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I think she would be a perfect Gryffindor. My character is in Slytherin.

Also in my book the Dark Ruins, I didn't add that much canon because he starts a year before Harry.


So just my thoughts. Gallant Warend

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Thank you for reviewing, Gallant Warend!

ROSALYN??? HMM... AM I CRWZY FOR THINKING THIS, BUT I THINK SNAPE'S HER SNAKEFATHER OR SOMETHING. 

HMM. SNAKEFATHER DOESN'T HAVE THE SAME RING AS DOGFATHER (I SPEND A LOT OF MY TIME LOOKING AT MEMES -_-)

ALSO, ARE YOU WONDERING WHY I'M ON CAPLOCK??? NO? WELL, IMMA TELL YOU ANYWAYS!

HERMIONE: GRAMMAR, WAITING! PLEASE! AND GET ME OFF CAPLOCK!

ME: *SMUG SMIRK*

ANYWYAS, IM  SO EXCITED YOU UPDATED BECAUSE YOU'RE 100 TIMES THE WRITER I'LL EVER BE! I LOVE ARINA! ROSALYN IS SUCH A PRETTY NAME!

LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE CHAPTERS, ANNOYING HERMIONE AND PROBABLY YOU WITH CAPLOCK!!! GO ME! 

AND YOU, WITH YOUR A-M-A-Z-I-N-G FIC!

EDIT: Yas, I'm off caplock. Aw, thanks for the shoutout *brushes away happy tears*

Author Response

Snakefather? Interesting. What exactly do you mean by that?
Haha! Hermione invading your reviews! Love it!
Thank you so much! I'm really nowhere close to as amazing as you are (everyone reading, check out Waiting's fanfics! They're AMAZING!). And thank you, I think Rosalyn is a pretty name too!
Thank you so much for reviewing!

I... LOVED it!! Thank you for updating, at least NOW we know what happens, except I have a BILLION questions!!

1)What does the message mean?
2) Why was Snape surprised at her last name?
3)Why did it burst into flame?

Please answer these questions in your response. 

Also, I love Katie. Is it weird she's my favorite character? She's an amazing friend and I cannot believe she's not jealous . 


Please post soon, I LOVE LOVE LOVE this!!

- A very impatient WaitingForMyHogwartsLetter (lol)

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Thanks so much! Sorry about the questions, to answer:
1. You will have to wait and see.
2. You will have to wait and see.
3. You will have to wait and see.
Mwahaha! Sorry I'm being so evil. Lots of questions will be answered later.
I love Katie too! She's one of my favorites as well. She is jealous, but she's hiding it well. Though she is a Muggle, she will still play a role (I just couldn't let go of her!).
I will try to post soon! To be honest, I don't really have a big plan for the story, but I do have a few ideas, and I will try to add soon! (I know I am a slow poster ;).
Thank you for reviewing!

Interesting! I'm looking forward to seeing more.

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Thank you so much for reviewing!

Okay, that clifhanger was perfect evil. I MUST KNOW MORE!!! What's the message?? plzzz tell me. Is it something like, YOU SHALL DIE. Or something else???

Aghhh, please post soon. I'm gonna go cr-az-y...

But I loved it otherwise. I love how she has a Muggle friend connection, I feel really bad for Katie. I SYMPATHIZE with Katie. It's exactly how I feel every time I read Harry Potter and realize, with an awful sinking feeling, that my letter hasn't come. 

Great Chapter!!! Not only did you have wonderful writing, you had like, no spelling mistakes!! You get extra points for that!!

- WaitingForMyHogwartsLetter

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Thanks so much for this review! >:) I'm sorry I had to be so evil, I was just like, hmm, that's a good place to stop.
Yeah, like I said in Chapter 3, I felt like I wanted her to keep a connection to the Muggle world. It never really says anything about that in the books. Me too! I want to go to Hogwarts!
Thank you so much for reviewing! Stay posted, I will try not to keep you in agony for too long :).

Woah!  That was one of the BEST fanfic stories I've ever read!  It's sooo good!  Keep it up!  I can't wait for more chapters!

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Thank you so much! I'll try to post more soon!

I think the spaces in the chapters make it SO MUCH better!  Good job!

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Yeah, I agree it was hard to read before. Thanks!

Now you have formed like SO MANY questions in my little head! Hopefully it won't explode! Anyways WHO IS HER MOM?! And really good job!

Author Response

The beginning is going to be a little confusing, sorry. As for her mom, I can't tell you yet, but you will find out soon!
Thank you so much for reviewing! It makes my day!

This is good! I can't believe I didn't start reading earlier! I am SO CURIOUS as to who she is and why her father is signifiant!

Author Response

Thank you so much! About her identity and her father, you'll have to wait and see... :)
Thanks for reviewing!

I really liked it! 

Just one thing I noticed; the prolouge has been moved around to being the last chapter. So you might want to fix that ;p i do that all the time!

- WaitingForMyHogwartsLetter

Author Response

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the heads up!
Thank you for reviewing!

Omigosh I really liked this! I was randomly browsing when I found this, so glad i did!

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Thank you so much!
Thanks for reviewing!

I love this it is amazing so u when the next chapter is out

Author Response

Thank you! I will try to post the next chapter soon!
Thanks for reviewing!

aw. this was so SWEET!!! and, okay, a little sad.

Author Response

Yep, I know. :( :)
Thanks for reviewing!

Hmm... okay, I am interested. 

the begining made me think she was from like, i dunno, an older generation or something. But its so interesting! 

Just one suggestion, maybe put like a space between paragraphs? It makes it easier to read. 

xo, WaitingForMyHogwartsLetter

Author Response

Thanks for the suggestion. That's a good idea, I will do that. Yes, about her age and stuff, you'll have to wait and see!
Thanks so much for reviewing!

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