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I'm back! And I intend to haunt you forever XD 

Nope, I'm only joking. 

I really enjoyed this chapter :) I'd definitely suggest breaking it up a bit more. Or finding an editor/beta-reader. If you need any help, I'm happy to edit bits for you - just ask! 

The plotline, though, is brilliantly original and I still don't understand why this doesn't have that many readers. You have loads of talent! 

By the way, I just thought I'd mention that the website doesn't seem to work. I tried it the other day and apparently it isn't safe :( Which isn't great because I was curious to see what it looked like and now I can't. 

Anyway, I'm going to move onto the next chapter. Love this! 

~ Lacy

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Hi again! I know it must have been a bit of a time ago, but congrats on 10,000 views on one of your books! I'll make sure to try and fix the link if you want to see it! 
;)

Hi Nafsika! It's Fiona :) I haven't actually read this yet but I'm totally going to! Also, I tried to go on your website but it said, and I quote: "Attackers may be trying to steal sensitive information" and it wouldn't let me go to the actual website??? Which is too bad, because I wanted to check it out ;-; Anyways I totally think you should publish this!!! Welp bye for now :)   -Your Girl Fiona xoxo

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Wow! Thanks, I'll try to put in a new link or something to see if it works that way, but thanks again for the review!

Hey ur book is amazing. Hope u get rich besta. ahahahhahahhahahaha

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I love this chapter since Albus nervously yet exitedly plays his first Quidditch Match, and you dont know at the start if it will end in victory or regret?

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Wow, this was a really lovely first chapter! I loved the description at the beginning and you wrote the characters really well. I was also hooked by the summary. 

Like one of your reviewers said, I feel like you could break up the paragraphs a little bit more because they look a bit squashed together and it's quite hard to follow along at times, but you're doing great! I can't wait to read more. I've been meaning to read this for ages, so I'm very happy that I finally have time to :) 

Love this so far! 

~ Lacy

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Thank You so much for the review, I'll make sure to do that, seeing as it's a popular opinion! Edit: OK, I've finished it, so it must be easier (I hope!)

This is beautifully written! This is my favorite chapter ever, I really enjoyed it! I stayed up to 4:21 reading this great fanfic!I even reread interesting chapters two or three times. Although I enjoy this book greatly, I would like it if you wrote another fanfic about romance. Preferably Draco and Harry Potter romance. I know this is very weird, but I like homosexual romance. Anyways, if you could please write the fanfic which I seek within a week from now, I would be so happy! If you read thus far, please take my request under serious consideration! :)

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Hi! OMG thank you so much for this review! It really is encouraging and helpful! The thing is, I can't really include a romance between the two because they're kinda two married adults...
I'm really sorry but thank you for reviewing! If there's anything else that you think I can do please tell me!
Edit: Romance isn't really my style... But thanks again!

whoa i love this but do u think you could put space between the paragraphs. A good example of this is the story Since Privett Drive. (Which is a amazing fanfic)

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Yay! Thank you for the review! I know... I feel like I really overload everyone in the first part of the book. If separating it would help it feel lighter, I'll get to it straight away!

I am so happy that you chose to write this. This is the best fan fiction I´ve ever read! This made my quarantine 1,000 times better! Thank you so much!

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I really like stories about the next generation. Thanks for the nice read!

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Thank YOU! You've made my day!!!

When i heard the line 'sit down, before we begin, I’d like to introduce myself, my name is Lucius Malfoy, and to you Professor Malfoy, I shall be your teacher for Defense Against the Dark Arts, this subject is among the most important lessons you shall takeat Hogwarts, so not paying attention in these lessons, can cost you your life!' i was done
LUCIOUS MALFOY AS DADA TEACHER I WOULD RATHER HAVE SNAPE  THAN LUSCIOUS I DONT EVEN KNOW HIS SPELLING CORRECT BUT LET ME CONTINUE WITHT THE STORY

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Thank you sooo much! I hope you keep reading, you'll love the plot!

I am so happy that you chose to write this. This is the best fan fiction I´ve ever read! This made my quarantine 1,000 times better! Thank you so much!

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Wow! Thnx sooo much

OMG, thnx! This made my day too! Haha
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This book made my quarantine day THE BEST! This is heaven on earth! If it wasn't for this book we would suffer without another Harry Potter! I RECOMMEND THIS FOR EVERYONE! Did you know that the author is my bestie? Make her famous

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This book made me the happiest person EVER! I am so happy that Harry and Neville reunited after such a long time! This is heaven on earth! If it wasn't for this book we would suffer without another Harry Potter! I RECOMMEND THIS FOR EVERYONE! Did you know that the author is my bestie!

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This book made me the happiest person EVER! I am so happy that Harry and Neville reunited after such a long time! This is heaven on earth! If it wasn't for this book we would suffer without another Harry Potter! I RECOMMEND THIS FOR EVERYONE! Did you know that the author is my bestie!

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