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Lupin, Sirius, A. Longbottom, Lily, James
Primary Relationship
Secondary Relationship(s)
Humor, Romance, Action/Adventure
Strong Language, Strong Violence, Scenes of a Mild Sexual Nature, Substance Use or Abuse
Story Reviews
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2006-12-10 6:46pm
Last Chapter
2008-06-14 10:08pm
Last Updated
2008-06-16 3:59pm

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 Chapter 1

Just meeting the characters.

1,115 67
2 Chapter 2

What happens when James steals Lily's bag?

1,259 18
3 Chapter 3

What will James do to Lily to get his revenge?

2,906 25
4 Chapter 4

“OH! He’s dead!” I said harshly, voicing my exact thoughts. I was walking…well jogging…okay I was sprinting like an insane woman about to commit homicide up, to the common room.

“Wait, wait, wait, wait, wait!” Alice said as she pulled me to a stop. I looked at her sharply “How about instead of um, killing James you just ignore him…I’m sure that will drive him nuts.”

2,948 14
5 Chapter 5

Derek and Lily go to Hogsmeade together, but where's James?

1,419 19
6 Chapter 6

Gryffindor vs. Slytherin. *cue dramatic music*

1,985 9
7 Chapter 7

One word. Drama.

1,765 15
8 Chapter 8

“I just need to talk to her, make sure she’s okay.” Potter said as I opened my eyes. It was dark now.
I got up, it didn’t hurt as bad as before, and opened the door just a bit.
“She almost got killed James, killed, by some one she thought she knew, how would you be?” Alice said a little quieter
“She needs me” he muttered

2,154 13
9 Chapter 9

Everyone was crowded around something. Somehow I made it to the front. That’s when I saw him, Derek…dead in the middle of the circle.

1,273 20
10 Chapter 10

“What could dear Lily be hiding under her hands? I’m curious, very curious, and I think everyone else is too.” He stated. Alice was silently laughing. Remus was looking disapprovingly as usual. Peter looked like he was going to pee his pants from the excitement.
“How right you are Padfoot!” James looked from Sirius to me.
“No, no, no, no, no, get away from me Potter,” Sirius came up next to him. “You too Black, stay away.”

4,046 27
11 Chapter 11


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12 Chapter 12

I creaked open the gate and…
“Going somewhere?”
“Oh! Um hi Potter! I just w-wanted to uh-fully appreciate the-um-true splendor of your backyard.” I said feebly
“And you had to sneak out of the bathroom window to do so?” he said haughtily

2,006 21
13 Chapter 13

We walked to the kitchen and I did not see 2 marauders, but all 4 marauders. They were all sitting around the table. In the middle of the table was an old, chipped cup.
“You’re all coming!” I choked.
“Well of course Lily-love. Marauders stick together.”

2,715 14
14 Chapter 14

“Yes. Anyway I thought I should pay you a visit-”
“-At 1 o’clock in the morning.” I stated again. “ I just saw you like 6 hours ago.”
“But darling,” his eyes twinkling as he dramatically placed his hands over his heart “2 hours away from you feels like a lifetime, you can’t even imagine what 6 hours does to me.”

2,922 20
15 Chapter 15

Oh Damn!
I couldn’t take my eyes off of him. If you could imagine the hottest guy ever, James Potter would be ten times that right now. I wasn’t even aware that I kept walking until my ankle twisted as I fell off the sidewalk. I heard my ankle crack and screamed out in pain as I landed hard on the sidewalk.

6,467 24
16 Chapter 16

Basically, a sad Lily and a James who tries to cheer her up!

5,856 14
17 Chapter 17

“Gentlemen-real gentlemen aren’t supposed to hurt ladies.” I said smartly. Slowly and stealthily trying to slip my ankles out of their grips.
“Us, gentlemen?” Sirius said with a wink.
“And you can hardly be called a lady.” James interjected.
I made a face of fake distress and slipped my foot out just in time to kick him. He moaned and clutched his eye that had somehow collided with my foot.

3,435 15
18 Chapter 18

“ENOUGH!” yelled McGonagall. “This is ridiculous. 10 points from Gryffindor and detention for the both of you.”
“But Professor,” I gasped. “I can’t have detention. I’ve never had a detention.” We didn’t do anything truly wrong.
“I’m sorry Miss Evans. I can’t just let this go unpunished. You’re lucky I didn’t take your badges away. Mr. Potter,” she turned from my mournful face to James’s rather carefree one. “Same place, Same time.”

3,706 18
19 Chapter 19

“Where are your friends? Went stag tonight?” Snape said heavily hinting on the word ‘stag’.
“Nice word usage. Verrrry original. Come up with that all by yourself?” James shot back.
Snape smirked. “As a matter of fact, I did.”

3,549 23
20 Chapter 20

The Masuearde Ball has arrived, and James, yet again, has a flawless plan to win the fair Lily's heart.

7,570 30
21 Chapter 21

“I should go.” He finally said, turning away from me with his shoulders slightly slumped in a hopeless way.

“What? Why?” I asked quickly, indistinctively grabbing his hand to stop him from leaving. I didn’t know why I did it, but something, that same ‘something’ that overtook me the night of the ball, kind of turned on a switch in my head. And with that switch came a new enlightening in my mind. I knew everything. Everything I felt, needed, and most of all wanted.

6,714 24
22 Chapter 22

“James?” I asked again after a while.


“Erm- we’re not doing something crazy right?”

I could hear the amusement in his voice, a good change from the formally tense mood. “Define ‘crazy’.”

I gulped. Oh Shizz. “Something that is so mentally deranged and insane that it has the potential to bring my very short life to an end...?”

7,363 18
23 Chapter 23

“He was running away from a girl?”

“That’s not just any girl, Lily.” Alice said. “That’s a…well it couldn’t be. Why would she come here?” Her question was directed at James.

He just shrugged. “She got sorted into Gryffindor this morning.”


“I’m confused. What’s the problem?”

Alice had the same expression as the other three. “She’s a Carver.”

3,765 12
24 Chapter 24

She had a hand over her mouth and a glass of orange juice was broken on the floor. I slowly slid off the bed and stood up, not meeting her eyes. James got off the floor and did the same.

Then he slid a hand through his hair. Potter nervous habit. Not such a hotshot now, are ya? “Ha…ha. Hey mum. Uhm-I was just…er…haha…well, you see…uhm…“

Very well put.

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