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I love this story! I’ve read it all in about an hour, and so far it’s amazing! Please update soon!

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Thank you!!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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Working on it now <3

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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Yay! Working on it now :)

New stooorrryry!
Anyway, James is a prat.
Loved the chapter!

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Thank you!

A new story! Yay yay yay yay! I’ll totally check it out. Anyway, this chapter is totally awesome

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Thank you!!!

It was an amazing way to show the whole scenario! I like the fact that Rory at least 'tried' to comfort lily! 

Please update soon!

Love you!

P.S. Does this mean you don't have writer's block anymore?

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Thank you! And, sort of... it sort of switches all the time, and usually I get inspo from whatever I'm reading, so if I read a golden trio era fanfic, I try to write Astra more and the other way around, but it all really depends... I'm working on the next chapter, so it should come up eventually ;)

SO sorry for not reviewing before! I didn't realize you had updated! I am pretty sure the 2 people who HAVE realized it are James and Remus! I love the way Rory is just-!!!

Please update soon!

Love you!

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Thank youuu!

She is exactly like me! I stress over stuff that I already know constantly.


Nothing more. Right?
WELL OBVIOUSLY SOMETHING MORE SIRIUS!

Anyway, have a nice day!
Cya!!

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DEFINITELY SOMETHING MORE :)) Thank you! <3

Hi! I love your fanfics, even if I have to wait, you make it worth it because your a great author!
It's kinda funny how oblivious Rory is to Sirius' feelings, and how he deny's it!
I wonder what she'll get on her  OWLS?
Lots of love, until the next one!

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Thank you! We'll have to see eventually..

Who! If I was in Rory's place about to take the exams I would be most likely on the floor shaking!
Sirius is starting to slowly fall for Rory! And the "Yet he never actually took the hint that his brain was giving him." was amazing. After all, he is not one to use his head. Great chapter!

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Of course! I'd probably feel the same way as well, thank you!

I don't know but it seems like Sirius is the one hurting her dates because it didn't seem like he went on a date when Rory met him and James at the three broomsticks. But anyways amazing chapter!

Love you!

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Thank you!

I’d say Peter or Sirius but this is a Sirius X OC book so I think it’s Sirius?
Sorry for being a day late!
Chapter was awesome as usual!

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Thank you!

I hope Rory forgives Sirius soon! Why weren't Sirius and peter inside with Remus then? even if James and Rory were out saving snape! I think it's Sirius ruining her dates, but he doesn't want the boys to get seriously injured!

Please update soon!

Love you!

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Well, it is the prank and Sirius acted really irrationally... but thank you! The next chapter is still in progress!

I think it's Pads who is injuring her dates because Peter would be to afraid of retaliation, and it also seems like the person told the dates to not talk to her.  Peter would not be intimidating enough for that.  And Prongs has eyes only for Lily.

Great chapter!  Can't wait for the next one!
Kat

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Thank you! We'll see eventually...

My brain is NOT working today because im just too tired.

Great chapter! Bad events! But very entertaing!



(Have a ever written a review without exclamation points?)

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Lol, I almost always use exclamation points... Thank you!

So I want to take a guess and say peters the one making all her dates get hurt. Either him or Sirius but I’m leaning more towards him because you keep hinting at him looking for Rory’s attention.

Anyway, great chapter

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Hm... interesting theory...

I loved this chapter so much!!! I love the way Madame Pomfrey decided to let the Marauders make all the noise they want to at that point! 

Please please pleeeassse update soon!

Love you!

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Thank you! Working on the next chapter now, so it should but up probably this weekend?

Blizzard.   Awesome.   Amazing.  Great.

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Thank you!

She wants to be a healer right? (Just checking, forgot to ask)
Awesome chapter, well done!!
I really liked the description of the transformation!

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Yes, even though it doesn't say it yet (it's sort of implied but it was also sort of supposed to be a surprise) Thank you so much!

Omg, I love this chapter. You’re doing a great job with the story so far.

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Thank you so much!

A WOLF!   BEST FORM EVER FOR HER!!  I wonder if she could talk to Remus while he was in wolf form? The process was SUPER good too! I just LOVED the whole chapter!!!

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Yesss!!! Thank you so much! <3

A WOLF! OF COURSE! OF COURSE! OH 
I LOVE THAT SO MUCH THAT IS  THE BEST IDEA EVER OMG
sorry.
Great chapter! Please update soon!

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Thank you so much! Working on the next chapter right now :)

I think that having her not as smart makes her more human, it’s much better!

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Thank you! That's what I thought too

Ugh. I hate snape. How dare he call them monsters?!?! UNLEASH THEIR PRANKING POWER!!!

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YESSS!! I hate Snape so much!!!

I LOVE IT! I want to see Rory's reaction to being a wolf!!! 

Please please please update soon!

❤️Love you!❤️

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Thank you so much!

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