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I like Luna. I guess because she's different?  And she doesn't care what anyone thinks of her and she's a mentally strong person. Hermione is a close second, but I love them all :)

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i agree! Luna is an amazing character and she was one of Harry's closest friends who helped him go through what he did :)

Hi! I saw that you replied to my comment on chapter 6 and I wanted to say some things. It wouldn't let me reply on the same chapter so TADA! here I am.
You're very welcome! I admire you for being able to stick to a story! I read a piece of writing advice that said that writing is like turning on an old hose. At first the water is dirty and has some rocks and junk coming out of it, but the longer you run the hose the clearer the water will get. The more you write the better it will get! So don't quit. I believe in you ;)
I will definitely check out hothoney111!

Author Response

Thank you so much!! that was actually super inspiring. I never thought about it that way...I am only an eighth grader who is hopelessly in love with fanfiction and Jily. Anyway, thanks for reviewing, I will keep going !!!
Just so you know my next chapter will hopefully be uploaded in a few days, I've been rlly busy rip :)

I like how the characters seem to be in character (like you didn't change their personalities at all)

Author Response

Thank you! Glad you liked it.

I think you should add some more things that Lily likes about him. Yes, he's cute, but maybe she likes him for his personality?

Author Response

Thanks for the advice! Yes, Lily does like James for his personality as well. I think I might have just wrote it in a way that makes the reader get the  "oh, James is so hot, I love him" kind of vibe. My writing skills are not yet like the amazing hothoney111, who, by the way, wrote The Untold Story of Lily and James. Thanks so much for reviewing!!

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