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I absolutely love this! I am so impressed by your ability to stick to cannon so well and yet at the same time add so much of your own creativity. So far I feel like this has all felt very natural and believable while keeping me intrigued and desperate for more. I can’t wait to read more!

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In HBP, Harry follows Draco away from Slughorn’s party, and sees draco meeting with Snape. Snape notices Draco has been taking oculumency lessons with Bellatrix

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That is true! However in Draco’s 7th year I like to think that (in this story) he’s looking for a different way to hide his thoughts, especially from Bellatrix. He can hide little things from certain people, but in this situation he was desperate, so he had to seek Snape’s help.

Wow. That was BEAUTIFUL. You almost made me cry. I really wanted Draco to end up with Ginny, but I also ship Hinny. You really had me fighting against myself there.
Please write a sequel! Or maybe you already have, it's been at least a couple months, I'll look for it.
Thanks so much for writing this! I loved it! It really made me look at Draco in a different way. I'm shocked they were able to keep something like this a secret! Wow. You are amazing.

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I debated for a long time about how it was going to end. Honestly I didn’t even know until I was almost through writing it, and at that point I realised that I had tried so hard to keep things as close to canon as possible, and I had to end it that way too. A sequel is something that’s crossed my mind, but I think it would be more of a next-generation thing.

This is the first fanfic piece I’ve read I think, wasn’t sure if I’d like it but omg couldn’t put it down, so good! I love getting this sort of hidden view of things that could have been happening for other characters throughout the last book. Since it stayed true to the book, I feel like this is totally what I’ll see layered behind the story from now on, which is super fun. I’ll def keep an eye out for a sequel. You’ve 100% converted me to fanfic. Thanks for all the work you put into this!!!

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Thank you! It’s so fun getting such positive feedback on this story.

Loved the story but hated the ending.

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I’m sorry to hear you hated it! But I’m glad you liked the story as a whole.

I am really enjoying the character development in Draco. He has gone from kinda a jerk to someone much nicer, it has also been very naturel!

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Very good.nice story

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Nooo! It can't be over! That was, BLOODY BRILLIANT!

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Why does it have to be over? That was so bloody amazing!

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Draco is torn! I don't know what to do!

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Pansy Parkinson! Like, just, *angry scream*! I like Ginny's description of Draco's patronus. '"Hippogriffs are strong, powerful...proud…"'

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Omg! I feel so bad for Ginny, 'Oh, our own kind' It is just an opinion and yes, even though muggles and mudbloods suck, Draco needs to respect that it is an OPINION!

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Finally! I was waiting for that kiss. All I want to say is keep up the amazing work!

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I liked how Ginny saved Draco this time! She is so brave! I also love Draco's character development!

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Awww I feel so bad for Draco! He's been taught his entire life that muggles are bad and he's just now reconsidering it. The transition must be hard for him. 
I'm so glad that Ginny has her own thoughts and isn't just going along with whatever Draco says. I've read several books where the female just follows the male around. Ginny is a strong young lady and I'm glad you didn't take that away from her.

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Finally! I love this so much!

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AH THIS IS TOO SUSPENSEFUL!! Today I wanted to read some fanfiction and this was the first thing that came up AND I LOVE IT!! Ive been tearing through this! You're amazing!!

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This is awesome! I've never considered Ginny and Draco being a thing, but I like it! I also like it being from Draco's perspective. I've always wondered what that would be like. I've always thought of him as a heartless brainwashed robot, but you do a very nice job of making him seem human and giving him feelings. Keep it up!

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Hey. Great story. And the best part was that it still followed the books/movies plotline almost exactly yet you managed to create something completely new and amazing. But I dont understand why Draco and Ginny had to say bye. As in I do feel like thats the only way things could work out, but I dont understand the reasoning and how or why both of them came to that same conclusion at that same time.

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I understand! For me, they just felt it — they knew their story was over, and as painful as it was to say goodbye they both knew that this was how it was supposed to be. No real tangible reason behind it, just a feeling.

Why why why??!!!  (I’m wailing in grief and disbelief) Why wouldn’t they get back together???  Oh the heartache!!

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I know — it killed me! But through the entire story I tried so hard to keep it as close to canon as possible, so it felt right to continue with it. But it was so hard to do.

Wow, I was left speechless after reading that. The way you made it so believable and even encluding quotes and real sequences from the book is superb, please write a sequel, you are so talented!!

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Thank you! I’m so glad you enjoyed the story.

Thank you for your story - I absolutely love the Ginny/Draco pairing and it was written so well and made me feel so deeply for them! 

Please please write another! Or a sequel!! 

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Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed the story.

Great story. It was awesome seeing the story through another perspective. Totally believable although I was hoping they would get together at the end.

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Thank you!

This story virtually leaves me speechless.  Obviously not quite, but the way you were able to be  faithful to the canon and still tell a story that was new and fresh and heart wrenching in many directions--I can't thank you enough.  I'm hoping there is indeed or will be a sequel.  I can't think of anything I would enjoy and appreciate more, and I am quite certain that I am not alone in those expectations.

Thank you so much for sharing.

john

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Thank you! That made my day! I’m so glad you enjoyed the story and felt like it was faithful to canon. That was my goal the entire time writing it and I’m so glad it ended up that way.

I've never read a fanfic before. I've always thought they would be super cheesy or horrible but I was curious and clicked on this one. I expected to close it after the first chapter but I've sat at my computer for almost two hours reading the whole thing. Very well done. Can't wait to read the epilogue.

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Oh that makes me so happy! I’m so glad you’re enjoying the story. And welcome to the world of fan fiction! I stumbled in a few years ago and have been happily stuck ever since. There’s a ton of excellent stories on here and I’m so excited you get to discover all of them!

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