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I wrote an anonymous  review just before, but your story was so good I had to log in and review properly.

I really really enjoyed. It was totally believable because you kept the characters true to cannon. I love how you expanded on what was already there in the books and i really think it flowed so well. 

You've done such a good job, Thanks for writing this !

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Thank you so much! It’s so fun to get new reviews after the story has been up for so long. I appreciate you taking the time to say such kind things, and I’m so glad you enjoyed the story.

I loved this whole story! It's so well written and you've kept the characters true to the books. I really really loved it ! Great work

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some of this does not add up with the book, but it's still a good read :)

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Doesn’t Bella teach Draco Occlumency? Just wondering.. I could be wrong. I definitely liked this chap.

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My fave character is obvi Bellatrix. (My pen name says it all). I just think she is so interesting in her own way. Luv ur story. This is like my third time rereading it and I really enjoy it.

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From what I’ve read so far it’s great. I never thought about a Draco/Ginny relationship but I love it.

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Such a good story! I love the way this story transitions from one part to another. It just flows smoothly. Draco has s so well portrayed that I could imagine this being true. However I must say that Ginny was not portrayed as magnificently as Draco. In this story she isn’t the strong, protective person that she is. She seems somewhat weaker. In the series it mentions how Ginny was not one to cry over things and was as fierce as she is. I don’t think I see that Ginny here. Other than that, I definitely enjoyed this story. It was very well written. Please keep it up I’ll be interested for more.

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No.
What about Drinny?

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I had known Draco of a guy who hadn't had any choice in his life,  always had to what her parents told , 
thanks for writing this

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LOVE. LOVE. LOVE IT!
I'm hooked to this story and your writing is spectacular!
Anyone could believe that Rowling has written this herself.
Keep it up!

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Thank you so much! What a compliment!

Sooo sad Draco didn’t end up with Ginny! :(

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It was a hard decision!

It was great. I think Ginny and Draco are cute. If only the ended up together though.

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Thank you! It was hard to end it that way but I truly think Harry and Ginny are soulmates!

It is amazing. The flow of the story is not at all  broken.

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I always shipped Hinny but you really had me. Shipping Draco and Ginny. For this story. You are an amazing writer. Amazing job.

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Well thank you! I think Harry and Ginny were always meant to be together, but something about Draco and Ginny is just too tempting. Thank you for your review!

I love this story so much! You are an amazing writer, I especially loved how it went with the story and plot of the deathly hallows (eg: room of requirement scene, Fred dying etc)

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I am so glad you loved it! Thank you for your review!

I absolutely love this! I am so impressed by your ability to stick to cannon so well and yet at the same time add so much of your own creativity. So far I feel like this has all felt very natural and believable while keeping me intrigued and desperate for more. I can’t wait to read more!

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Thank you! I’m so glad you are enjoying it. Let me know what you think of the rest of the story! I’ve tried so hard to keep it as close to canon as possible, so it’s nice of you to say such lovely things.

In HBP, Harry follows Draco away from Slughorn’s party, and sees draco meeting with Snape. Snape notices Draco has been taking oculumency lessons with Bellatrix

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That is true! However in Draco’s 7th year I like to think that (in this story) he’s looking for a different way to hide his thoughts, especially from Bellatrix. He can hide little things from certain people, but in this situation he was desperate, so he had to seek Snape’s help.

Wow. That was BEAUTIFUL. You almost made me cry. I really wanted Draco to end up with Ginny, but I also ship Hinny. You really had me fighting against myself there.
Please write a sequel! Or maybe you already have, it's been at least a couple months, I'll look for it.
Thanks so much for writing this! I loved it! It really made me look at Draco in a different way. I'm shocked they were able to keep something like this a secret! Wow. You are amazing.

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I debated for a long time about how it was going to end. Honestly I didn’t even know until I was almost through writing it, and at that point I realised that I had tried so hard to keep things as close to canon as possible, and I had to end it that way too. A sequel is something that’s crossed my mind, but I think it would be more of a next-generation thing.

This is the first fanfic piece I’ve read I think, wasn’t sure if I’d like it but omg couldn’t put it down, so good! I love getting this sort of hidden view of things that could have been happening for other characters throughout the last book. Since it stayed true to the book, I feel like this is totally what I’ll see layered behind the story from now on, which is super fun. I’ll def keep an eye out for a sequel. You’ve 100% converted me to fanfic. Thanks for all the work you put into this!!!

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Thank you! It’s so fun getting such positive feedback on this story.

Loved the story but hated the ending.

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I’m sorry to hear you hated it! But I’m glad you liked the story as a whole.

I am really enjoying the character development in Draco. He has gone from kinda a jerk to someone much nicer, it has also been very naturel!

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Very good.nice story

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Nooo! It can't be over! That was, BLOODY BRILLIANT!

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Why does it have to be over? That was so bloody amazing!

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Draco is torn! I don't know what to do!

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