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I agree with Sirius of course they would of made it onto the team! Also I like that tonks has a slight crush on remus it's cute because they are also one of my favourite ships
Lots of love 
Tilly x

Author Response

Giving Tonks a childhood crush was so fun to write, and Sirius is so supportive. I swear I’m working on the next chapter it’s coming

YES!!! this chapter was just...amazing! Personally, I was hoping that harry becomes a seeker from the beginning, or were there no seekers for the junior league??? still, this story is just the best. I cant wait until the next chapter comes out!

(I'm pretty sure you can tell I'm very excited right now!)😂

When is the new chapter coming???

Author Response

The only reason he’s not seeker is because I wanted to write him and Dudley as a team later. I’m working on the next chapter I know what it needs so it should be soon
Thanks for reviewing 
Ps. You read this whole thing in a day?!? I’m honoured.

Ooh, Remadora! Though to be honest it felt a bit more awkward here, lol. Apart from the odd spelling mistake or two (incantation, not incarnation and quite, not quiet) this was brilliant!

Author Response

I’ll go fix up those mistakes, thanks for pointing them out. I’m sorry if you’re a Remadora shipper, it won’t be a big detail I promise I just thought in this world it could be a childhood crush she learns from.

Yay! You updated! Wasn’t Hermione’s parents dentists? On second thoughts PLEASE DON’T GET RID OF LARRY HES AWESOME! Really good, it’s so cute!!! When will the next chapter be out?
CLAPP x
EDIT: Oh okay of course.

Author Response

I updated early, woohoo. Larry is Hermione’s Grandfather/Granddad her parents are still dentists. Next chapter is already written so it should be up soon(ish) I just need my friend to tell me it makes sense 
Thanks for reading

Love it. Thet are so cute when they are trying to work out what to draw. It's also nice the added a sign that lily and james where there. 
Thanks
Lots of love SpaceTilly x

Author Response

The boys really are adorable, thanks for reviewing

Eeeek! They're all so cute! I love how they were discussing what to draw as a picture of their family! However, I'm guessing this is set in England and in England, we call it 'break' or 'breaktime' rather than 'recess'.

Author Response

Oh thank you for the British correction. I’ll put that in now. The boys really are cute, this entire story is just me writing fluff without much plot. I’m halfway through chapter 5 so next update might be quick.

Ee!
I can't wait for them to go to school and meet new friends, also I love the idea of  Harry meeting his Hogwarts friends at a young age it would be so cute!
And Luna's mum is alive! 😄😭
I LOVE it!!!

Author Response

Harry having friends is one of my favourite parts of this au. I just want everyone to be happy. 
I feel so bad for future Luna, but for now she can be happy and not  alone. 
So glad you love it

Hahahahaha I love the cake!! This is great, is your schedule updating every 2 days?
EDIT: haha siriously lol! Yeah I get the burning out thing.

Author Response

Unfortunately no, I’m aiming for every six days. (I’ve tried every 2 I gots seriously/ Siriusly burned out)

Yes Hermione! I'm so glad shes a muggle born! Also moonpie! Sirius will take a great pleasure in teasing remus about this. 
Thanks cant wait for the next update
Love SpaceTilly xx

Author Response

I’m so glad hermione is muggle born too, I’m so excited. Poor Remus will never hear the end of Moonpie

Next update will be Saturday for me and then provided I can keep it up new chapters every 6 days.

I love this sequel to 'Sirius Makes a Choice' but my favorite part is when Petunia and Remus win the argument and the boys are allowed to go to kindergarten.

Author Response

Remus and Petunia teaming up is so fun to write. Hope you enjoy the rest

Yes! Young Hermione, yes! Moonpie, (haha), yes! Write more really soon, please!
This is great can’t wait for more!
Pygmy puff x

Author Response

This chapter was adorable (If I do say so myself) Young Hermione is conveniently at the school, how lucky. chapter 3 is prewritten so I don’t have to stress. It will be coming on Saturday

OMG. I have been waiting for you to write this story Sirius makes a choice was my favorite and your my favorite author. I can’t wait to see how this story turns out!😁❤️😁

Author Response

Hi, 
I’m so happy you’re excited. This story is a mix of Harry and Sirius’ POV and I’m loving writing it so far. Next chapter (3) is out in 6 days 
Have a good day

Yes! Young Hermione! This is amazing! You never fail to surprise me.

Author Response

Young Hermione is so cute. She’s going to Harry’s school (how lucky) so she’s not going anywhere

Hi again! 
I have been waiting for ages for this and I have been so excited! I love it when Sirius doesn't believe petunia when she says the kids can go to kindergarten. Also when harry talks to his parents when no one is around is so sweet! 
Thanks for continuing the story and I cant wait for the next update! 
Lots of love SpaceTilly 
P.s I also hope you are getting on well at uni!

Author Response

Hi Tilly, 
I’m doing good in Uni, it’s why I felt up to posting this. 
I love the family antics they really do love each other. 
Chapter two will go up in 2 days from when I’m replying. I had it done before I released chapter 1. I’m trying to keep a schedule for at least 1 story haha. 
Hope you’re doing good

I'm so excited for this!!! I love how they're acting like a normal family, arguing about tiny things and it made me smile when Petunia took out the cake.

Can't wait for the next update!
Pomona :)

Author Response

I love writing these guys like this,  and the idea there was already a cake there because Petunia knew she’d get her way. 
The second chapter is already finished (look at me being prepared) it’ll go up in 6 or 7 days because I don’t want to end up having nothing written for long periods of time so I’m pacing myself.
Thanks for the review

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