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Lupin, Sirius, Lily, James, Pettigrew
Primary Relationship
Secondary Relationship(s)
James/Lily, Remus/OC, Sirius/OC
General, Humor
Mild Language, Mild Violence
Story Reviews
First Published
2006-07-17 7:40pm
Last Chapter
2006-10-17 3:52pm
Last Updated
2006-10-17 3:52pm

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1 Returning to Hogwarts

“And,” Sirius said, suddenly looking more excited, “We can have our own set of rules. Not stuff like ‘keep your hands and feet to yourself’ but like, commandments of what is expected of a Marauder. Like, the Ten Commandments of a Marauder or something.”

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2 The First Commandment

“Sod off, Potter,” Lily snapped, “You have a name for yourselves? And a list of Commandments?” “Yup,” James grinned. “You are such a morons!” Lily spun on her heels and began to walk off. James stood up. “Wait!” he called after her, “I need to ask you out!”

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3 The Second Commandment

“What?” Remus asked, “You guys are only making rules that go against me!”

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4 The Third Commandment

"Look at Deer Boy’s plate.” Sirius said in a hushed tone. Remus sat up and looked over at James’s plate. Remus gasped and ducked under the table with Sirius. This behavior was not normal for Remus. Lily Evans and a couple of other people in the school were watching with curious eyes. James was looking around for Remus pointlessly, having not seen him duck under the table with Sirius.

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5 The Forth Commandment

“Give me the Commandments so I can write the stupid rule.” he snapped. “Fine. But they aren’t stupid Moony,” James said handing the parchment over. Remus dipped his quill into his ink that he had left out and wrote the forth commandment of the Marauders

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6 The Fifth Commandment

“Just wondering if James ever made it to one bottle of butterbeer,” Lily said flipping her hair over her shoulders. James shook his head. “It was firewhisky I was drinking, actually,” he corrected. The girls laughed again.

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7 The Sixth Commandment

“How many times am I going to tell you to stop asking me that?” Mcgonagall asked. “Till you answer yes,” Remus said honestly. Mcgonagall walked towards the Marauders, frowning.

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8 The Seventh Commandment

James said nothing. He just began laughing. Laughing very hard. Peter began to fear for James’ sanity and Remus just watched in shock. Sirius thought James sounded like a hyena and was very glad that no one was around to listen. It was not attractive. When James wouldn’t stop, after five minutes nonetheless, Sirius kicked James.

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9 The Eighth Commandment

“You know how today is Peter’s birthday, well he got a HUGE box of candy from his parents. I mean, it’s literally filled with every type of candy in existence. He doesn’t want to open it up without the rest of us so we can all pig out!” Sirius said, and began tugging Remus’s arm away, but Remus shook his head.

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10 The Ninth Commandment

“That isn’t fair. I’m a Prefect,” Remus said, pouting. “But you’re also a Marauder,” Sirius winked.

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11 The Tenth Commandment

“What? That’s not fair!” James cried as Sirius ran up to the dorms and grabbed the list of Commandments from a table between the beds. He ran downstairs again with some ink and a quill. He quickly wrote down the newest Commandment before James could grab the quill from his hand. Remus would only be able to hold him back for a while before James got clever and wiggled his way out.

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12 The Eleventh Commandment

The final chapter!!

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