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Wow, this was very interesting. I loved this chapter as much as the last one :) There was just the right balance of action and description, although I feel like the bit ain brackets ' (he was much more expressive in those days)' is slightly unnecessary. 

Just a small pointer, though :) Loved this!

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Really enjoyed this! I can't wait to keep reading - it was realistic and original... I'm trying to think of a few pointers, but I can't think of any XD Love this! You're doing a great job :)

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Thank you so much for reviewing!!! I'm so glad you enjoyed! :) :) I'm dropping a few new chapters tonight just formatting em ^.^

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