloween Plans

“James I’ve been dancing all morning, can’t this wait until lun-”
“They’re having a Halloween ball, they want me to bring you.” I had no idea why, but for some reason the thought of meeting James's parents scared me half to death. I stopped for a moment, looking up at him with wide eyes. “They want to meet you.”

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