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Dumbledore, Lupin, McGonagall, Snape, Sirius, Lily, James, Pettigrew, OC
Primary Relationship
Secondary Relationship(s)
Remus/Lily, James/OC, Remus/OC, Sirius/OC
Drama, Romance, AU
Mild Language, Mild Violence, Scenes of a Mild Sexual Nature
Story Reviews
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2007-01-29 2:52pm
Last Chapter
2009-10-24 9:44pm
Last Updated
2009-10-24 9:44pm

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 Chapter One

"But mom..."
"Lily, it's okay. We'll work this out. We just need to tidy up a bit, so let's just take a look around. See there's a nice view outside!"
"Yeah, mom, the view outside is better than it is in here."

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2 Chapter Two

"What does me being in a low financial state have to do with anything?"
Matt and Denise just looked to each other and laughed. "It has to do with everything."

1,516 17
3 Chapter Three

"Who are you?" she said fake politely.
"Oh, this is Lily." Denise cut in before Lily could. "And I just saw Monica and Audrey!"
They were in fact in the Hallway looking in each compartment. Samantha looked to Lily one more time when a dangerous glint flashed through her eyes which made Lily uncomfortable as she smiled quickly and looked out the window.

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4 Chapter Four

"Leave him alone!" I demanded with such force. It caused all heads in the corridor to turn in wonder.
The one boy casting the spell faced me with amusement playing behind his round spectacles. "Excuse me?" he said calmly, as if he hadn't heard what I said.
I gave him a hard look. He was so tall and I noticed he was handsome too. His messy jet black hair seemed to fall elegantly across his angelic looking face. But I didn't let that distract me, I didn't back down. I stood my ground.
"I said leave him alone!"

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5 Chapter Five

 “So thats why, no matter how unpredictable my life will be here, I won’t give up, I won’t stop standing up for myself because of my background. And I certainly will not give in to those crazy Marauders no matter how many times they torture me. And I know!” I said putting my hand up so Denise wouldn’t interrupt.
"I know with the whole social status ladder and such but that doesn’t matter to me anymore, I have to do this, for my mom, and for myself.” I said with such determination.

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6 Chapter Six

"Touchy aren't we? Didn't we just have a discussion about manners? Tsk, tsk. ..Have you forgotten already?"
"A discussion? Right, the one where I could care less about what you said." Crossing my arms, I gave him a sarcastic smile and resumed my journey to the front.

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7 Chapter Seven

"You've just stepped over a dangerous line." he threatened, his hazel eyes shooting daggers into my own.
"And you've just crossed with the wrong Pristine." I matched his threat.

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8 Chapter Eight

This Hogsmeade place sounded pretty fun.
“And there is a prank shop there by the way.” Denise and Matt hinted evilly.
“Hmm…interesting.” I said trying to be suave but ended up laughing.

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