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    A/N This once again has several chapters combined to make it a good strong length for you all... BE HAPPY FOR THAT!!! You may not like me after this but regardless it happened so deal with it! Two new characters are introduced in this one!

    A week after Harry's birthday everyone got they're Hogwarts letters. Yours had a very long list of books including, getting a wand even though you didn't need one. At your previous school you had been taught how to do magic without using a wand so you had never needed one. You and Harry were sitting at the breakfast table reading your letters.

    "Great another trip to Diagon Alley," you said sarcastically.

    Ally poked her head in the room, "Someone call me?"

    "No Ally we were talking about the trip to Diagon Alley."

    "WHAT!?! You mean have to go back there AGAIN!?!"

    "Is there something I missed?" Harry asked throughly confused.

    "We had to go to Diagon Alley..." you started.

    "In our first and third years..." Ally continued where you left off.

    "Let's just say the shopkeepers went through living hell..." you continued.

    "After meeting us and had to go through a year of therapy..."

    "At St.Mungo's." you finished.

    Harry looked at you both, stunned, "OK two things one: its really creepy when you do that. It's like Fred and George, only creepier. Two: You mean your the ones that made the Zonko's shopkeeper so jumpy whenever one of the kids sets off something?"

    "Zonko's? I don't know Ally was that us or Jerusalem?"

    "Wait. Who's Jerusalem?" Harry asked still very confused.

    "My old boyfriend." you answered, when you saw the look he was giving you, you quickly added, "He's just a friend now Harry. Don't worry about it I'm yours." you kissed him very lightly, and that seemed to convince him. You heard Ally and Hermione giggle and turned a slight shade of pink. "Look Harry!! The know-it-alls are actually laughing for once instead of being serious all the time!" Ally glared and Harry laughed at this.

    Mrs. Weasley walked into the kitchen, "Good morning, dears. We will be leaving for Diagon Alley in an hour so I hope you all got your lists."

    Harry asked, "So, was it you guys or Jerusalem that did that to the Zonko's guy?"

    "I think that was us." you said.

    "Bloody Hell! Did I just hear you say you guys are the ones who pranked the Zonko's guy? FRED GEORGE, COME HERE!" Ron yelled.

    Fred and George came down the stairs looking at their brother suspiciously, "What Ron?" they said at the same time.

    "You two are looking at the twins who pranked the Zonko's guy!" Ron told them.

    "Bloody Brilliant! Me and Fred tried to do that for 3 years." George said.

    "Yeah. are you two sure you don't want to be our ladies?" they said, coming up behind you and Ally and putting their arms over your shoulders.

    Harry looked at you shocked for a moment, thinking you were going to say yes before you and Ally look at each other, and say, "Yeah right!" you both put your hands in their faces and pushed them off. They looked stunned for a moment then shook it off, and sat across from you two.

    Ginny walked in and sat next to Fred, "It's really weird having two sets of twins around all the time."

    "Get used to it Ginny 'cause we're living here until we decide to move out!" you told her.
    "Oh no! Twin converse all over again! Haven't I been tortured enough with having Fred and George as brothers?" she yelled.

    "OK dears it's time to go to Diagon Alley!" Mrs. Weasley said, "Everyone gather around the fireplace!" Everyone went over to the fireplace without complaints.

    "Uh... Harry?" you asked.

    "Yea?" he asked.

    "How exactly are we getting there?"

    "Floo Network." he saw the uncertain look on your face and added, "Don't worry Emma I'll go with you." You smiled at him and layed your head on his shoulder.

    "Fred, George you two first." Mrs. Weasley said, "Then Harry and Emma; Ally and Hermione; and finally Ron and Ginny." she said the order.

    Fred and George stepped into the fireplace and grabbed a handful of powder each. They both yelled, "Diagon Alley!" and threw down the powder. They erupted in green flames and disappeared.

    It was yours and Harry's turn now. He guided you to the fireplace and you both stepped in, grabbing a handful of powder. Harry put his arm around your waist and held his other arm in the air. He looked at you and you nodded, copying him. You both yelled, "Diagon Alley!" and threw the powder down. You felt the ground below your feet disappear. When your feet hit solid ground, your knees buckled and you fell, Harry caught you and guided you out of the fireplace quickly. A few seconds later Hermione and Ally walked out of the fireplace. You looked up at Harry, "If I never do that again it will be to soon." you told him. He laughed slightly. You looked up at the shop you were flooed into and saw that it's a joke shop and Fred and George are behind the counter.

    "Right, now where do you want to go first." he asked you.

    "Um... How about the wand shop, so I can get my wand first." you answered.

    "Olivander's it is!" he said, steering you out the door, down the street, and into a shop on the right.

    "Mr. Olivander!" Harry yelled. You heard wheels on a hard floor and a old man with straggly white hair appeared on a ladder in one of the isles.

    "Ah Miss Hue." he said, "I suspect you need a wand."

    "Yes, please." you said politely.

    He started looking through shelves, "Ah here we are, try this maple unicorn hair 10 inches." he said, handing you the wand. You swished it and a glass of water broke spilling water over a bunch of wands. "No, No." he said, taking the wand back, he began searching again. You tried another 3 wands all of them ending terribly. Finally Mr. Olivander pulled out a wand, "Willow Phoenix Feather 10 1/2 inches." he said, handing it to you. You felt a warm sensation when you took it. "Ah that's it." he said. You payed for the wand and walked out of the shop.

    "Hey, Phoenix Feather, just like me." Harry said, pulling you closer.

    "Yeah its strange." you said.

    He led you into the robe shop and got your measurements. He then led you into the cauldron shop where you bought a cauldron. "Harry can we go to Zonko's next? I want to see if the shopkeeper remembers me." you asked.

    "Sure." he replied. He steered you into a shop to the left. You saw a man standing at the front desk.

    The man looked up at the couple in the doorway, "Ah hello Mr. Potter." his gaze turned to you and his face paled. "YOU!" he shouted, "OUT BOTH OF YOU!"

    "Yea I think he remembers me." you told Harry, laughing, "Time to go."

    You and Harry walked into the owlery where you see a familiar dark-brown haired head. "Jerusalem?" The boy turned around and saw you immediately.

    "Emma?" he said. At this you saw a girl with blue-gray eyes like yours and red hair. She ran to Jerusalem's side. He wrapped his arm around her waist.

    "Katie." you said hotly.

    "Half-sister." she said coldly, glaring at you.

    "Wait. You know each other?" Harry asked.

    "Yes, Harry we do, in fact we're half-sisters." you said still looking at your sister. "Come on Harry we can come back with Ally later."

    As you turned to leave you heard Katie behind you, "Your going to Hogwarts aren't you?"

    You turned around quickly, "Shut it Katie!" you said blasting her with air.

    She waved it away and blasted a fire stream at you. You winced as it hits you, flinging you against the opposite wall. "Temper, Temper. You never really could control it could you?"

    Harry rushed over to you, "Emma are you OK?" he asked worriedly.

    "Yea just a little burned." you replied, "Let's go Harry."

    He helped you up and you followed him out of the store. You both went straight to Flourish and Blotts and immediately saw Ally. You and Harry quickly walked over to her and Hermione. Ally looked up from her book and saw you all burned up and started to get worried. "Emma, What happened!?!"

    You said one word, "Katie."

    "What!?!? You mean she's here. Where is she I'm going to give that prat a piece of my mind!"

    "Uh... who's Katie?" Hermione asked quietly.

    "Our fire control half-sister." you said coldly. Harry touched your arm lightly making you wince.

    Your twin saw you wince and brought you into a quiet corner. She spun water from a glass in her hand. She ran the water over your burns and they started to clear up. "Thanks, Ally." you told her, "Have you gotten your owl yet?"

    "No, why?"

    "I saw twin snowy owls in the owlery. We could get them and they're both boys to go with Hedwig." you said, eying Harry who has a thoughtful look on his face.

    "Well that sounds good to me. Lets go!" Ally said, pulling Hermione toward the owlery. When you walked in you instantly spotted Katie again and Katie saw you.

    "Aw! Did you wun and tell you twinny siswer I was picking on you." she said in an annoying baby voice.

    You clenched your fists feeling your anger rising. Harry wrapped his arm around you whispering, "Easy Emma."

    "Oh and you brought your widdle boyfriend too!" she threw a giant air wave at you, sending you across the room and hitting you against the wall. You hit your head and landed on your arm, instantly breaking it. You held your arm as Harry rushed over to you.

    "Emma?" he said, "Are you OK?"

    You moaned, "Apart from a broken arm and a splitting head ache, I'm just peachy Harry." you said sarcastically. "She shouldn't be that powerful! She has to be getting help from a stronger power source!" you looked up at him suddenly scared. "She might be working with Voldemort. Last time I saw her was a year ago and she could barely conjure a fireball in her hand let alone conjure a air blast big enough to break someone's arm." you winced again. "Harry go help Hermione and Ally." you told him, "I'll be fine." He kissed you and then stood up walking over to Hermione and Ally he started firing spells and curses at Katie. You gathered as much power as you could and put up a one way shield in front of your friends. They noticed the shield and looked back at you. You kept the shield up for 10 minutes before the power overwhelmed you and you blacked out...


    "Harry? What happened?" you asked your voice layered in worry after seeing him sitting next to you looking destressed after waking up. You reached out your hand and touched his arm and you saw him wince. This made you even more worried. "Harry, what happened to you, Hermione, and Ally?"

    He sighed, knowing you'll never give up until you know, "Are you sure you want to know Emma?" he said rather sadly.

    Your heart plummeted when you heard the sadness in his voice. You gulped, now not sure whether you want to know or not, "Yes Harry." your voice said before your brain cpuld think about it to much.

    "Alright, we were winning at first because Jerusalem wasn't helping. Then I hit Katie with a particularly nasty leg locking curse and he started helping." Your heart practically stopped beating. You knew what magic Jerusalem was capable of when he was angry, especially when someone hurt his girlfriend. You had watched him use his magic on a boy just for playfully hitting you on the arm.

    You gasped, "Harry, you are alright, Aren't you?"

    "Its not particularly me I'm worried about. Its Hermione and Ally." once again your heart stopped at the mention of Ally's name and Harry being worried about her. "Ally was battling element against element with Katie and she was--she was hit with a fire blast that knocked her all the way across the room and into the front desk." he seemed reluctant to keep going, and looked at you with pleading eyes to let him stop. You looked at him sternly and he sighed again before continuing. "Her head hit the corner of the desk and knocked senseless immediately. Her head was bleeding, Emma." you gasped and he sat next to you and held you for a few minutes before continuing. "Jerusalem conjured some knives and enchanted them to fly at us. Three were aimed directly at Hermione, but only one hit her. In--in the stomach." He was close to tears now and you knew this must be hard for him to tell you. "Another three were aimed at me. One hit me in the shoulder, as you can see I can't use that arm very well. Another hit me in the chest, but I saw power coming off of you and into me and it healed that one quickly. The third missed completely and almost hit you." there were a few tears streaming down his cheeks and you gently brushed them away. "I thought I was about to loose you. But luckily it missed because Jerusalem enchanted it to miss you. Apparently he still cares about you." he said, a slight bit of anger in his voice.

    He was finished so you asked him the question you dreaded getting an answer to, "Harry? Where are Hermione and Ally?"

    "Hermione's upstairs sleeping." he replied.

    "And Ally?" you asked quietly, dreading what the answer was even though you didn't know what it was.

    "Ally," he said his voice faltering. He looked at you with sympathetically, and tears in his eyes. "Is--is in St. Mungo's. She nev--never woke up af--after we came back. The doctors there think shes in a," he paused and looked at you. Sadness was shining in his brilliant green eyes. "a coma." he finished.

    You broke down there in Harry's arms. "No," you sobbed in to his chest. "This isn't happening. I can't loose Ally." you sobbed uncontrollably. Harry wrapped his arms tighter around you and stroked your back comfortingly. You were thankful to him for that one moment. He was there for you when you needed him most and he didn't show signs of leaving any time soon. "I want to see Hermione." you said suddenly. Harry didn't say anything. He just helped you up the stairs with his arm around your waist, into Hermione's bedroom.

    She was awake and as soon as she saw you her eyes filled with sorrow. "Hermione, glad to see your up." Harry said stiffly. He still had tears in his eyes.

    "Hi Harry. Hi Emma." she greeted you both with tears forming in her eyes.

    You immediately ran over to her side, leaving Harry to walk up behind you. "I'm sorry." you told her, embracing her tightly. She winced slightly before hugging you back.

    Mrs. Weasley came bustling into the room, not looking as cheerful as she usually did. "Who wants to go she Ally?" she asked. You immediatly said yes and were off to your room to change into your clothes.

    You were standing in front of the fireplace thinking about how dreadful the floo ride there is going to be. Harry was standing next to you his arm comfortingly around your waist. You stepped into the fireplace with him and took the floo powder from Mrs. Weasley. You closed your eyes and yelled, "St. Mungo's!" before throwing down the powder and being transported to the hospital.

    Mrs. Weasley walked to the front desk and talked to the healer there. She told you the directions and you walked down a hallway and into a room that contained two beds, but only one is occupied. Laying on the far bed was you dear twin sister. You felt tears coming to your eyes again and Harry hugged you against him. You walked over to her bed. Taking her hand in yours you quietly pleaded, "Ally if you can hear me please wake up. Please. I don't want to loose you like I lost Mum. Please wake up." As if she could hear you. You got a vision from her. You saw her sitting on a couch in a school you didn't know with you. She was talking to you, comforting you. You hadn't passed out or anything so Harry just saw you staring off into space with glazed over eyes and started to worry. "Emma?" he asked, touching your shoulder. You came out of your trance when he touched you, tears spilling over your cheeks. You knew then that Ally was going to be all right. As you turned to go you saw someone in the doorway that made your anger rise.

    There standing in the doorway was Jerusalem. Before you could do anything Harry and Ron both had their wands at his throat. "What are you doing here?!?!" you screamed.

    "Emma, please." you saw the pleading look in his eye and you looked away. Harry looked at you completely shocked that you would just turn away after what he did to you.

    "What do you want? Haven't you and Katie done enough to me?" you said turning around sharply pulling out your wand in the process.

    A/N: Yes I know you probably all hate me right now for doing that to Ally but it's a significant event I promise.... When the person I based Ally off (vipergirl914 on quizilla.com) saw this part she completely freaked and couldn't believe I would do that to her... I don't blame anyone if they hate me but still leave a review that is more than one word...

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