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Dumbledore, Lupin, Sirius, Lily, James, Bellatrix, Pettigrew, OtherCanon
Primary Relationship
Secondary Relationship(s)
Humor, Romance, Action/Adventure
Mild Language, Mild Violence, Scenes of a Mild Sexual Nature
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First Published
2007-01-09 1:34pm
Last Chapter
2007-08-02 11:52pm
Last Updated
2007-08-02 11:52pm

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 Chapter 1 - The Journey

I can’t believe that this is going to be the last train ride to Hogwarts, looking back now it seems like only last week I was walking around Diagon Alley with Mum and Dad, not having a clue what I was doing.

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2 Chapter 2- The Arrival

“Lily,” whispered Pamela “Lily, get up!” I looked at her as she tugged the sleeve of my arm. I looked around and saw people looking at me, oh no! I’d missed my cue.

1,350 7
3 Chapter 3 - The Sick Bucket

“Cheer up James! Lily’s just come in, and she’s, err, she’s smiling.” Remus was looking at the great hall entrance, with a sort of I-can’t-believe-my-eyes look on his face. I turned and followed his gaze and sure enough, Lily was smiling. I looked again, but realized she was smiling at Remus.

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4 Chapter 4 - The Warning

 “Merlin Lily, you’re going to break James’ heart.” Pamela said, but with a small smile.  “I warned him, he brought it on himself,” Jessica and Pamela giggled and I joined in.

1,133 13
5 Chapte 5 - The Meeting

“Ta daa!” I had cut out a mask from a spare piece of parchment and was holding it in front of my eyes. The room fell silent, either in a pleasant shock or wondering what on earth my creation was supposed to be.

1,099 7
6 Chapter 6 - The question

Merlin, what was that? Never and I mean never have I got so embarrassed around James. I took in a deep breath, I do not have a crush on James

2,354 20
7 Chapter 7 - the first full moon

            And then I saw. Glued to the spot in front of Moony was Lily Evans. She must have followed me here! I ran in an attempt to get Lily away from Moony, but it was too late.

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8 Chapter 8 - The truth

 “Oh good Miss Evans, your awake” said Madam Pomfrey walking towards me “how’s your arm?” she asked looking down at my arm, I wince 
               "Painful” I replied
              “Hmm, it will be for a while unfortunately my dear.” She said examining it.
              “Erm, Madam Pomfrey, did James go back after I

1,177 9
9 Chapter 9 - The Biscuits

“Fine!” I replied. If Sirius wants a fight, he’s got a fight.
     “Where were you after you took Evans to the hospital wing?” Sirius was still demanding my life story.

1,120 8
10 Chapter 10 - The first kiss

 I walked out of the common room, making my way over to the hospital wing, James had just asked me out again and I know this is like the 30th time this year or something stupid, but this time I actually considered it for a moment.

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11 Chapter 11 - The Fight

 “Shut your mouth, Potter.” Ouch. Well, he’s now my ex-best mate.
            “Or what?” I replied cheekily.
            “Or I’ll shut it for you!”

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12 Chapter 12 - The Second Kiss...

I gave a tiny smile. He smiled slightly back as if he was relieved that I didn’t shout at him. I stared at him, I wish he would just kiss me again, WAIT, no I don’t, I don’t, I don’t, I don’t!!

1,373 10
13 Chapter 13 - The Detention

“You can tell me.” I whispered into her ear.
            “It doesn’t matter” She looked at her watch. “My detentions over now. I’ll see you later.” She smiled at me before leaving the trophy room.
            Argh. Now things are extremely uncertain, well not as much as before, I suppose.

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14 Chapter 14 - The awkward questions

“Look James if you have come in here to ask me what I think ‘we’ are again then you are wasting your breath because I don’t know, okay. What happened was – I don’t know what it was but what I do know is that it’s confused the hell out of me and I don’t know what I think anymore.”

1,203 9
15 Chapter 15 - The Hogsmead Trip

 “Lello Hily!” I called as a beautiful redhead entered the bar.
Oh no, what did I just say? Lello Hily? Oh God, please take me now.

1,388 10
16 Chapter 16 - The Interuptions

 “So” started James “are you going to come to the ball, what if I promise to look after you?” he smirked at me
            “That’s exactly why I can’t go” I blurted out,

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17 Chapter 17- The Killer Hairbrush

“James Potter! Where are you? Get up!” Lily Evans was in the doorway of my bedroom, looking especially menacing with her weapon of destruction, i.e. her hairbrush.

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18 Chapter 18 - The Dicision

 “Have fun James,” I said turning and closing the door, I heard him walk over to his bathroom and then after a minute he walked out. I sat on the edge of my bed, my dress catching my eye. I looked over at it. It really was beautiful,

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19 Chapter19 - The Ball

I saw her, and I stopped breathing. The most beautiful girl I’ve ever seen was standing by the refreshment table. Stuff Callie. I need to meet this girl.

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20 Chapter 20 - The Hairgrip

I thought for a minute, then reached to the back if my head and slid out my small hairgrip. It was black with a small emerald teardrop on it.

“Here” I handed it to him “Something for you to remember this night with” he took it from my hands and brushed it lightly with his thumb. I kissed him lightly on the lips, “I will never forget this night,”

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21 Chapter 21 - The end

“It wasn’t like that.” My heart was beating fast. I didn’t expect this reaction. I just – I just don’t know. I knew she wouldn’t be that delighted when she found out, but I thought, or at least hoped she would be just a little bit happy.

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