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My baby sister is dating a bloody death eater?!

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I am old. This story reminded me of a song that was popular many years ago with the line, “Loving  both of you is breaking all the rules.” I read the story as though proximity made the love for Draco stronger when he was close, yet even though you didn’t really write much of it,  the love of Harry was there too. And yeah she made the right choice, choosing the one she loved most but it was a complicated choice and Draco was still very much loved. This was Draco and hers story but her and Harry’s story is still there out there and valid.  Loved the story.

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WHY did you do thiss, I love the story so, so, so much but, why on Earth did they not get back together? 


P.S great job! :P

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Aw! The ending was so cute, great job.

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Could you add in some more Slytherins like Pansy Parkinson. But I love it very good. I am a Slytherin btw !

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If I went to Hogwarts my favourite class would be free period.*


*I know that it is not an actual Hogwarts class but it would still be my fav* 

PS Please can i have some story writing tips/ techniques

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Where is the Room Of Requirements now. 
I think that Draco will be really good. 
G must be worried sick. 

PS Please can you add Blaise finding G out and them all getting together.

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I think that Snape teaches Draco Occlumency.  I think Hagrid will reappear out of nowhere. my favourite HP book has to be the Deathly Hallows and Half blood prince. 
Sorry I have 2 favs.

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I liked how they argued and then when the bookcase came crashing down he saved her life. I mean why would he do that if she is a blood traitor. Overall, I really enjoyed it well done.

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ya, i think it should take more time for them to grow closer, i mean shes already kissing him

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i agree with Captin_Swan4LIFE & Ginny plus Anonymous MAKE A SEQUEL!!!

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Omg. Amazing. Just amazing.

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good. shes not seeing my bf anymore

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HOW DARE SHE KNOCK OUT MY BOYFRIEND. I WILL KILL HER FAMILY AND MAKE HER WATCH

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im dracos gf btw so stop making him make out with another girl its sickening

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Honestly, I'm not a big fan of fanfaction, mostly they seem far fetched. This one though, shocked me. Beautifully written, the story felt as good as the actual series. I'll admit that the start of their friendship was abrupt, but still it was truly believable. (Also sorry but in the chapter he feels snape is acting wierd makes malfoy appear dumb. Snape did help in occlumency so he should've figured out that he's probably not as loyal) It felt like a part of the story, and i worry i won't be able to read the last part without thinking about the events you mentioned (you're that good!) also the last infidelity was kind of saddening :( So good that you didn't end them up together, also i hope ginny trusts harry with more info about darco later on lol. anyways more power to you! Good job!

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Harry I did cheat on you but it was so worth 😏

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How as he supposed to know that it was Fred not me. He was just looking out for me

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OMG i love the story so much. i think it gives us more of a look of what could of  happened and from another point of view. I just love the story so much please keep making more.

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*sigh* My sis is now dating with a death eater and who killed Dumbledore (I meant help), I just found out this muggle thingy lying inside the forest and I started to use it and I typed instead of using quill, and I found this place and it mentioned Harry's Name, NOW I FOUND OUT THAT MY SIS IS DATING AND KISSING A BLOODY DEATH EATER! BLOODY HELL!

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Drako and ginny are great togeter, sorry bout my spelling i'm russian just learning english

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I am also in love with Draco btw;)

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Wow, our sis is dating a Death eater. I am literally triggered! Anyways curious story mate!

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Wow ok... Ginny You're dating the person who is a death Eater!

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Ok. Liking it. But If Ginny actually marries Draco (In the fanfiction), then harry has to marry Hermione! And Ron... Maybe Lavender Brown or someone else. But Amazing story!

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