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No!! I was totally caught off guard with that one and I’m just devastated. I probably should have seen it coming but I forgot for a bit that there was actually a war coming. So, so sad. Excellent job conveying Jo’s grief and how she processes that situation from her point of view.

Author Response

I know :( it was hard to write this chapter. 

I am glad you thought it was well done, it took me ages because I wanted to do it justice. 

I have the next chapter ready but had some connection issues last night so I will upload it as soon as the internet cooperates. 

Thank you so much for the review :)
Solmussa

This was so good! I feel bad that Alice died, but I can't wait to see what happens next! (Or maybe this is the last chapter?)

Author Response

Hello! 

I know, I was sad that I had to kill Alice but oh well :) 

Not the last chapter at all! We’re only half way through this story so there’s plenty more to come. I’ll try to upload a new chapter tomorrow. 

Thank you for your review, as always it makes me very happy and motivates me to continue writing. 

Cheers, 
Solmussa

Still loving this story! I think that was the perfect breakup for their situation — friendly and loving and knowing that they are best friends.

Author Response

Thank you for the review :) 

I am glad you think so, I was a bit nervous about their breakup because I wanted it to be realistic but also I didn't feel like it made sense for it to be super dramatic, because Jo and James just get along so well! 

Next chapter will be up tonight.

Cheers,
Solmussa

Please, more of this! Every time I look at this, I check for updates. Please add more chapters! Can't wait to see what happens between Sirius and Jo!

Author Response

Aaww thank you :)

I am doing a final edit on the next chapter. It will be up at some point today. Let me know what you think when you read it!

Cheers,
Solmussa

Most evenings I check for a new chapter, looking forward to more, can’t wait for Jo and Sirius to sort themselves out!

Author Response

Thank you so much for leaving a review :) I am working on the next chapter, will be up soon - I promise!

Sirius and Jo... what are we going to do with them? ;)

Cheers,
Solmussa

I love this! This whole plot is such a great one, I can't wait for more of this! I love the way you make Jocelyn have some sort of connection with James and Sirius; it's a great idea. Please make more!

Author Response

Thank you for leaving a review! :) I always loved the idea of Sirius and James' friendship being tested a little by a girl, so I'm glad you are enjoying that aspect of the fic. 

Working on the next chapter. Might be able to get it up tonight but, if not, then tomorrow for sure.

Cheers, 
Solmussa

Best line: “It was then I knew Sirius was in love with Jocelyn”. The tension is killing me though.

Author Response

Thank you for reviewing again! It makes me so happy.  

Next chapter will be up later today... I'm afraid the tension is only going to keep building! (sorry, not sorry) :)

Solmussa

PS: I love that line too :)

I loved it! The Quidditch game was great, you made it really extreme and was really detailed. I can't wait to see what's next! :)

Author Response

Thank you Annika. 

Next chapter has just been published :)

Enjoy!
Solmussa

I loved it! The Quidditch game was great, you made it really extreme and was really detailed. I can't wait to see what's next! :)

Author Response

Hello!

Marie here. I loveee this chapter!! I was so happy when they made it official. But can't help but feel like she's going to end up broking James's heart. Or you could make the break up (which I'm not asking for) gentle and something they both want. Maybe because Lily and Cal broke up and James realizes that he still has feelings for lily and Jo realizes her feelings toward Sirius. 

Just a suggestion.

Im so happy about how fast you post. And every chapter is worth reading. 

Ps the previous review was my by accident. When I tried to leave a review on the last few chapters it wouldn't let me. So I figured I could just delete it if it in fact post. So so sorry about that. Opps

Author Response

Hello Marie!

Thanks for reviewing. I am happy you like it. I think James and Jo are cute together. 

I haven't fully decided yet how the James & Jo storyline is going to go, but I am trying to keep this story canon (as much as possible, some things might change a little) so, inevitably, James and Lily will end up together at some point. I will say that we are still in sixth year and according to canon Lily and James only got together sometime in seventh year so there's plenty of time!

Best, 
Solmussa

Love the quick update! And I loved the chapter. You managed to make the quidditch game intense and understandable without sounding cliche (for lack of a better word). Looking forward to finding out what happens next!

Author Response

Yay! I am so glad you liked the Quidditch game. It is so hard to explain it without it being boring, confusing or cliche. 

The next chapter is one of my favourites, I am so excited for you to read it. I am going to try to get it up before the end of the week :)

Best, 
Solmussa

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Wha!! It's killing me that Sirius will NOT tell her how he feels but he's so into her! I don't think he even knows it himself. He doesn't, am I right?! 

Also, my heart breaks for Alice. We know what Remus' issue is but it doesn't make it easier. The poor girl. 

I saw you've told people next chapter is out today... PLEASE do update :)

Kate

Author Response

Hello! Next chapter has just been posted now. 

Re Sirius, I don't want to give too much away, but, well, he is a guy and they aren't that great at figuring out their feelings, are they? Specially not teenagers! 

I totally feel for Alice, too. It must be so hard not knowing why he's left you :(

I hope you enjoy chapter twelve. If you do, leave a reaview!

Cheers,
Solmussa

I love this story so much! It’s definitely one of my favorites and I continuously wait for the next chapter to come out! Thanks so much and keep up the great work!!

Author Response

Thank you so much for the review :) working on the next chapter so it can be up tomorrow!

Solmussa

Loving this story! I’m torn between wanting her to end up with James and wanting her to choose Sirius,  and the tension is just killing me. Can’t wait for more.

Author Response

Thank you for reviewing :) I know exactly what you mean, even I am torn and it’s up to me! Haha 

Next chapter will be up tomorrow!

Solmussa

can't wait for more :)

Author Response

Thank you so much for leaving a review!! It has motivated me to finish the next chapter. It will be up in a day or two. 

Cheers,
Solmussa

I have a feeling that next chapter is going to be juicy!

I loved the Quidditch practice scene - thought it was funny and showed the dynamics between James, Jocelyn and Sirius well.

Can't wait for the next one.

Kate

Author Response

Thank you so much for reviewing! Next chapter is up :)

Solmussa

OMG! I absolutely loved the countdown scene with James. It was so perfect it gave me goosebumps! I also think you did really well by not making them rush into something. She just broke up with her first ever boyfriend so it wouldn't have been very credible. Well done. 

Why is Sirius pretending he doesn't like Jo? Because he does, doesn't he? Also, I loved the fact that Jax looked a lot like Sirius - is it Jocelyn's subconscious telling her something? ;) 

Lots of love,
Kate

Author Response

Hello again! Thanks for taking the time to review. 

I personally love the countdown scene too :) Thank you for kind words, they mean the world. 

Sirius... well, Sirius is Sirius, isn't he? Ha. What I mean is that he's haughty, arrogant, and thinks he's the best thing since sliced bread. He may be a different kind of Black, but he's a Black after all so I just have a hard time imagining him as someone who'll be ready to accept he's got real, deep feelings for anyone easily. He'll come to terms with it, eventually, but he'll fight it and downplay it. Or, at least, that's what the Sirius Black I always imagine would do. 

The thing with Jax... well, I guess everyone has a type and Jo seems to be tall, dark and handsome :) It's not a super deep thing, it's just a bit of fun I wanted to have. 

Next chapter will be up soon. 

Solmussa

amazing... cant wait

Author Response

Thank you for taking the time to leave a note :) I'm glad you're enjoying it. Working on chapter seven so it can be up soon.

Cheers,
Solmussa

I screaming... this is so good I can see the scene in my mind so clear

Author Response

Thank you so much for the review :) Makes my day.

I really liked this chapter. The way you described the Quidditch game and the thing they did with Jocelyn diving was really cool. Also, it was great that it was longer than the previous ones - more to read in one go :)

I agree with the previous review, I am thoroughly enjoying the slow build up that could go either way - Sirius or James? - that's a nice problem to have, isn't it?! 

Update soon, I am super curious to see how Jo is going to deal with seeing Jax again (which I expect will happen in chapter six, right?)

Kate

Author Response

Hi Kate! Thanks for reviewing, it makes me super happy and gives me motivation to finish the next chapter quickly :)

Thanks for your lovely words about the quidditch match - it was actually hard to write it as I wanted to make sure you got a good idea of what they were doing, but I didn't want to over-explain either. I'm happy you enjoyed that part!

I'm glad you too are a fan of my little plot with James and Sirius - let's see where this takes us... 

And, yes, you'll see Jax again in Chapter six ;)

Cheers,
Solmussa

I've been reading since the first chapter and loved it after the first few lines. I can't wait till chapter 6!

I just wanted to tell you how I love the idea of both Potter and Black being love interests. That is what you hinting at isn't it? That James Potter fancies Jocelyn?

Maybe you could make them go out for sometime to make Black jealous. Don't have to do this just a suggestion. 

~Marie~

Author Response

Hello Marie! Thank you for reviewing, it really makes my day :) 

I find that many Marauder fics draw a very hard line between Sirius' love interests and James' because, well, they are such loyal friends but I wanted to be a bit original and toy with the idea that someone could like them both and/or that they both could like the same girl (or both, who knows?). I am trying to keep things canon as much as possible, which kind of gives away some stuff but we're still early in sixth year so a lot can happen between now and their graduation!  

Chapter six will be up soon, I've written it and it's going through a round of edits now so a couple of days at most :)

Cheers, 
Solmussa

I loved the little scene between Jo and Sirius! I think you're building their relationship slowly, which is nice. I hate it when people jump in straight away - it's not realistic that two people who haven't spoken much to each other for years would suddenly be in love out of the blue so, well done :)

I also really like you've made Jo a beater. It's not common to see a female in that position, they're usually chasers or seekers at best. 

Now, I'm off to read the next chapter :)
Kate

Author Response

This story so far is amazing! Jocelyn is so relatable to me as I am 13 and still waiting for my biological clock to give in! I think I prefer James as a seeker because then it is as though Harry is following in his footsteps, but it works with him a chaser too. Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author Response

Hello! Thank you so much for reviewing. It makes me so happy that you find you can relate to Jo. I hope that you continue to do so as the story progresses :) 

I have written some stories in the past where James was a seeker and I agree it works really well, but for this one, I wanted him scoring lots of goals instead of catching snitches ;)

Next chapter will up very soon!

Best, 
Solmussa

Hi there!

I love Marauders' stories and I am quite enjoying this so far. I like Jocelyn. Interesting to see where it'll go - you don't see female Beaters often!

Kate

Author Response

Thank you for your review! Makes my day when readers take the time to leave a comment. 

There’ll be a lot more beating from Jo, I hope you like it!

Best,
Solmussa

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