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Hey I really like this! but one thing, there's a lot of spelling mistakes. You can still read it but can you please proof read it? That's like the only thing! Good job!
-LRP

Author Response

Heloo!
Good news. I just corrected ALL of the mistakes. Well at least I hope I did. And I am writing chapter 9 right now. I'm happy that you like it.

Hey i have a Q  um are all of her books.releted

Author Response

Hi! Yes all of the chapters in this story are related. But the second story I wrote (Truth or Dare) has nothing to do whit this story. I hope I answered youre question.

Yay!! Aww I love this chapter! Cant wait for the next one!!

Author Response

Thank you. I will come soon😊

Wait but I thought Dracos mom already met Harry? Great chapter btw :)

Author Response

Ups that is possible yeah. Sorry about that. Thank you anyway for review.

Wow. I usually dont ship Drarry but I think you made me ship it lol! Great story apart from the spelling mistakes but that's fine :)

Author Response

Oooo thank you so much. You just made my day.🥰

OMGGG, love this. Can't wait for the next episode. 
They need to make up, please.

Author Response

Dont worry. They will. Thanks for all the love. It means the world to me.😊

Can you write chapter 4? Also, the spacing is better in this chapter.

Author Response

Ok chapter 4 comming soon.  Thanks btw.

And now the whole school knew that the famous Harry Potter was dating my-father-will-hear-about-this- boy.

This is the best line, lol

I fixed your spelling mistakes in that sentence, but really, the biggest problem to me is the paragraphing. Maybe do it like this:

"I love this story!" Ginny Lovegood wrote on the review.

Though she did sometimes find it a little hard to read because the chapters weren't separated into paragraphs.

I hope that helps! Happy to see new Drarry fanfic writers joining the club!

Author Response

Oh ok thank you. I will defenitly use it in the next chapter. I'm sorry because of the grammar mistakes but I am trying my best.

I love the plot, it is original. However your grammar is breaking sometimes but you are great. :D

Author Response

Thank you sooo much. I will try to correct the grammar. And chapter two is comming soon.😊

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