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I absolutely love your story!! I am really intrigued as to what has upset her. I cannot wait to read more XD 12/10

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I LOVVVE this story!

i think its awsome. and i realy reaaaly want to find out what happens.

so please finish it.

your awsome. this story is awsome.

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Oooh, cliffy! Please update soon!

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Lol, I loved that last scene Talia had with Lily and Alice! :D
I LOVELOVELOVE this story so far

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OMG, this was such an awesome chapter! Sirius was acting like such an idiot but I loved the way you wrote his anger :O
10/10

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Lol XD *Padfoot has a crush* -sings annoyingly-
Awesome chapter, I love how much you describe what Talia's like :D
10/10

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I really enjoyed reading this chapter ^^ Very awesome start!
10/10

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So I know that your probably not going to finsih this story but I have to say that your writing developed immensley during the period of this story! At first your writing was OK but it really developed.  When you first started everyone seemed young, but now they seem older.  Thank you for this story, I hope something in you makes you continue!
~LB

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UGHHHHHHHH!!!! A Cliffy????? You are evil for leaving me hanging like that!! >:-( But I loved the story anyway. My friend is posting a story for me called "Why?" R&R!!!!!! =)

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Sorry but I'm glad you liked it!  I'll check your story out!

I love this story... i can't wait for more... i hope that its good... but as i can already see... it is definatly going to be!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Thanks Evyanna...I am working on the next chapter and hopefully it will be up soon but I'm glad you're enjoying it so far :-)</i></font>

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Awesome, I love your story! but you REALLY need to update...leaving all of us in suspense like this, its just not right!~*Steph*~

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> I am back to writing and I will finish it...I promise.  Thanks Steph...I appreciate your review!</i></font>

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hello my loverly love. yes i reviewing for you. im sorry i havent read the whole thing yet but its late and i have to work tomorrow. so far its really really good. i like Talia shes a really great charcter and i cant wait to see Talia/Sirius smoochies :) i shall review again when i finish the story.

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Hey Mel, that you for reviewing...I'm glad you like Talia, she's a lot like me if you haven't noticed ;-)</i></font>

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I want the next chapter!!! Why's Talia in hysterics???!!!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> I'm sorry I know I've been neglectful but I am in the process of finishing this story and I will post ASAP!</i></font>

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I really enjoyed this, hope it'll be updated soon!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> I will update ASAP thanks for reading and reviewing!</i></font>

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WHAT?!?!? i thought it was complete!!HOW HEARLTESS CAN YOU BE????

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> I'm sorry!!!!  I promise I'm still writing!</i></font>

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OMG.  I haven't read this story in like months!  Then when I check my favorites I refound it. lol.  all I have to say is I love it and keep on writing!  

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> I will finish it...I promise :-) Thanks for reading and re-reading :-)</i></font>

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great job! I forgot what happens I'm not sure where I stopped with this story.

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Thank you!!!  I'm glad you're enjoying it</i></font>

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Wonderful!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Thanks! ;-)</i></font>

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great!The only thing is if it's Harry Potter then there can't be religion,It's like impossible or at least for me as a christion. But that doesn't matter! Great Job!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Not sure what you're referring to with the Religion part but the HP books talk about Christmas....it is a religious holiday...true :-)</i></font>

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wonderful job! Those are really long chappies!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Glad you like it!  Thank you for reviewing Ravenclaw!</i></font>

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Excellent job! 

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Thanks so much!</i></font>

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i'm re-reading this story and I have to tell you  sgsin I love it!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> I'm really happy you're loving it!  Now I just have to finish it before people start attacking :-)</i></font>

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Ah! An update!

This was brilliant, per usual. :) Poor Talia, she can't seem to get a break, can she? I can't wait to find out exactly what's going on. I really adored James, Sirius, Remus, and Peter finally becoming the Marauders again. It was great how James beat Sirius to saying sorry, and then they all just ended up on the ground. ;) I also though it was a funny little twist for them not to notice Lily's panic. Ah, I'm strange.

Can't wait for the next one, m'dear!

-Riddle Wood Lupin

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Hey Riddle! 
 Yes an update, albit a short update but oh well.  Talia has got some crazy stuff going on right now but she'll get out of it!  My fav part was definately the Marauder bonding experience, I'm glad you liked it too!!!  Hopefully it'll all link together nicely. Thanks for your review as always! :-) Moe</i></font>

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Oh no! What is wrong with her? I'm swooning at the idea of all the boys rushing to get to her, especially Sirius! I think the relationship you have going between those boys is excellent. Well done.

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Hey Barb!  Yay!  I love when you review!  Sirius is love struck and that's all there is to it.  I cannot wait for you to read the last chapter of this story...so I can tell you everything!!!!!  Thanks Barb :-) Moe</i></font>

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New chapter! *does a jig* Short, but good! As always, I loved it! I wonder what's wrong with Talia though?! And I absolutely LOVED the scene with our favorite boys in their dorm. So sweet!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> *jigging with you* I know it took sooo long...I'm horrible!!!  I know it was short but I promise the next chapter will not be!  I won't give anything away but I will tell you that this will affect quite a few people...and I was so happy (along with you) to give the boys a nice bonding scene!!!</i></font>

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