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Great job, awesome story, and cause that you are supporting here!  Random question, what year of Hogwarts is this?  Like what year is the trio in?

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I'm so glad you like it!!! The trio is in year two cause ginny is in year one, ty for reviewing!!!   -Your Girl Fiona xoxo

Great job, awesome story, and cause that you are supporting here!  Random question, what year of Hogwarts is this?  Like what year is the trio in?

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YoU wRiTe SoNgS tOo?

I wrote one... It's called Bloody Rose... And it kinda sucks... yeah. idk if it saved, prolly in the ocean of files Ive saved over the years.

I'm currently tryna harmonize it. tHe PiAnO iS nOt CoOpErAtInG wItH Me :<
(also i might have ADHD and autism... idk tho)

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YASSS I LOVE WRITING SONGSSS I bet it'll turn out great. THE MUSIC IS MY DOWNFALL WHEN WRITING SONGS!!! I can't play piano .-. also sameee idk, I'll probably never get tested or whatever but it would make a LoT oF sEnSe so uh ye ;-;   -Your Girl Fiona xoxo

Wow! Noice Art! 

Getting kinda creeped out cause my room looks like that, but I only have one window and I don't have a TV... but still, it's so similar...

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XDDD glad you like it! And that's pretty creepy .-.   -Your Girl Fiona xoxo

I want to join the group! That's so awesome you're starting one! Love the logo (and name ofc) and totally agree about the puzzle piece being a bad symbol for the autistic community. I also write songs but they're probably nowhere as good as yours. I'm so glad you want to help people with autism, OCD, Tourette's, and more. I haven't been tested for OCD, but I have most of the symptoms and feel really good you want to help people like me. Sorry about being anonymous, I logged outta my account because there are some people I know irl here and I am not ready to tell them about being maybe-OCD.

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YESSS I'm so excited for it! I'm not quite sure when I'm gonna start it, probably in the sort-of near future, maybe in college. I'm so sorry you're going through that, I'm always here to talk if you need to. No matter what UwU   -Your Girl Fiona xoxo

SERIOUSLY MEAN GIRLS?!?! WHAT DO YOU GET OFF BULLYING OTHERS?!?!

I love hearing about Hogwarts from Cantaloup's perspective; her descriptions are funny, especially of the sorting hat! It's awesome how accepting Luna is! 

Can't wait to read more!

-BananaJewels

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I know right!!! It's so stoopid smh. Glad you like it :D   -Your Girl Fiona xoxo

I LOVE THIS STORY!

 I feel like this is exactly how Luna acts! She would say these exact things in the HP books. (Sorry lol I'm trying to explain this and am doing a horrible job.)

I LOVE CANTALOUP AND LUNA AND EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS EXCEPT FOR GINNY WHO I WOULD LIKE TO CUSS OUT!

Thanks for bringing us this awesomeness!

-BananaJewels

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Aww thank you :) I'm glad you like ittt, I'm obviously not working on it right now lol but it's one of my favorite things I've ever done also OHHH ITS YOU JASON I GET IT XDDD that didn't process with me until now XDDD   -Your Girl Fiona xoxo

cool! Where do you make all this art? I would love it if you could tell me!Thx!

love, 
 brook 😘

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I make them on pICREW (one of tHE BEST SITES EVAAAH)   -Your Girl Fiona xoxo

This is really cool. I congratulate you on finding your passion and making the steps to move forward with it. I wish you luck with everything you do. 🙂

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Thank you :) I've wanted to do this all my life. Thanks for thinking this is cool XD   -Your Girl Fiona xoxo

Heyyo! I enjoyed this chapter. It's nice to see Hogwarts from a new perspective. I also look forward to seeing more of Luna, she's such a good character that often gets overlooked. Anyways, keep it up. 🙂

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aww ty! I agree, Luna gets overlooked way too much. Ty for reviewing!!!   -Your Girl Fiona xoxo

This is so good. I love reading about Cantaloupe and can't wait to read about more of her adventures! Love your writing!

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Tysm!! I love writing about her :) Ty for reviewing!! God bless UwU   -Your Girl Fiona xoxo

This is so cool that you're taking a stand and spreading awareness! 

Also...

*whispers* 

I write songs tooo.

*Mortification= complete*

But they aren't anything as like, important, as yours! They are very very stupid lol. 

This is such an amazing story, I love it! Also, about the note in the summary, it'd be totally cool if you created a series!

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Tysm! Omg you write songs :D We should totally exchange some of ours in comments or something. No way they're stupid, if they're as good as your writing than they can't be bad XDDD I'm so glad you like it! I definitely think I'm going to make a series. Ty for reviewing!! God bless UwU   -Your Girl Fiona xoxo

Hey, just letting you know your graphic is ready!

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Awesome, thanks!

I think it's a great idea to create a group for autism! I love the new logo! Can't wait for the next chapter! I hope you are ok!

Love you!

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Tysm!! I'm excited to do this. I hope it ends up working out. I love the logo too, it was surprisingly easy to make! I'm doing great, I hope you are good as well! Ty for reviewing! God bless UwU   -Your Girl Fiona xoxo

Ooh!! You write songs? That's so cool!! How do you join the group? I really want to join it!!! Baii!!

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Tysm!!! Yeah I write songs hehe ^-^ As for joining the group, I haven't made an option for that yet :(( I'm in the process of getting my own email so that I can make some sort of group. I'm so glad you're interested!! Thanks for reviewing!! God bless UwU   -Your Girl Fiona xoxo

AWWW I feel SO bad for her right now! I love Luna so much! She is the only accepting person here! Does Dumbledore know about her autism? I loved this chapter so much! When Cantaloupe hit Luna?

Please update soon!

Love you!

EDIT: Really?!?! I thought that maybe Dumbles should know what sort of problem she has!

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Tysm! Luna is the BEST, isn't she? No one REALLY knows at the moment, but I bet Dumbledore suspects it hehe. As for your question, it happened in chapter one when the train whistle went off. Luna put her hand on Cantaloupe's shoulder and she hit it away. I will, chapter three will hopefully be out in a couple of days! Ty for reviewing! God bless UwU   -Your Girl Fiona xoxo

Edit: Ikr! I bet you Dumbles (hehe I love that) knows (okay I'll spoil it, he knows through MaGiCaL mInD tRiCkS XDDD) Also, NOT a criticism or meant to be rude in any way, but autism isn't really a problem. It's more a different way of seeing things. But I get what you mean :)

I love this!! I love how Cantaloupe is trying to be accepted. That blonde girl is so rude!! If you have nothing nice to say, don't say it!!! Luna is so nice in this!!! I love Cantaloupe's character personality!!! I also might be on the spectrum, I have some symptoms. Baii, update soon!!

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Tysm! Yeah, she's so rude, right? I love Luna too, I knew from the start that they were going to be bffs. Same! I've never been tested, but I mean like I have basically eVeRy symptom (other than a speech impediment/delay). And ya know what? I'm proud of it! Even if I'm not and I'm just a weirdo, I'm proud of that too. We shouldn't be afraid of our differences. When I'm older, I want to study autism and become a psychologist so I can help others with ASD feel accepted.  BUTTT I'm getting off track XD ty for reviewing!! God bless UwU   -Your Girl Fiona xoxo

Aw, this chapter was amazing! I hate blond girl right now. Hope you update soon!

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Tysm!!! She's supposed to be like the mEaN girl in Ravenclaw lol, I was originally going to make her Cho Chang but I figured it didn't fit her personality. I'm writing chapter three now! Ty for reviewing!!! God bless UwU   -Your Girl Fiona xoxo

Heyyo! I've appeared in the reviews of this story now. 🙂 I like it so far. I'm interested in her ticks and seeing more from this perspective. I think the writing was really strong in this chapter and you did a good job of establishing character.

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Yay hi Zealie! I'm glad you like it! I was so excited to write this story so I'm glad you like it!! God bless UwU   -Your Girl Fiona xoxo

I love it! The story I mean! Did u make these pics or what? I hope Harry's nice to her and Hermione and Ron! Not like little Gingersnaps! I love Luna so much! I wish Cantaloupe would try to get closer to her!

Please update soon! I hope your writing block finishes soon!

Love you!

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Yeah I made the pics hehe, honestly the Golden Trio don't show up much. It's more focused around Cantaloupe and her friends. GINGERSNAPS Y U BE MEAN TO CANTALOUPE lol luckily she's nice later. Luna is my favorite character too!! Yeah, poor Cantaloupe never really had a friend, so she's really hard on herself. I've jUsT gotten an idea for the next chappie, so I'll start writing it now! ~starts to leave then remembers she didn't post her reply XD~ qwq

Tysm for reviewing! I love seeing your reviews on here all the time, I love how supportive you are! It fills my heart with joy ^---^ God bless UwU   -Your Girl Fiona xoxo

I really like this! I love how she isn’t ‘normal’ (no one is normal!!)

Ginny, I’d like to blow your head off

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Thanks! Yeah, no one is truly normal. Lololol I felt the same, but she will be nice later (thank god or else I might not be able to live with her ;-;)

Ty for reviewing!!!   -Your Girl Fiona xoxo

This is really, really goood!! I love how you repeat the words sort of going down at an angle; it sort of makes it seem like a poem and really adds to the writing, which is beautiful. This is such a cool idea, and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter1
-HH

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I'm glad you like it! I've always loved that style, I read it in a book once and thought it would look cool. Thanks for reviewing! God bless UwU   -Your Girl Fiona xoxo

Very interesting. I'm not that familiar with autism and I can't really relate but I like it very much when authors take real-life problems and conditions and connect them to the magical world. It shows that even wizardkind are only people after all, not almighty superheroes without a single flaw.

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So glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing! God bless UwU   -Your Girl Fiona xoxo

This is a really great idea! I can't wait to read about Claire (Cantaloupe) and Luna!

Also, I LOVE that nickname!

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Thanks! UwU   -Your Girl Fiona xoxo

This was amazing. I almost teared up at some parts. I wish Ginny hadn't done that... I kinds feel like she wouldn't have. Ginny befriended Luna, and she was Luna's staunch supporter. 


But still! This was sooo good! I think it's fine you changed Ginny's character a little, but I really hate Ginny for it. Ugh. 

Also, Cantaloupe--You don't like gingersnaps??!!

Oh well -- opinions...

...

~Waiting

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Waiting! Hai! I'm so glad you liked it!!! Yeah, that's what I was thinking too. I didn't really want to make her like that, but I just figured she would be a bit freaked out. (Don't worry, she becomes nice again later on!) 

Hehe, I personally like gingersnaps, I just wanted to add a joke in there. 

So glad you liked it!   -Your Girl Fiona xoxo

Edit: When I first read your review I thought you said onions instead of opinions XDD

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