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Story: EPIC

This story so far is amazing! Jocelyn is so relatable to me as I am 13 and still waiting for my biological clock to give in! I think I prefer James as a seeker because then it is as though Harry is following in his footsteps, but it works with him a chaser too. Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author Response

Hello! Thank you so much for reviewing. It makes me so happy that you find you can relate to Jo. I hope that you continue to do so as the story progresses :) 

I have written some stories in the past where James was a seeker and I agree it works really well, but for this one, I wanted him scoring lots of goals instead of catching snitches ;)

Next chapter will up very soon!

Best, 
Solmussa

Hi there!

I love Marauders' stories and I am quite enjoying this so far. I like Jocelyn. Interesting to see where it'll go - you don't see female Beaters often!

Kate

Author Response

Thank you for your review! Makes my day when readers take the time to leave a comment. 

There’ll be a lot more beating from Jo, I hope you like it!

Best,
Solmussa

Hi again.

Once again a chapter that flows nicely and fits in perfectly.

This noticing of Jocelyn now (and not before) sounds a lot like the fairy tale of The Ugly Duckling :).

I don't know if this is a deliberate difference or not, but you mention that James Potter was a chaser. In The Philosophers Stone (film and book) it mentions that Harry's dad was a Seeker.

Nice chapter. Awaiting the next one.

Author Response

Hello! 

Thank you again for reviewing :) 

I am always a bit confused about the position James played, it was my understanding that in books he played chaser and in the film they made him seeker, but I am not 100% sure about this. I quite like the idea that he was a chaser but always would have liked to have been seeker (hence his habit of playing with a snitch). 

Best,
Solmussa

Hi again

Once again you've written another wonderful chapter. I think your style of writing flows quite well. I could imagine the story unfolding nicely in my mind.

Great start and awaiting your update.

Please feel free to read mine.

Author Response

Hello! Thank you so much for reviewing, it means the world :) I am glad you like it, I am planning on updating again soon. 

I'll have a read through your stories too, and will be sure to review.

Cheers,
Solmussa

Hi

A nice start to your story. I like a bit of background at the start of a story, it kind of sets things up with the main characters.

Nice start enjoyed the start.

Author Response

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