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Harry, Ron, Hermione, Sirius, Voldemort, Draco, Slytherin, OC
Primary Relationship
Secondary Relationship(s)
Horror/Dark, Mystery, Romance
Strong Language, Strong Violence, Scenes of a Sexual Nature
Story Reviews
First Published
2006-10-15 1:50pm
Last Chapter
2007-05-06 6:38pm
Last Updated
2007-05-06 6:38pm

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 A Grim Beginning

The Ministry have come to work in the morning to find a bit of a shock... there's been a murder. RIP warning

1,037 9
2 A New Year

Harry, Ron, Hermionie and Ginny are about to start their new year at Hogwarts, and have just found out about the murder at the Ministry of magic, and begin to get worried when Harry starts getting these horrid dreams about a monster that may had killed the cleaner. Meanwhile Harry and the gang ask jsut one question..."Whos is that on the train?"

3,072 4
3 The Sorting Hat Flinch

Draco wants to try his luck on Loukisa, but will his 'charm' work or can Harry keep her away from him? Now that Loukisa is at Hogwarts, she must now be placed in a house. Will it be Ravenclaw, Hufflepuff, Gryffindor, or Slytherin? RIP warning

1,286 4
4 Lessons

Now Harry knows that a Mallakson is not the culprit, but then who is? As their first day back at Hogwarts comes, Loukisa has many secrets that Harry and the others are about to find out.

2,406 3
5 Scared to Death

Draco was not happy with the previous events, and wants to hurt Harry. But Malfoy isn't Harry's biggest problem. A Mallakson is indeed not the murderer, but then, who is? Will Harry's next theory prove correct or will it get away with it?  RIP warning

2,169 6
6 Overheard

Loukisa is back into her lessons again. Harry now has a tougher challenge. Can he manage to dump Cho and ask Ginny? Or will there be no romance between this pair ever? Meanwhile, Draco is getting the impression that Harry fancies Loukisa.

1,660 4
7 Quidditch Scare

Now that Loukisa is with Draco, Harry and Cho are nearly at each others throats. It is the first Quidditch match of the year and unfortunately nearly Harry's last thanks to a certain someone who will mean the doom to all of the Wizarding World.

1,259 3
8 "I'm sorry, Harry."

Harry has no idea that Loukisa saved his life from the lake. He is furious, and wants to know why she never told Cho that him and Ginny were getting together. Harry sees a new side to Loukisa, but the question is, is it a bad side?

1,136 4
9 Confrontation

Ginny appears to be missing, but that is not the only problem. Hermionie gets this magazine from the muggle world and todays issue (from a few weeks back of course) about a missing model that was attacked and kidnapped by a Mallakson.

2,589 5
10 An Affair Between Friends

After the magazine shock and Ginny having unusual behaviour habits, they must now think of a way to get rid of her, but Draco and Loukisa are having some 'alone' time and there is a familiar scream attatched to a far worser problem.

3,144 5
11 Truths Revealed

Ginny is back to normal, but unfortunately Harry is desperate to show everyone that Loukisa is the Kirdania/Mallakson, but how will Draco take it (his one true love- the evillest the world has ever seen). New truths are revealed, but how serious is it?

3,629 4
12 Not-Partners-in-Crime

This is getting to the big plot of the story and we now know that: Loukisa is the monster, she wants to kill Harry and also she can shapeshift... what else is to be revealed, especially as Loukisa takes Harry to a familar place from everyone else in the world and invites somebody with them.

2,035 3
13 A Time of Forgiveness, A Time to Die

Harry has just vanished into another side of a wall, and Ginny remembers that room, but where? Meanwhile Voldemort is about to kill Harry, can anyone stop him, or will a past story just save his life?

RIP warning

2,088 1
14 A Macabre Ending

Loukisa has gone loco and Harry is missing with her. Can they find him before Salazar is resurrected from the stone or will the world be forced into a prochecy that they sahll never return from? NOTE: This is not the final chapter to this story!!!

3,807 1
15 Payback

Salazar is back in power and Voldemort lies dead in the Chamber of Secrets. But that's not all going wrong: Dumbledore is spotted by Loukisa who hates him because... read and see.

RIP warning (wave goodbye to a well known character within the book and the unexpected twist in doing so ;) )

2,929 1
16 An Unsolvable Mystery

McGonagall is gone, or is she? Harry has a strange dream and him and the others are trapped in a dungeon and discuss what's going on. But Loukisa's after more than just total control and payback on Dumbledore.

2,410 1
17 What Dreams Are Made Of

The clock is ticking and someone's life by the end of this is coming to an end, but who is it?
New secrets on Loukisa's history are revealed, some of which are about to get much worse.
Harry and Hermionie find the cave which Loukisa sent them to, while Ron and Ginny get reinforcments. But who is that cave person, and do they know them?
Look out, because Loukisa is going to show her true colours... which mean bad news for Salazar Slytherin and perhaps Harry's life is in her hands also?

7,224 1
18 The Consequences of Futility

Harry is worried for the fate of the world; magical or not.
Loukisa is about to rule and kill everything that gets in her path. Harry is first on her list. Will Harry give her the potion or will the world's fate be sealed?
This is the final chapter.
RIP warning.

6,179 1


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