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why just why! AH! i hate his girlfriend

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Wonderful work! Really good.

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Good fic. 

Still a bit cliche with Miranda, but the main reason for the future break up seems realistic and coherent.

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Good and Funny... although the Miranda character is sooo cliche!  He, he...

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Hermione robed Ron the first year of his daughter... 

Ron has been VERY understanding.

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Well... Hermione never went to visit him, as she said, and her letters become short and formal, not the novels she wrote for yeras for Krum... So Ron obviously thought Hermione was tired of waiting.

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This is NOT boring as crap.  Just sayin'! As I'm reading it, I realized that I've read it before now, on some other venue. Thanks for sharing your art with us!
Loralee :)

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Wow this is really good and I love it

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It was very well written

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What is up with the ginger cat, curly haired poodle thing? It makes it difficult to read and its pretty annoying. Did someone hack you an do something so stupid?

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I liked this, but you forgot a few things that happened in the Deathly Hallows, Fred and Tonks both die.

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Amazing plz right more I was like a true j.k. Rowling story itself!!! :D

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It is totally what I've been waiting for!  I really think it shows that Ron and Hermione are inseparable!

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This is really nice story. It's even translated in latvian and first time I read it there.

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I just read the whole story from start to finish without 
stopping on my anddroid and I loved it great work

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good for ron. miranda was nothing but trouble for them. it was a great story, and very enjoyable t o read. thanks!

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I loved reading this story!!! Managed to finish it in one sitting :) I tend to prefer canons but this story changed my mind. Pretty pretty please write more *sad puppy face*!

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I've loved this story since I began reading fanfiction and re-read it to this day. Thanks for sharing your idea; not only is the plot well developed, the story is well written. Best of luck with any future stories!

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i dont believe in being rude in a review its not kind or even needed ,i give concise objective reviews and list what i liked and what i feel could do with improvement.my immortal being the exception,the juries still out on that one
while not favoring the ron/mione pairing this was guite a good story,the writing was good ,good detail ,not over done-keeps the interest without being sickly-sweet or cloying .keep up the good work

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This was a beautiful story!

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Yay! At first I thought it was going to be a wedding ring n the box!

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Go Hermione! I am thoroughly impressed with the evolution of her character!

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Ron! Be smart! Arthur pretty much told you he believed Hermione.

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Uh oh! What happened to Hannah?

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What a negative witch!

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