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Chapter 1
A New Begining

Many heads turned as the Montreal sisters walked through kings cross station. Diamond was at the front, she walked with confidence, flashing smiles at all the males who were eying her with curiosity. She had beautiful shoulder length brunette hair, deep brown eyes, and a beautiful smile. She was slim and wearing a short skirt, high heels and a VERY low cut top. Behind trailed Crystal, she had glittering long blonde hair that came to the small of her back, her face was hollowed as if she had suffered something terrible but it made her look more beautiful and her big blue eyes showed pain but made you think that she shouldn’t be crossed. She dressed very different from her sister, she wore baggy jeans, a tight tee and skate shoes she had found in a muggle shop. She didn’t agree with her sisters saying ‘if you’ve got it, flaunt it.’
They walked up to the barrier that separated platform nine and three quarters from the muggle world, waited till no one was looking and slipped through it, just as tom, the barman where they had been staying, had told them too.
They approached the train and Crystal started coughing. Diamond giggled quietly as she heard her sister muster something like ‘stupid trains’ under her breath. Diamond really hoped that being at a school again would bring Crystal back out of her shell; she had hardly talked at all since the incident back home in America.
They boarded the train and went in search of a cabin. Nearly every one was packed with students. About half way down the came across one wit three first years in.
Diamond opened the door. ‘Hey midgets, out. Now’ she shot them a death stare and they grabbed their luggage, fleeing the compartment. Diamond laughed but Crystals face just remained impassive as always. They lifted their luggage into the rack with little difficulty and each spread out on one of the seats.
Diamond talked at her sister for about five minutes then gave up because Crystal was clearly ignoring her.
‘I don’t have to be here you know’ Diamond reminded her.
Crystal stared at her for a few moments. ‘I didn’t force you to come, you wanted to. Don’t try and guilt trip me it won’t work; you can go home if you want.’ She looked hurt and went back to staring at the ceiling.
‘You know I wouldn’t let you come on your own, plus it would be boring at home with no one but Ruby to talk to.’
Crystal smirked. Ruby was their younger sister and their parents favorite, she knew it as well which made her intolerable.
Crystal looked back to her sister. ‘I’m sorry, I just don’t feel like talking at the moment. I’m having cravings’ she sat up ‘can’t I just do one bit? Just to keep me going?’
Diamond looked at her with sympathy. ‘You can’t do any dark magic, not till your strengths back up. You have to be careful, Dumbledore will be watching you, he knows what happened.’
Crystal sighed and lay back down resuming her inspection of the ceiling.
A woman’s voice rang through the train ‘we will be leaving kings cross station in five minutes, please ensure you are in you compartments as soon as possible.’
Suddenly the compartment door sprang open and four boys and a girl stood in the doorway.
‘What are you doing in our compartment?’ the blonde boy at the front asked eying them suspiciously.
Diamond smirked and raised an eyebrow. ‘Your compartment?’
‘Yes our compartment, we sit here every year. Who are you? I don’t recognize you, your not Griffindors are you?’ he looked disgusted at the thought.
‘Well seeing as you asked so nicely’ Diamond said sarcastically ‘I’m Diamond Montreal and this is my twin sister Crystal, were new.’
The boy studied Crystal, he thought she had a haunting look that he thought was very attractive. ‘Aren’t twins meant to look the same?’
‘Were non-identical’ she rolled her eyes, this boy, though he was gorgeous, seemed very slow.
Doesn’t she talk?’ he motioned towards Crystal Who was sending death stares to the girl at the back.
‘Not much. She used to be loud but since the incident…’ she trailed off glancing at Crystal who had sat up and was looking at the boy with interest.
He was just about to ask about the incident when the train started to move, causing him to lurch forward, landing in Crystals lap. She let out a small gasp of shock as he landed on her and Diamonds eyes grew wide.
Crystal smirked at the boy, which greatly shocked her sister as she never showed anyone emotion anymore.
‘I don’t know you and you feel the need to sit on my lap?’ She was still smirking.
Diamond looked at her sister in disbelief, Crystal had only spoken to her since they left America. The boy stood up. ‘I’m sorry.’ He smiled a rare true smile. ‘I’m Draco Malfoy.’
‘And who are your friends?’ asked Diamond who was now looking at the dark haired boy nearest to her with a glint in her eye.
Draco followed her gaze and smirked. ‘That’s Blaise Zabini’ he nodded at the boy Diamond was looking at. He then motioned to a broad tall muscled boy ‘That’s Vincent Crabbe’ next he pointed to a short fat boy ‘That’s Gregory Goyle’ Then finally motioned towards the girl whom Crystal had started glaring at again. ‘and that is Pansy Parkinson’
Pansy smirked. ‘His girlfriend.’
Draco whirled around. ‘How many times do I have to tell you, you throwing yourself at me does not count as you being my girlfriend.’ He snapped.
Pansy looked as though she’d been slapped. Diamond laughed loudly and Crystal quietly giggled under her breathe.
‘Are you going to sit down or would you rather stand there all day?’ Diamond smirked.
The boys all sat down, Blaise and Gregory next to Diamond and Draco and Crabbe next to Diamond. Pansy was left standing in the doorway.
‘Where am I meant to sit?’ she asked no one in particular.
‘I’m sure there is space in another compartment.’ Diamond put on a large fake smile.
Pansy ignored her and walked over to Draco. She sat on his lap causing him to look at her in disgust. He pushed her off. ‘What are you doing? Go sit in Montages compartment.’
She frowned and walked to the door.
‘Oh Pansy?’ She turned around at Diamonds voice. ‘1993 called, they want their hairstyle back.’
Pansy’s jaw dropped and she stormed from the compartment slamming the door behind her.
Crystal snorted with laughter. Diamonds eyes widened then she started laughing as well. She couldn’t remember the last time she heard Crystal laugh. The four boys looked at the girls strangely then they started laughing as well.
Some time later they stopped laughing and Crystal slipped back into her quiet shell.
Gregory looked at the girls with a confused look on his face. ‘You look too old to be first years.’ He stated.
‘That’s because were sixth years dumbass.’ Diamond smirked. ‘We transferred from the Salem witches institute. Well, I say transferred we got kicked out.’
‘oh. Why did you get thrown out?’ he asked.
Diamond smiled ‘not for me to say.’ She looked at Crystal. ‘Maybe one day Crystal will tell you.’
The rest of the journey was spent with Diamond flirting with Blaise, Vincent, Gregory and Draco talking what they were going to do when they got to the castle and slagging down potter and co’ and Crystal just sat in a peaceful silence, looking out the window or occasionally listening to the boys conversation.
When they were five minutes away from the station, Diamond and Crystal went to the bathroom to change into their uniforms. Crystal put on her uniform, slung her cloak around her shoulders straightened her hair out and was ready to go, but she had to wait for Diamond to coat another layer of make up on her face.
‘Will you hurry up, the trains already stopped.’ Crystal snapped, pacing the bathroom. She was nervous. This would be the first time she was in a room full of hundreds of people since she was at the institute.
‘Ok, ok I’m coming.’ She checked her appearance in the mirror once more before gliding out of the bathroom, Crystal close behind.
They stepped off the train and walked straight into a giant bearded man. Diamond let out a small scream. The man chuckled. ‘You’re the new sixth years I suppose, wait here; you’ve got to come with me. I jus’ got to round up the first years. FIRST YEARS THIS WAY! I’m Hagrid by the way.’
Once all the first years had been found, they walked along a long path surrounded by trees.
‘Now in a sec’ you’ll get your first glimpse of the castle.’ Hagrid announced.
When they turned the corner the first years let out a gasp. Crystal looked at Diamond and raised an eyebrow at the kids’ reactions.
‘Now if you’ll get in the boats we’ll go up to the castle.’ Hagrid instructed, motioning towards the small fleet of boats at the edge of the vast lake.
Diamond and Crystal looked at the boat they had to get in disgustedly before getting in. Once they got to the school an elderly witch called professor McGonagall met them. She led them up a flight of steps and told them to wait. She returned a shot time later holding a stool and a battered hat.
‘You two,’ McGonagall pointed at the twins. ‘will be sorted first, come to the front and everyone follow me.’
They went to the front like she told them and followed into the great hall. Crystal almost froze when she saw the amount of people in the hall. She felt hundreds of eyes on her. She glanced at Diamond who was flashing smiles at all the males she caught eye contact with. Crystal glanced at the table laden with green and silver. She caught eye contact with Draco, the boy from the train, who gave her a reassuring smile.
McGonagall’s voice rang out through the hall, causing silence. ‘We will now begin the sorting. This year we have to sixth year students who have transferred from the Salem witches institute. I hope you will all make them welcome. Crystal Montreal.’
Crystal nervously walked up to the stool and sat on it. McGonagall placed the hat on her head.
‘Oh you’re an easy one to place.’ The hat whispered in her ear. ‘SLYTHERIN’ It shouted to the room.
Crystal took the hat off and handed it to McGonagall as the green table erupted with cheers. She walked over and sat by Draco who had made a space for her.
‘Thanks’ she whispered.
She turned to watch her sister being sorted. It took a while but eventually it shouted ‘RAVENCLAW’
Diamond walked confidently up to the Ravenclaw table and sat down next to a black haired seventh year.
‘At least she’s not a Gryffindor, the muggle loving fools’ Draco whispered in her ear.
Crystal giggled. ‘God forbid, were pure bloods for crying out loud!’
Draco smiled, she seemed more talkative when her sister wasn’t around. They watched the rest of the sorting in silence, getting bored quickly. After what seemed hours, the last first year ran to the Hufflepuff table. Dumbledore stood up.
‘Welcome students’ old and new, time to eat.’ He smiled at the students as the tables filled with food.
Crystal glanced at her sister who was talking animatedly with the boy next to her whilst filling her plate. Crystal looked at the food in front of her but didn’t take any. Instead she sipped slowly from her goblet of pumpkin juice.
‘Not hungry, eh?’ Draco whispered into her ear.
‘No.’ She leant back in her chair. ‘I just want to get out of this hall, people keep looking at me.’
‘That’s because your pretty’ he smiled.
‘and that’s all people see. My sister may be content with living off her looks but I’m not.’
‘I know about people only seeing what’s on the outside.’


Diamond walked up to the Ravenclaw common room with a girl named Kati she had made friends with at dinner. She didn’t usually get on with girls but she seemed cool. When they got in the common room Diamond noticed the boy who she’d been talking to at dinner sitting on a sofa near the fire. She went and sat next to him.
‘Hey Joe’ she smiled at him. She was about to move closer to him when someone dragged her off the sofa by her hair. ‘What on earth do you think you are doing?’ she asked, looking the Chinese girl who had dragged her up and down.
‘Stay away from my boyfriend bitch!’ she shouted.
‘Cho she didn’t know!’ Kati cut in.
‘He’s mine!’ Cho spat.
‘Do I really look like I care?’ Diamond smirked.
Cho slapped her around the face.
‘You did not just slap me you little whore!’ Diamond punched Cho in the face and she fell to the floor. Diamond lent over her. ‘Stay out of my way. Come on Kati.’
Diamond walked into their dormitory and collapsed on a bed, Kati lay down next to her.
‘What a bitch, I was only talking to him. How was I supposed to know, he seemed interested.’ Diamond mused.
‘She’s really overprotecting of her boyfriends. You should have seen her with Cedric Diggory, she was like a leech and she’d slap you if you even looked at him.’
‘Is that why he finished with her?’
‘No, he died just over a year ago, at the end of fourth year, by he who must not be named.’
‘Oh that Dark Lord bloke with the death eater thingy’s? You don’t hear much about him in America but he’s known. What was Diggory like?’
‘He was gorgeous. He was a Hufflepuff and they’re usually a waste of time but he was just..’ Kati sighed remembering Cedric.
Diamond yawned. ‘I’m really tired, I think I’ll go to bed.’ She walked over to her trunk and got out her small silk nightdress. She got changed and neatly place her uniform on top of her trunk.
‘Night Kati’ Diamond yawned as she got in to bed.
‘Night’ she replied as she got changed.
Diamond pulled the blue hangings around her bed shut and fell straight to sleep.


Crystal walked down to the Slytherin common room with Draco and Blaise, they were the only ones she had talked to.
Once they were in the common room Draco and Blaise headed straight for the two chairs near the fire.
‘I’m going to bed guys, I’m really tired.’ Crystal told them. They both got up and gave her a hug.
‘Night’ they said in Unisom.
She went into the sixth year girls dormitory and got changed into her pajamas. She was about to get into bed but when she turned around Pansy was right nest to her.
‘Stay away from Draco, he’s mine.’ She snapped.
‘Of course he is,’ Crystal replied raising an eyebrow. ‘he made it quite clear on the train that he’s not yours, and though I admit he is quite hot, I’m not interested, I don’t need a significant other at the moment, I have enough to deal with.’
Pansy seemed satisfied and walked out the room. Crystal sighed, she was too tired to even be bothered about Pansy. She crawled into bed and pulled the curtains shut before falling straight to sleep.

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