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The story of Aris Finity, who is a year younger than harry and the gang, so he is in the same year with Ginny and Luna. Me and my sister are doing linked stories. Her story is called Inescapable Truths. Her penname is pago diablo. To get the whole story, you will need to read both. Please R&R. This is the first story I've ever written and i need reviews to get better. Every chapter has been edited so that they no longer suck.
A second chance
This is the second edition of the tale of Aris Finity
The antagonist is introduced in this chapter, but we have yet to learn her name. She's the girl on the right side of the banner. Even though Aris is the protagonist, this girl is still the most fun character to write.
In this chapter, Aris has an eventful ride to Hogwarts. Once he gets there, he finds out many people's names, including his nemisis. Aris and Christina and the entire year is sorted, and there are a couple of suprises here.
It's all even
Aris gets settled in with his roommates and has some adventures with them. You will find out that he is compassionate when someone is being bullied.
All Too Familiar
Aris looked over the test and was dumbfounded. It consisted of fifty four questions of which Aris knew precisely diddly-squat. He decided to guess at a few, but when he realized that this was futile, he took to joking around in his answers. One of the questions was “What is Professor Lockhart’s greatest ambition?” Aris laughed and wrote, “To make his own brand of hair care products.” Not even Professor Lockhart could be that stupid.
Trouble Finds Me
In this chapter, Aris and Rickey go looking for trouble. Aris also is slowly becomming a better and better duelist. This is a chapter of action and climax.
Mission Impossible Too
Finally, after much anticipation, the plan of sneaking into the girls' dormatory is under way. Find out what will happen along the way, and witness an end result you will never see coming. It is not the destination, but the journey that makes you who you are.
The Envy of Hags
Christina's back! Aris has to make up Charms with Flitwick, whom he has just gotten into trouble with, and then has an incredibly pointless DADA class in which he cheeks Professor Lockhart. In the midst of this, a new girl appears to want to be his friend.
If At First You Don't Succeed...
The boys' first attempt to raid the girls dormatory was an outright failure. This won't stop Rickey from trying again. Now that he knows how to disable the traps, he's well on his way to clipping a success to his belt, or so he thinks. Aris disagrees. He doubts that Rickey will succeed in winning a peak at the girls in the dorm, and would not be interested even if he were successful. Nevertheless, in this chapter, we witness the true bond of friendship between two completely unlike characters.
Try Try Again
I hate writing summaries. There is no way that I can write this so that it doesn't ruin the entire chapter. Aris' friendships are put to the test, as are Rickey's. There, it's done.
It's time for the interrogation. Dumbledore has questions for everyone involved in the raid on the girl's dormatory, including the girls who tied Rickey to a chair. No one's getting away clean. Everyone must be punished. When the headmaster get's involved, you know that things are serious.
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