2007-02-06 22:32:47
awsome pls keep writing
2007-02-04 21:05:50
awsome keep writing plz
2007-01-21 20:12:59
i like it keep writing
2007-01-09 21:56:26
love it keep writing
2005-06-13 07:27:43
i love it keep writeing
2005-01-02 14:35:05
awsome plz write some more plz youve got a good plot and every thing if you can get this stroy done the reviews will poor in
2007-02-06 22:32:47
poor stokley. I liked hearing the backstory though. It was interesting to learn why she had to leave her old school.
2007-02-04 21:05:50
that's a new way to get music into Hogwarts, Very original
2007-01-21 20:12:59
I liked the title to this chapter, it seemed to fit. Pretty good chapter.
2007-01-09 21:56:26
Yeah for vampire powers!
2007-02-06 22:32:47
Please update this story soon i cant wait for the next instalment!
2007-02-06 22:32:47
I like it, update soon!
2007-02-06 22:32:47
I've been reading ur story and i LUV IT!!!...i like the idea of a vampire its really intersting and unique...hope u post more soon u'll have a reader here ;)
2007-01-21 20:12:59
Hmm okay, i wasn't sure at first but i can see the story building upa to something. A bit of advice? I think you need to work on Stokley. She's a good character, but doesn't seem to be strong enough yet (by that i mean well-developed). Are you comfortable with her as a character?

I also feel your Draco and Pansy are a bit too far OOC - but its your story and it is fanfic so do your thing.

Grammatically speaking - do you have a Beta? You should probably get someone to check over your story and give you some tips.

But i like what you have come up with so far, so keep posting.
2005-06-13 07:27:43
good chapter. Short, but good. I just want to ask, could she be seen in the mirror because she's only half vampire? Other than that, it seems wonderful.
2005-01-02 14:35:05
This will be wonderful. I love vampires. Gothic, vampire falling in love with Draco, sounds like me, j/k. This will be really cool though.
2005-06-13 07:27:43
im da only i readin dis stuff, update!!!
2005-06-13 07:27:43
dude ur takin so long no 1s readin dis sh*t, even if it is totally good, man im bout 2 stop readin dis. but i hv patientence (SPELLING CHECK)
2005-06-13 07:27:43
finally dude
2005-01-02 14:35:05
what the hell. dude ur slow with ur stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2005-01-02 14:35:05
Come On Lyk Hurry Up Peeze!
2005-01-02 14:35:05
Cum On Hurry Up \
2005-01-02 14:35:05
I like it! Carry on with it!
2005-01-02 14:35:05
I like it! Carry on with it!
2005-01-02 14:35:05
That was great, please update soon!

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