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Story: Harry Potter and the Manhattan Murders

Hi, going to read the rest, just paused to say that I am pretty sure it is inquiry, no enquiry. Great chapter!

Author Response

Thank you for that! You have a great eye! Both nouns are acceptable though. The 'E' is more for asking a question and the 'I' is more formal.
But I second guess myself everytime I write it!
Hope you're enjoying is so far! New chapter is up!

Hello! First time reviewing this story! I love NYC, I live there and have lived there since I was 1! I love how it is portrayed, and how your story evolves! Keep up the good work!

Author Response

I love NYC too! I hope you are keeping safe!

I agree with magicmuggle01.  I love the ending but I was surprised. This is great!

Author Response

Thank you so much

This is great. What if Harry and Hermione worked together on the case?

Author Response

Hermione will be making an appearence!

Hi

Nice opening chapter. 

I could feel the fear in the air.

Must move onto your next chapter.

Author Response

I really appreciate your kind words xoo

You really had me going with this chapter. I thought this woman had some ulterior motive in her mind. Had to laugh when it was revealed that she was in fact the undercover operative.

Great chapter and moving on.

Author Response

Thank you I really appreciate the time you take to review!

Hi again.

Once again an excellent well put together chapter.

I loved how you had Felix being a bit put out by Harry's remarks. Loved it.

I'd love it if Lana and Harry solved the case.

At first I thought you'd made a huge blunder with Neville's name, but your explanation was plausible as Neville was always really a quiet person.

Must move on.

Author Response

Thank you so much for reviewing! I have added another chapter!

Once again another nicely put together chapter.

I think I've spotted another connection you could use (if you want). All the women were killed in or around Central Park.

Please update soon.

Author Response

Thank you so much for your kind reviews!
I have updated another chapter!

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