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I loved the chapter! as usual! The boggart scene is always SO sad!!! I just realized that Astra can just send one of the spirits to check if Sirius is home or not!

love u!

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Thank you!

AMAZING!!!

that's all.

Have a ✨DAZZLING✨ day,

Emma

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Thank you!

Yay!!!

I get what you mean with Linny. You made them so cute in Since Privet Drive. 

Well, great job! I can’t can’t can’t can’t can’t wait until the Battle of the Department of Mysteries. 

Edit: I love Ginny and Neville though.

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Same here :)

Yay!!!

I get what you mean with Linny. You made them so cute in Since Privet Drive. 

Well, great job! I can’t can’t can’t can’t can’t wait until the Battle of the Department of Mysteries.

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Thank you!

Love this!! I love GinnyxNeville, don't worry ;). Also, how do you cope with hate?? Thanks so much for writing this amazing story, don't let the haters let you down!

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Thank you! I actually haven't gotten much hate  (which I'm really thankful for) but it doesn't bother me that much because I write this story mainly for myself :) It just makes me happy that some people like it

This is so horrible. Why would you ruin HP like this?? Astra's character arc is like, horrible. She basically does nothing and no character development. Harry is a jerk in this, and I hate Luna in this. The plot is so messed up. Why do people even like this?? You should try getting a beta reader for grammar and stuff. Bye, this story has a lot of potenial!!

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Well, since you made it to the last chapter, I suppose it was decent enough :) I don't need your hate here so please take you negative energy somewhere else.

i was hoping for astra to be picked instead of harry...

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Well, in this position, Voldemort doesn't know that Astra is special in any way so...

I'm gonna start your other fanfic Almost | James Potter

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Yay! Thank you <3

Btw i'm getting a new email address so I can create an acc soon It'll  either be called Slytherclaw_Queen or Slytherclaw_Queen828

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Nice :) .

Love  it I have no words

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Thank you!

Wonderful chapter, once again
I don’t really have much else to say

Bye then

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Thank you!

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 THIS STORY!!! 10/10!

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Thank you!!

Love this as always! After I read these I think abt how stuff could have been done differently, like when she told the order. Mine aren't better, they're just diffrent

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Yeah, I think of so many possible different outcomes, but I try to stick to the canon plotline :)

you know how you used to add questions at the end of the chapter? those were fun, I would like to see them again please!





GO HASTRA! GO HASTRA! GO GO GO HASTRA!

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Hehe, I'll bring the questions back! :)

My third favorite ootp is in this chapter "What are Fred and I? Next door neighbors?"-George Weasley

My second is "The world isn't divided into good people and death eaters" -Sirius Black 

My first is "It matters not what someone is born but what they grow up to be" -Albus Dumbledore

wait is that even in ootp?!?!?!?!? ? well if not then The next door neighbors quote is my second favorite ootp quote and "The world isn't divided into good people and death eaters" is my fav ootp quote which should be in the next chapter right?

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I think it is in the next one, but it's a scene with only Harry and Sirius, so I don't think it'll be in Astra :)

ASTRA HAS THE SAME BDAY AS ME

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YAY!! .

i love this story, but I would like to see Astra make some friends, because it is a bit boring when she is always just all alone.

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Definitely coming soon :)

my fav character is Delphini Riddle from the cursed child, and I took a quiz and it said I am like luna.

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I love Luna! <3

Yea I never understood Harry’s obsession over Prefect honestly Ron gets overlooked way too much and it makes way more sense than Harry.
Great chapter!
Cya!

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Yess! And I also think Romione might have been a small factor in it... thank you!

‘The pink toad is being an a**hole again.’ 
Haha lol
This is my life.
Anyway great chapter!
Cya!

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Thank you!

Awesome chapter. 

I was hoping if that part would be there when Ron gets a letter from Percy and he's like, "He's.The world's.Biggest.Git" I love that part. 

Anyways
Love you😍😍😍

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Most likely :) Thank you!

also what if kreacher on the commands of bella tells sirius that harrys in the ministry cuz idk and sirius goes after him and gets trapped and tortured and harry see it and goes there and the dead can confirm it too and well he gets killed like that cuz if its the same as the book then theres a loophole that if astra can talk to the dead and even if its that everyone is busy its not possible cuz SOMEONE has to be free regardless of if they are in the order or not. btw im the same person that wrote that huge comment sorry for that

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no problem :) It's a really cool plotline

what if astras also in the boggart part and it says something about her powers so harry get sus and then since ron and hermione also know he kinda gets a hint of something but since hes soo oblivious doesnt pay attention and then when they go to the ministry astra asks reg or someone to check and she tells harry and he says how do u know so she just says dont u trust me and he says with my life or something at this astra blushes but doesnt think of it much but thats when she kinda starts liking him and so she slowly starts to crush on him and in hbp harry gets with ginny BUT ginny feels like she cant handle harrys fame and they have a fight cuz someone tries to hirt ginny cuz of harry and then astra steps up to harrys side and knocking some sense into ginny but harry feels that ginny isnt the one cuz she doest understand what its like but astra does so he falls in love with her againand in the dh novel they slowly get together.

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wow. that isn't exactly what I had in mind but it's REALLY good

Please forget the comment I gave on the other chapter of my favorite quote in OotP being Bill's line! My favorite is this one: "What are Fred and I, next-door neighbors?" said George indignantly, as his mother pushed him aside and flung her arms around her youngest son.!!!

love u!

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Thank you! I love and hate that line all the same :(

Good job!

Am I the only one who thinks Astra watching Harry is a little ... er ... sketch?  ; )

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Oh, most definitely. Astra is overall a really sketchy and suspicious person, even if you know her, she's always got something up her sleeve, and now she has to keep an eye on Harry :)
Thank you!

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