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Not to be rude or anything but your story has sooo many grammar problems I can hardly read it.And i bet many other people think the same.ITS CALLED SPELL CHECK!Sorry I just had to tell you.

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(By the way i dont know what dismay mena, i looked at it in teh dictionaary in English and forgotten what it meant lol)

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> HEHE</i></font>

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Not bad I like it alot but you need to work on some of your spelling

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Ya i know i do, i cnat spell that good, sorry</i></font>

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> see what i means?</i></font>

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That's preaty good! i'm interested to see what comes next.

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> I wont be uptating for a while, im on my new story now so look out for that aswell!</i></font>

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