I'm really enjoying this story so far. I like your portrayal of the Marauders - I find it to be more believable than some other fanfics yet still incredibly charming. I'm also intrigued by Margot - can't wait to find out more about her!
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for review. It means so much.
I'm trying to make the boys relatable and flawed. It's a challenge because I love all of my babies and I want them to be perfect. The toughest part is making Peter a likable character. One of my biggest pet peeves is when Peter is portrayed as a horrible person from the get-go. I want him to be worthy of being one of James and, eventually, Lily's best friends.
I am kinda in love with Margot, tbh. Her and Remus are my favorites. I have to actively stop myself from turning then into Mary Sues and make sure I write about the other characters.
Again, thank you for your review. I think chapter four will be vaildated tomorrow.
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