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Hi again

Once again you've shown the great imagination that you have.

So Tom is going to see Salazar Slytherin again. I wonder what words of wisdom he'll impart?!?!

Please do update soon.

10/10 for the whole story so far.

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Wow, what a brilliant chapter.

I wonder if there's a real legend concerning the Veela or was it a made up name by J K?

What a dramatic ending to this chapter and what will happen now to Sarah now that her true appearance is revealed?

Must move on.

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Ok. The magical part (where Sarah was concerned) I guessed correctly, but being half Veela, that one I never expected.

So now that the two have teamed up together I reckon there's going to be a lot of new things happening at Hogwarts.

Once again you keep throwing in the unexpected and long may it continue.

Moving on.

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Sarah has got to be magical.

And Cole is being stupid once again and I reckon she has two enemies in the form of Tom and possibly Sarah as well.

Must move on.

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Nicely done with this chapter. Just when I thought you couldn't go any further with the punishments that Tom meters out to people you pull something new out of the hat. Once again you descriptiveness comes shining through. 

On one hand I felt sorry for Mrs Cole but then I think of all the nasty and underhanded stuff she done then I'm on Toms side.

Great chapter and moving on.

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Hi again

Once again another wonderfully well written chapter.

I think that the person who pushed the note under Toms door was Sarah. She's a bit of a puzzle. But if she's a witch I wonder how she's escaped detection? But no doubt you'll tell all in good time.

I think it'll be a big mistake for Mrs Cole to ship Tom off to another orphanage. And I wonder what Tom will do about it?

Must move on.

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What an interesting chapter. Who is this mysterious Sarah? I'm thinking that might also be someone who's also involved somehow with the magical world. But so far your not giving much away.

I can't wait to see what you have in store for Mrs Cole at the hands of Tom.

By the way the Anon review in your last chapter is from me. For some reason my phone logged me out.

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Well this chapter certainly took me by surprise. It sounded like (though you didn't say) you had Tom time travel back to the era of the Four Founders. Though saying, Hogwarts is a very mysterious place and anything can happen.

So you have Tom even in his second year pretty much plotting to be the D&A professor. This should be interesting to read about as you have him going through Hogwarts.

Must move on.

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Nice, very nice. The descriptiveness of the storm was brilliant, it was almost like I was there experiencing the chaos. 
Though i must admit that I never expected this. 

If this is what happens when he's angry, I hate to see what happens when Tom really gets peeved off.

10/10 and moving on.

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Well Evil Otter it saddens me that you might not continue this story because I've followed it and love your writing up to this point.

If you ever do come back you'll see that your wish has been granted and HPFF has indeed risen from the ashes.

This chapter was wonderfully written and I'd really love to see what you had planned for Tom's revenge on Molly & Carol.

Added to favs and begging you to update when you can.

Review posted 10/8/18

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Thanks for the very kind reviews of the chapters to this story.  

Actually, this story is very much alive and on the front burner now that my other series has been concluded.  There are several twists ahead for Tom, not the least of which is a new non-canon character that is going to make life interesting for everyone.

I have been looking forward to being able to post to my account, especially on this series.  I mean, we are only in Tom's second year and there are several to go before he leaves Hogwarts and moves on with what we know will become with his life.

Molly & Carol have become favorite non-canon characters of mine and will be around for a while.  

BTW-Since you like this story, please glance at the other two in my series on Tom-Dark Beginnings and Darkness Rising.  Dark Beginnings deals with Tom's life in the orphanage before he met Dumbledore and Darkness Rising is based on his first year at Hogwarts.

Thanks again for the reviews.  I will answer the others as well but, as a sensed a bit of pleading in your review, I decided to let you know that I am still around and writing.

Evil Otter

I don't like the sound of the last bit of this chapter. Tom Riddle has got something going on in his mind.

I wonder what will happen next, another good chapter and I must move on.

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By the sound of it I'd hate to get on the wrong side of Molly. Once she finds out exactly what happened she is going to blow her top.

Once again another excellent chapter must move on.

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Well what can I say but once again you've produced another wonderful chapter. You certainly have a knack for telling a good story.

I wonder what will happen next where Molly and Carol are concerned? And Tom I think is going to be in for a very rude awakening.

Must move onto the next chapter.

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Tom must be feeling very pleased with himself. I wonder if he'll be found out.

A well written chapter and moving on.

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What a Schemer Tom is. To use someone else to get Reid of Carol. When the crap hits the fan, he'll be blameless.

Another good chapter and moving on.

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Once again a well written chapter.

Well pride certainly did come before a fall where Farley was concerned. I wonder what he's going to do now?

I hope Molly doesn't get hurt to much when she finally finds out what kind of person Riddle really is.

Great chapter and moving on.

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Another well written chapter. I must say that you do write/tell a good story.

I wonder if Molly has finally seen through Tom and his charming altar ego? Only reading on will I find out.

Great so far.

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Wow. A very powerful well written chapter.

I could visualise everything perfectly, it was like I was there experiencing it all, and this is important for me.

Well done.

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Review posted 8/8/18.

This was excellently written. I couldn't have described the encounter any better. Well done.

Just one thing. The Slytherin Common Room is behind a bare stretch of wall in the dungeon's and under the lake, not behind a witch. On some points I'm a bit of a stickler for detail.

Great chapter and must move on.

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Review posted (along with the others) posted 8/8/18.

Once again another excellent chapter. 

I love how you've gone into detail about Riddles dreams of his family, I wonder when he'll find out that he was dreaming about his mother, grandfather and uncle? No doubt you'll explain later.

I don't know how Farley and his cronies got sorted into Gyffindor since the behavior they're displaying is not up to Gyffindor standards. Maybe at some point of the story you can include an explanation of how that happened (just a suggestion).

Must move on.

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Hi again

Once again I loved this chapter. I like how you've got Tom determined to find out more about his family.

But one thing though, I think Tom would most likely have stayed at Hogwarts at Christmas than go back to the orphanage. Remember he hated the orphanage and thought of Hogwarts as home.

Good chapter and must move on.

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An excellent chapter and well written.

I take it that when you refer to Molly's father as minister, he's actually the MoM?

Must move on.

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A nice start to your story.

I like the way that you seemed to have followed on from JKs description of life in the orphanage for Tom Riddle. And you've brought it to life beautifully.

Carrying on with the next chapter.

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