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Hello =) I think it is high time you review on Nothing Is Everything’s story. You know... the one called Harry Potter Characters Looking Dumb? Does that name ring any bells Nafsika Christopoulou? You filled out a form a while ago and Nothing Is Everything took his/her time to make what you requested. You have not reviewed which means you haven’t even looked. How would you like it if you did that for Nothing Is Everything and they didn’t review on yours? I don’t think you would be to happy. Nothing Is Everything is way too kind to write this sort of review so I have decided to do it for him/her. Many thanks Hufflepuff Hugs.

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Sure thing! Sorry :(

Hello I'm Vasilis! I read the initial edits of the novel and it's truly AMAZING! I really think you should publish this book.maybe you could even do one more continuing this way. By the parts I read, I immediately understand how long it would've taken to write this and the effort in it! FANTASTIC use of words and sentences.this is truly amazing well done! I look forwards to it!

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malfoy. lucius malfoy. wat. is. happenig. at. hogwarts. are they crazy?




































































- imogen

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I'll tell you why! You see, McGonagall was still wallowing the death of Professor Dumbledore, and she knew that he was known for giving many people second chances. That's why she chose to hire Lucious Malfoy; to 'avenge' Dumbledore in some sort of way.

Perfect end to the perfectly enjoyable chapters! I love this story! The character adaptations were perfect!

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This was a lovely chapter! I know I'm not reading nearly as much as I should, but I have no intention of ditching you or this story :) 

I also wanted to give you some general advice because I notice you're looking for reviews. This should help - at least, it helped me. 

So here are a few ways of increasing the number of reads and reviews on your book. 

1) Read other people's stories. This might seem silly, but it's the most effective way of building up an audience. The more active you are in the community, the more you review other people's books, the more people are likely to return the favour. In other words, you get out what you put in. 

2) Update regularly, but not too regularly. Obviously, the books at the top of the read page are more likely to be seen by other users, but it's also true that people tend to get tired of seeing the same books at the top each time. It's also hard to keep up with reading if the author updates the book every second. You could try updating once or twice a week, so that people know you're still active. 

3) Keep writing! Once you’ve finished a book, it’s tempting to just put your feet up and have a rest. That’s absolutely fine, but you’re not likely to build your audience if you’re not releasing new material. You could try using writing prompts if you’re stuck for ideas, or you could write short stories - there’s no rule that says you have to keep writing novels. 

4) Make sure your story is as engaging as it can possibly be. Not just with sentence length or summary, but in terms of chapter length and paragraphing. Make sure everything flows and is easy to read. A beta-reader can help you with this, especially if you share some kind of document with them. It’s hard to make suggestions in a review, as I’ve discovered XD 

I hope these tips are somewhat helpful :) You could also try engaging with the forums - that’s a great place to ask for reviews and find people who are willing to review your story. 

Keep doing what you do! If you need encouragement, I’m always here. 

~ Lacy

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Hi...I think this story might be broken or something? It's glitching really badly and somehow it keeps saying you've updated when it's already completed...?

It's really good by the way, and thanks for entering into Dumbledore's Awards!!

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Thanks! 
I finished it a while ago so I don't know why it's doing that... 
I'll check with the site and things, so maybe we can fix that...
Thanks for noting!

I'm back! And I intend to haunt you forever XD 

Nope, I'm only joking. 

I really enjoyed this chapter :) I'd definitely suggest breaking it up a bit more. Or finding an editor/beta-reader. If you need any help, I'm happy to edit bits for you - just ask! 

The plotline, though, is brilliantly original and I still don't understand why this doesn't have that many readers. You have loads of talent! 

By the way, I just thought I'd mention that the website doesn't seem to work. I tried it the other day and apparently it isn't safe :( Which isn't great because I was curious to see what it looked like and now I can't. 

Anyway, I'm going to move onto the next chapter. Love this! 

~ Lacy

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Hi again! I know it must have been a bit of a time ago, but congrats on 10,000 views on one of your books! I'll make sure to try and fix the link if you want to see it! 
;)

Hi Nafsika! It's Fiona :) I haven't actually read this yet but I'm totally going to! Also, I tried to go on your website but it said, and I quote: "Attackers may be trying to steal sensitive information" and it wouldn't let me go to the actual website??? Which is too bad, because I wanted to check it out ;-; Anyways I totally think you should publish this!!! Welp bye for now :)   -Your Girl Fiona xoxo

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Wow! Thanks, I'll try to put in a new link or something to see if it works that way, but thanks again for the review!

Hey ur book is amazing. Hope u get rich besta. ahahahhahahhahahaha

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I love this chapter since Albus nervously yet exitedly plays his first Quidditch Match, and you dont know at the start if it will end in victory or regret?

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Wow, this was a really lovely first chapter! I loved the description at the beginning and you wrote the characters really well. I was also hooked by the summary. 

Like one of your reviewers said, I feel like you could break up the paragraphs a little bit more because they look a bit squashed together and it's quite hard to follow along at times, but you're doing great! I can't wait to read more. I've been meaning to read this for ages, so I'm very happy that I finally have time to :) 

Love this so far! 

~ Lacy

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Thank You so much for the review, I'll make sure to do that, seeing as it's a popular opinion! Edit: OK, I've finished it, so it must be easier (I hope!)

This is beautifully written! This is my favorite chapter ever, I really enjoyed it! I stayed up to 4:21 reading this great fanfic!I even reread interesting chapters two or three times. Although I enjoy this book greatly, I would like it if you wrote another fanfic about romance. Preferably Draco and Harry Potter romance. I know this is very weird, but I like homosexual romance. Anyways, if you could please write the fanfic which I seek within a week from now, I would be so happy! If you read thus far, please take my request under serious consideration! :)

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Hi! OMG thank you so much for this review! It really is encouraging and helpful! The thing is, I can't really include a romance between the two because they're kinda two married adults...
I'm really sorry but thank you for reviewing! If there's anything else that you think I can do please tell me!
Edit: Romance isn't really my style... But thanks again!

whoa i love this but do u think you could put space between the paragraphs. A good example of this is the story Since Privett Drive. (Which is a amazing fanfic)

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Yay! Thank you for the review! I know... I feel like I really overload everyone in the first part of the book. If separating it would help it feel lighter, I'll get to it straight away!

I am so happy that you chose to write this. This is the best fan fiction I´ve ever read! This made my quarantine 1,000 times better! Thank you so much!

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I really like stories about the next generation. Thanks for the nice read!

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Thank YOU! You've made my day!!!

When i heard the line 'sit down, before we begin, I’d like to introduce myself, my name is Lucius Malfoy, and to you Professor Malfoy, I shall be your teacher for Defense Against the Dark Arts, this subject is among the most important lessons you shall takeat Hogwarts, so not paying attention in these lessons, can cost you your life!' i was done
LUCIOUS MALFOY AS DADA TEACHER I WOULD RATHER HAVE SNAPE  THAN LUSCIOUS I DONT EVEN KNOW HIS SPELLING CORRECT BUT LET ME CONTINUE WITHT THE STORY

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Thank you sooo much! I hope you keep reading, you'll love the plot!

I am so happy that you chose to write this. This is the best fan fiction I´ve ever read! This made my quarantine 1,000 times better! Thank you so much!

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Wow! Thnx sooo much

OMG, thnx! This made my day too! Haha
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This book made my quarantine day THE BEST! This is heaven on earth! If it wasn't for this book we would suffer without another Harry Potter! I RECOMMEND THIS FOR EVERYONE! Did you know that the author is my bestie? Make her famous

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This book made me the happiest person EVER! I am so happy that Harry and Neville reunited after such a long time! This is heaven on earth! If it wasn't for this book we would suffer without another Harry Potter! I RECOMMEND THIS FOR EVERYONE! Did you know that the author is my bestie!

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This book made me the happiest person EVER! I am so happy that Harry and Neville reunited after such a long time! This is heaven on earth! If it wasn't for this book we would suffer without another Harry Potter! I RECOMMEND THIS FOR EVERYONE! Did you know that the author is my bestie!

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