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HI!!! Sorry i didn't review last chpater, i forgot too :( sowwy

ANYWAYS~ I love how you included Johnny in this chapter! HE IS SO ICONIC! I rememeber in the last episode when Val and Parker held hands, I was like, O-0. But i think its rllly cute lilly has a crush on parker, lol.

And i love dumptruck too XD. 

Thanks for the shout-out! Update soon~

-angie

Author Response

Lol NP!! This is so AMAZING I LOVE IT SO MUCH! Also...

I'm up with the sunshine (Let's go)
I lace up my high tops (Oh, no)
Slam dunk, ready or not
Yeah, show me what you got
I'm under the spotlight (Holler)
I dare you, come on and follow
You dance to your own beat
I'll sing the melody

When you say yeah, I say no
When you say stop
All I wanna do is go, go, go!

You
The other half of me
The half I'll never be
The half that drives me crazy
You
The better half of me
The half I'll always need
But we both know
We're better in stereo! :]

I SEE THAT SMILEY!! :]

Edit:  HOW MUCH LONGER UNTIL 1K VIEWS?!??!?!?

Author Response

Awhhh, thank you so so much!! And yes, :] is definitely there. TEHE! 

I hope soon. I am very happy for all of my views :3 <3

Hey!!! OMg I vas going to review de last chapter but I vorgot too :(

There's no place like home! Omg while reading this chapter I felt so relaxed and relieved. The Rooney's are back from chaos and the Potters are just getting started! 

I'm getting flasyflashyflashbacks from the last episode of Liv and Maddie! How they finished it off with "Better in Stereo." That was hella emotional. And you did too! <3

Man reading those characters on the list hit hard! I LOVED Johny Nimbus he's so ridiculous. ;p 

Oh Man! And those Minions! I remember when Artie and his Minions cooked the Christmas Eve dinner it was SOOO polite. 

This whole story reminds me of a big cozy family and I'm sure in the future they will all be closer (meaning related as they marry). This was incredible to read and I remember the FIRST time I saw this story on HPFF I was leaping and I was sooo excited to read this journey and what you did was beyond what I imagined! 

Go Lily! YAYA Let the breeze flow through your wind as much as you could holding onto the best soulmate ever! Oh yeah. He's a bad boy. Once, he built a whole mechanism to make a house collapse. 

Much love to you and may there be more and more of this! Stay safe!


-GryffinLouWho248

Author Response

Heyy! There IS no place like home. I cried like fifty pounds of tears in that last episode. It's so sad QvQ

I SO ship Johnny Nimbus with Jemma. I loved him too; remember that episode where he fakes his death just to scare Maddie? Hilarious!

Okay I will edit this later since my mom is calling me to eat dinner (NEVER make my mother mad).

ack, this is so good! Very addicting and funny. Update soon!

-Angie

Author Response

Awhh, thank youu <3

Updated! 

~Penny

OMG that was HILARIOUS!!! You had my two body cells laughing so HARD!! Dang I think I need a CLASS of water!! Get it? Like...first class? No? Ah whatever.

Al and James are just watching like: O-O

Also I think you messed something up in the chat, there should be a username in there that says: Fox_Smores and I should be saying something like "JOEY AND PARKER! HOW DARE YOU DISOBEY! JKJK! THIS WAS TOTALLY FUNNY!"

Just FYI.

:P Amazing. As always.

Also I just noticed the chapter title and I dropped my glass of water just now. LOL.

Author Response

TEHE! Thank you so much!! LOL. CLASS of water. AND XD, I'll definitely add that NOW. 

Tysm! LOL. Activate Nanny mode: DO NOT STEP IN THE GLASS (Sorry lol I'm watching Jessie right now- since she's a nanny-)

Thanks for reviewing!

~Penny

OMGTHISISMYDREAMWHATTHEHECKJUSTHAPPENEDWHATTHE-

:O

Dude! Liv and Maddie is like my FAV show and with Harry Potter? Omg BEST IDEA EVA! Queens!

Your story is super lit! I dig the POV's! I can tell this is going to be a FUN journey to read!

I'm a HUGE  Teddy x Victoire shipper so I can't wait to see them somewhere!

I'm a sucker for this story! Please keep writing! I can't wait to see where this goes :)

-GryffinLouWho248

(Oops! Sorry if I got too excited there!)


Edit:


aAaAaAaAGGGHHHh! Me again, hehe. 

Just wanted to say LOVE your story again...haha. 


I LEGIT CAN'T WAIT 4 MORE! BTW I HEART Dove Cameron SOSOSOSO  much as wel. 

I COULDN'T think of a BETTER person to play MAL! <3

Also, Came to say, LOVE your banner! Supes cute! Agh, memories from back when Liv and Maddie frequently PLAYED on Disney. (Not as much now tho)

Anyways, auf wiedersehen!

-GryffinLouWho248   (I thought I could leave a second review so this is just an edit)


EDIT EDIT: 

YESSS! D123 FOR EVA. Omg I didn't know! Thanks for telling!

Yes! Your banner'z killerz!

Memories bring back, memories bring back you...

Yup Cya!

Author Response

E E E E E E E ! OHMIGOD NO WAY

I'M A HUGE FAN TOO

And me too, Teddy x Victoire are awesome. They're definitely coming soon. 

Thank you so so much! This motivates me so so much! <3

The next chappie will be tomorrow, thanks! <3

-Penny

EDIT: 

OH MY GOD. DESCENDANTS IS AWESUM. Did you know that Dove originally tried out for Audrey? I was like "Nope you're Mal". Hehe. 

And thanks! I kept trying to find a family picture, it took me ages to get the right one. X3

Memories. I wish they could just do like 38 more seasons. LOL. 

Cya soon! 

~Penny

YES YOUE BACK! loved this, even if it was short. IT BETTER BE Al, WHO ASKED TO TALK TI LIV! anyways, happy late christmas!

Author Response

HEHE! Read on! You too, Happy late Christmas and Happy New Year!

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Author Response

LOL. LONGEST REVIEW EVER, WINS THE MEDAL! I AM LAUGHING SO FRIGGIN HARD RN I SHOWED THIS TO MY BEST FRIEND WHOM I SHARE THIS ACCOUNT WITH AND SHE WAS LIKE

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LITERALLY SAME REACTION LOL

OMG YES FINALLY!!! THE SHIP HAS SAILED!!! I rlly hope Maddie ends up with James or sum

Author Response

HEHE! Yep, that might just happen very, very soon . .

Yay! Sooo cool! I forgot which part of Cali they lived in but anyways the Potter's would be breath taken when they see Beverly Hills Mansions.;) 


Right when you did the letter for the Rooney's Mom I imagined Karen saying it. ;) 


"Momma spaz!" HAHA


No worries! Teddy and Victoire, you guys have your own plans. You wouldn't be missing any fun!



What a great chapter! SOOO Excited for the next. Please keep updating! Much love.



-GryffinLouWho248

Author Response

Hehehe! I think they lived in LA; I mean, Hollywood and all of that good stuff. 

Aw, thank you! Teddy and Victoire are definitely mains in this book; lots of shipping coming soon. Iḿ planning to update later today, see you then!
~Penny

BAHAHA! A case of the "Livs,"

And Maddie's like: "Did you have to invite THIS ONE?" Lol that was so funny! And that nightmare- *shivers* Gah!

Jkjk

Liv would probably hate me. I think I wear mismatching clothes almost everyday 0-0

Another thing, watch what happens when James meets Diggie. Oop-

You've got some competition brewing!!

-TRF

Author Response

LOL. I actually got the choice of words from Alexa and Katie, another TV show. LOL. Maddie still hates James, but in that friend sorta-way. 
Me too! I literally wear mismatched socks every day with crocs. I call it the 'Dobby Style'.

Yep! And you know how like a month ago you wrote that script where James and Artie fight over Liv? Thatś coming soon, hehe. And yesss, Diggie and James; thatś gonna be some dramA. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~penny

LOL TheRavenPuffPoet


Yay Liv! She's pretty and I'm so happy she's together with someone! I hope they have a great relationship and go to amazing places.


Maddie's a WIP. And I'd respect ANY choice she goes with. I think people underestimate the things about Independent woman. I could see her like that OR with James. But don't let my drama affect YOUR story! 


Your stories have such a positive vibe and it spreads to me definitely because I always find a smile on my face. Thank you for being there to cheer me up!


Can't wait for more!


-GryffinLouWho248

Author Response

OMG I missed this so much :( And I know ur special got held off but I cannot WAAAIIT!!!

Idk, I think James or Albus...one of them.

My theories are terrible.

-TheRavenpuffPoet

Author Response

Yay you're back! 

HUZZAH! Boom-chicka-boom, you GO LUPIN!

LOL "Willow doesn't go down!" Classic Willow! She's such a savage. You hear that Joey? REEEOWW!

The next chapter will have me jumping here in no time! (rubs hands together) Let's see if this ship sails!

Anyways, SO glad to see you m8.  My heart goes out to you and your writing. Happy late Christmas!

:D

-GryffinLouWho248

Author Response

this is so good! 
MaRrY Me jUlIet yoU'Ll neVeR hAvE tO *voice crakes* bE aLonE 
That song was stuck in my head for weeks, and that is all thanks to tik tok.
Can't wait for thenext chapter! 
(P.S. so proud of you for uploading two long chapters in a day, that is really hard to do)
(P.P.S. Keep me updated!)

Author Response

Hi Angie! Thank youu! 

I'Ve BeEn WaItIng FoR YoU BuT YoU *random person screams and runs away* NeVeR CoMe

ALso, new chapter up!

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! You're the kindest soul. <3

I appreciate this so much! OMG I died at T-Swift! Yes no doubt, Shake it off is nostalgia at it's best.

Her new album "Evermore" is coming out this midnight! (I think...)

As soon as you said his eyes were dreamy.

Man if he was real- I'd run to him and grab him and call him MINE. MINES FOREVER.

This is interesting, a student dating a teacher. (insert laughing crying emoji) I always thought of Teddy as an auror. LOL. (Nothing changes)

WTH Pretty boy, she could have run off with another S T R A N G E R. 

I appreciate how you also kind of "swapped the personalities." Like Teddy going to France. I admire his ambition to travel the world!

This is overwhelming, I swore I screamed when it said to me "Cindy Lou." You're a great bud to do that!

THANKS YOU AND I HEART THIS CHAPTER TILL THE DAY I DIE.

-GryffinLouWho248

Edit: GOD BLESS YOU!

Author Response

THANK YOOU THANK YOOU THANK CHUUU! 

OH MY GOD THAT'S IN LITERALLY AN HOUR AND A HALF! MY GOODNESS- 

You dibs Teddy, I dibs JaMeS. MiNe MiNe MiNe. 

Student dating a teacher- altho he's not a teacher yet! He's gonna apply (spoilers!) soon. Like real soon. It's totally not the reason he came back to Hogwarts. That and Vic, of course. 

Thanks! I thought I'd be cool to switch, since Fleur's from France and Vic's sorta sick o' it. 

"Cindy Lou Cindy Lou Cindy Lou" 

It's a catchy naaame (I don't even know what I'm singing along to) 

I swore I screamed inside (not outside because my neighbor downstairs in a doctor and she needs some SLEEP! I swear tho, I was on the verge) when I read this! You are AWeSoMe~ 

THANK YOU. I WILL REMEMBER THIS REVIEW UNTIL THE DAY I DIE. 

Or until my memory goes. Sorry I'm really literal my friends always tease me about it XD

~Penny

HEY!



GRYFFINLOUWHO I WILL DESTROY YOU IN MY MESSAGES! *war cry*

Bless you, Penny, and have a wonderful day!

I will edit this later.

Edit: Can you do scorose? OR LILY/LYSANDER?

Author Response

HEY! 

Bless yourself! I love seeing your reviews, they make me so happy <3 :D

I'm definitely doing Scorose, but I've got some bad news for you if you're a Lily/Lysander shipper. I'm pairing her up with someone else, and you'll see who in the sequel . . *Evil laugh* 

I am sorry for causing all of the Lily x Lysander shippers pain but I've got plans for her! *rubs hands together*

Cya soon!

~Penny

Well I admit it.


Liv X James is a LOT better than Liv X Artie (But who shipped Liv X Artie anyway? I admit, I did ship Miggie, poor Diggie :( )



Clip:

James: Hey Liv, come sit next to me.

Artie: But Liv. Your man Artie's got-*claps*...*nothing happens* THAT'S YOUR CUE, MINIONS!!

Minions: Oh.

Artie: I've got...CAKE.

James: I'm hot.

Artie: I'm ginger hot.

James: I'M HOTTER THAN GINGER HOT!

Artie: LIV TOOK ME TO THE PROM!

James: *gasps* HOW DARE YOU USE THAT AGAINST HER!

Artie: You mean, in benefit to ME?

Liv: ...

Joey: *walks in* Whoa. I can tell a LOT of stuff went down here and- Hey Artie is that CAKE?

Parker: *rubs hands together* OH BOY-O

*Joey and Parker devour the cake*

James: See? What'd I tell you?

Artie: I'm still...ginger hot.

Liv & James: *faceplam* UGH.

Edit: YES! But er...no need to credit me. XD! It's fine!

Author Response

Sadly, I'm not shipping Liv ans James romantically but their a good match as friends! I love the script, can I use it? I'll credit you  🥺 🥺 🥺

EDIT: Thanks so much! I'm definitely crediting you tho, don't try to back out of this one!

HEY! I rendered the Little Mermaid to be HP themed too! Yay! Disney fangirl buddy!

Also I KNEW IT. THE SHIP SHALL SAIL.

LIV IS TO BE WITH ALBUS

(And in the song where it said "Minions" I said, ARTIE!)

XD! -TheRavenpuffPoet

Author Response

HEyyy! Calling all Disney fangirls!

YESH. WE BETTER MAKE SURE THE SHIP WOn'T SINK ON THE WAY, THO. 

"*Snaps* Minions!" -Artie

omg UMBRIDGE IS BACK PPLS, GET YOUR WEAPONS READY! and the 'guys guys guys' from parker is totally iconic, brings back memories *sheds a tear* 
-Angie

Author Response

*Sobs loudly* 

Memories! I wish they would make like 38 new seasons!

Thanks for the review <3

just, AMAZING! like, muah! cannot wait for new chapters! oh and poor liv, in the show, she and holden broke up bc liv didn't want to ruin maddie's relationship with josh and now this happens with al.

Author Response

Awhh, tysmm! I'm so sorry dat had to happen :( It'll get better soon, don't worry! <3

ACK SO ADDICTING! liv and rooney is a classic, making this so much fun! Keep up the great work!
-angie
Edit: I just realized I wrote liv and rooney instead of liv and maddie, LOL

Author Response

Awh, thanks so so much! Your story (Elephant in the Room) is addicting too. It's awesome. 

~Penny

EDIT: LOL. I didn't even notice-

OMG I looove the Little Mermaid 


-Ceds Shorty

Author Response

Me too! It's awesome. Thanks for reviewing!

~Penny

I love it!!! I agree w/ Ravenpuffpoet...  LivXArtie were a funny couple ✌️

-Ceds Shorty

Author Response

Thanks so so much! And yea, Liv x Artie was so fun, even though they never got together officially; I liked them a lot as a comedy duo! XD

Late review I know Sorry! But I love Maddie and her Confidence, it's awesome!

-Ced's Shorty

Author Response

Awh, thanks! And don't worry about it; I love seeing your reviews!

<3

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