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I think you could use more commas but I like that Ron is amazing 😉.

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im sorry but that was rubbish

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 graeat funny. i like what malfoy had to do . ron realy got him

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I thought this story was very good and in a way, I did wonder if Ron and Draco actaully would put a wager on that Quidditch match. I love this comment - 'â€œHey Draco, you going to finish your chocolate cake?â€ asked Crabbe looking at the retreating boy. â€œGuess not.â€ Crabbe grabbed the chocolate cake and ate it in three bites.' That is so Crabbe! I love it!

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Thank you.

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