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Lupin, Snape, Sirius, Lily, James, Pettigrew, OC
Primary Relationship
Secondary Relationship(s)
Humor, Romance
Mild Language, Mild Violence, Scenes of a Mild Sexual Nature
Story Reviews
Work In Progress (WIP)
First Published
2006-08-08 6:57pm
Last Chapter
2008-01-16 10:00am
Last Updated
2008-01-16 10:00am

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Ch. # Chapter Title Word Count Reviews
1 Train Rides and Trolley Tripping

The inro to the story. You get to know the main characters. ----SNIPPET---CRASH! Lily had collided with the food trolley, sending her flying over it. She shrieked as she hit the floor, and felt various candies, sweets and morsels landing on top of her like raindrops. She blindly tried to get up, her vision was obscured by something creamy smeared all over her face, but her feet slid in the mess of food on the floor, and came crashing down again. Students laughed as they watched the popular social-success Lily Evans slipping and sliding around on the floor.

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The rest of chapter1, Lily asks out Michael Tanner, James and Lily bicker. we always like that... hehe. SNIPPET--“How on earth did YOU become head boy?” James grinned arrogantly and rumpled up his hair. “What a marvelous year this will be, eh, Evans? Us working side by side, students listening to our every command-,” “Students already listen to your every command, because you’ll hex them if they don’t!”Lily said waspishly, standing up and putting her hands on her hips. 

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3 The Cat's Out of the Bag

Lily finds out the maruder's biggest secret. ---SNIPPET--- "GET HER OUT!” Sirius roared, and then transformed into the black dog, fending off the werewolf once more. “Tell me what’s going on!” Lily demanded, after James let go of her. “How on earth are you and Sirius animagi? Who’s the werewolf? Is-oh my god- is it Remus?”

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4 Bitter Little Woman

Lily and Michael go on their date in Hogsmeade, James and Sirius spy on them.----SNIPPET----They were four inches apart… three… two…and then Lily saw something over Michael’s shoulder that made her come to a screeching halt. “Aww, keep going, Evans! It was getting really good! Nobody likes a cliffhanger, you know.” James said arrogantly. “Are you, like spying on me or something?” Lily  picked up James’s mug off the table and dumped the contents onto his head.

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5 Exploding Sauce with a Side of Parmesan Cheese

Lily goes to Petunia's wedding. ---SNIPPET---“YOU’RE RUINING MY WEDDING!” Petunia roared. Fuming, Lily yanked open the refrigerator and pulled out a container of parmesan cheese, took off the lid, grabbed a handful and threw it in her sister’s face. “There. Now you’re ready to be served! To table thirteen, Caesar!”

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6 Maybe a Lot of Therapy...

James tries to pick a fight with Michael, Lily pushes James into the lake. ***SNIPPET****“You’re foul and arrogant and conceded!” With every word she said, she pushed James backward. “And mean, and cocky and pig-headed!” And she gave a final almighty shove, and James fell backward over the bank, and into the freezing lake, breaking the flat water with a magnificent SMACK!

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7 Our Grand Adventure

Lily and James sneak out of detention--SNIPPET--“Come on. You look like you need a little adventure.” James grinned.Lily blinked. “What is that supposed to mean?” The raven haired boy shrugged. “You’re just a little sheltered. You come with me; it’s one less minute you haven’t lived.” Lily didn’t know what kind of spell she was under, but suddenly she felt a rush of adrenaline pumping through her veins.

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8 I love Lily

Michael and Lily make up, (don't hate me!) Michael lets slip the "L" word. Quidditch match, and at the end, someone gets seriously injured, leaving Lily heartbroken.

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9 Insolent Egotistical Playboy

the PRANK that Sirius played on snape, lily blames james for michael's accident, and a bad surprise at the end.

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10 It's Going to be Alright

How Lily handles the bad news, Peter accidentally lets slip to Remus what Sirius did to him. ****SNIPPET***** “Several houses were destroyed by Death Eaters, and many innocent families lost their lives that night.” said Dumbledore. “No…,” Lily whispered, beginning to shake uncontrollably, “Please…,”----“I think you’re lying.” Remus now glared at Sirius. “Tell me what’s going on!” -----Lily was screaming now. “DON’T YOU KNOW WHAT IT’S LIKE TO LOSE SOMEONE YOU LOVE?”

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11 I'm Done Here

Eh.. it's a short chapter...but thats all right! ****SNIPPETT****“I can’t believe you would even put me in a position like that!” Remus gripped his fork so tightly that his knuckles were white.“Mooney-,” James began, slowly, not expecting this kind of outburst from his kind, timid, quiet friend.“No!” Remus interrupted him. “Mooney, you need to calm down!” James said. “No.” Remus stood up. “I’m done here.”

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12 Just Don't

Lily spends Christmas with Alice and her family, and at their annual ball, things are said and done that will never be erased.  ***SNIPPET** "You don't have to be so strong all the time, Evans," James said quietly. "Yes I do," Lily whispered, "I don't know how to be anything else," "Just do what you feel," James whispered back. He was closer now.Lily did not know what was happening to her. She felt so peaceful right here in this hallway, inches away from James Potter's face. She had the strongest urge to...

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