Peter and Neave's friendship is super sweet and I hope his little double-agent role doesn't end up hurting that. It was interesting to see how she got on with Snape and their friendship-of-sorts too. They seem quite close (but maybe that's just Remus's jealous streak giving us that idea).
I can't wait to see what kind of plan they've come up with to get that notebook and I'm super excited to see how the story progresses.
Author's Response: Sorry for the delay in reply. I was changing internet providers and there was a few issues! Good news is I've had time to write chapter 3 which I'll be putting in for validation today. Thank you for the lovely feedback! It means a lot that your enjoying the story so far :) The parts you pointed out were my favourite bits to write in this chapter.
Hope you find time to review chapter 3 when it's posted :)
I LOVED Pete as a little double agent. It makes so much sense.
And your portrayal of Sirius is brilliant. Just little snippets to get his personality.
I'm wondering what this connection with Neave and Snape will be. Looking forward to reading more!
Let's find out how they get that notebook!
Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry for the late reply I've had no internet for a week! Good news is its given me time to write chapter 3. All the bits you've mentioned were so fun to write I'm really starting to see parts of the story take shape :)