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AWESOME!! PLEASE UPDAtE!!! I'm so sad I didn't read this awhile ago! please update great job!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Thanks for liking my fic so much! I haven't been on in some time (lol, that's an understatement!) and I sadly have nopt been working on my Severus fic. After the HPB came out, I wasn't sure what to do with it, honestly. "It" being my 'Long Before the Order' story. I am trying to decide whether to scratch it and try something else, something canon, or just ignore book 6 and finish my story my way. Anyway, thanks SO MUCH for reading and reviewing!:-)AL</i></font>

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wow i like how you have shown him growing up!great job!

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wonderful job!You write so well!

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excellent job! You're a wonderful writer!

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wow,can you speak fluent dutch? i like how you do that (incorporate other lingo's) wonderful writing job!Enthralling!

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excellent job!I like how you give reason for snape's like evilness! You have a wonderful wrting talent!

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OH NOOOO!!! WHAT WILL SEVERUS DO!!!????awww i hope we find out like why he did it and stuff!

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I'm sorry I haven't finished reading your story but i really like it! I wonder what's up with serriah.

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GR8!!! *adds 2 favorites*

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EXCELLENT!

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awesome!pleez keep it pg i like it that way! also if ud like 2 know another story 2 post this fic go to www.j-k-rowling.info/ theyve got aa fanfic place

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GREAT JOB! bit confusing but ill read more and it will probably make sense

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I hate readng abuse stories but it's kind of already known from the canon that Snape's family life wasn't the greatest. Something that bothered me was the way you have Snape attending a Muggle school. Magical people (purebloods especially) don't seem to know much about Muggles, Muggle way of life, or anything like that. They even have a Muggle Studies course at Hogwarts. Oh well, going on. 

<i><font color=#000080>Author's Response: Yeah, I was torn re: that too, but I have never read or heard of them having wizarding elementary schools, and I figured that because they don't learn Math or English at Hogwarts, they must have learned it somewhere, so I just decided to send them to private school...Maybe other wizards homeschool their offspring...I just wanted to establish that they got some sort of education somewhere...lol... Please keep reading! :)</i></font>

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This is like the first review I've left in about a million years... Anyway, at first it was a bit confusing because of the names of family members you invented by i like how you captured the child-like point of view and balanced it with the adult perspective. I can't not go on now can I? Good chapter.

<i><font color=#000080>Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing...Sorry if I confused you a bit with the names...Please keep reading! (And reviewing) I enjoy feedback.</i></font>

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Ooh there getting a little older, huh? I like that! I feel really sad about his sister too. Please update!-SLD

<i><font color=#000080>Author's Response: Yeah, I hated to do that to her...lol... Thanks</i></font>

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ooh i like it so far. i really like lucius as a little kid, hes so funny! and he grows up to be such a jerk. keep writing plz.

<i><font color=#000080>Author's Response: *laughs* Yeah, he was kind of an annoying little kid, wasn't he? Too bad he grows up to be "such a jerk" though! :) Thanks...</i></font>

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ooooh i do like this story...keep on writing! :D

<i><font color=#000080>Author's Response: Thanks...I'm workin' on it!</i></font>

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Aww ickle Snape is sweet. Too bad he grows up greasy!! :) Anyway I like it 10.10 please update soon!

<i><font color=#000080>Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it...and I did update quite a bit tonight... :) Keep reviewing, please! :)</i></font>

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Thanks for the german translation. I knew what Mein Kleiner Junge bit was but not the other word. I can't imagine Malfoy's dad letting him go to a muggle school

<i><font color=#000080>Author's Response: I couldn't either, but I figured they have to learn reading and math somewhere, and I've never read of any magical elementary schools, since everyone starts at hogwarts knowing about the same amount, so I figured I'll put him in real school and give him magical tutors...the Malforys are rich, they can afford it! lol</i></font>

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I like it.  (Not much else to say)  Keep up the good work!

<i><font color=#000080>Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try! lol :)</i></font>

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Aww ickle baby Snape!

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