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7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by PendleWizard Chapter 6

16th May 2017:
Ooh! You spoil us! Another chapter so quickly! I am so enjoying this!

I hope Hermione starts to be kinder to herself or she's not going to be good for anything. She and Sirius are quite deranged, aren't they!

Lily now knows that Jean is home educated and a muggle-born. That's quite an unusual combination. I wonder if anyone will twig that?

Just a small point: I find the phrase 'check [Sirius] out quite jarring and I am ten years younger than he is (albeit I probably had quite a sheltered upbringing). I think I'd have probably said that someone was giving me the once-over (actually it's highly unlikely that they would have been, but you know what I mean!)

Hope that's not too picky - it doesn't spoil this fantastic story!

Author's Response: Thank you for your thoughts! I agree, Hermione and Sirius make quite the pair. I'm glad you caught the part about Hermione being Muggle-born and home schooled. It was a pretty thoughtless slip of mind, and might have planted a seed of suspicion in Lily.

Thanks for the point about "checking out". I'm a small-town American (with a British dad), and I struggle a little with correct phrasing for things. I'll work on that!

Thank you again for keeping up with my story! I'm reaching the end of my pre-written chapters, so things will slow down a little, but I'll try to keep updating semi-regularly.


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Review #2, by PendleWizard Chapter 4

7th May 2017:
Another brilliant chapter! I think you have it bang on: Hermione being so weak and run down and her secret lasting as long as secrets normally last at Hogwarts!

Whatever Sirius has heard, he is going to be like, well, a dog with a bone, isn't he?

Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Thank you! It really means a lot to me that you would take the time to review.

Secrets don't tend to last long at Hogwarts, do they? We'll see how long Hermione's lasts, especially with Sirius *sniffing* around.

"Like a dog with a bone" -- I laughed out loud. Such a perfect depiction of Sirius. I have the next chapter in the queue so it should be up in the very near future.

Thanks again!


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Review #3, by Leebees85 Chapter 3

3rd May 2017:
Can't wait for the next chapter. So far I really like this story and this chapter in particular because she interacts with so many people who she isn't supposed to know yet. I kinda feel a Hermione/Sirius relationship possibly brewing and that's fine by me because I think younger Sirius would be a good match for Hermione.

I'm looking forward to see how she acts around Remus, and I wonder if he'll be as suspicious as Sirius. More so I can't wait to see if hermione can keep herself in check around Pettigrew, I for one would secretly hex him just in spite of what he will do, but I'm kind of bitter about it.

Thank you for these chapters, looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Hi there! Thank you for reading my story and leaving a great review! It's always exciting to know that people are enjoying it.

There might be a Hermione/Sirius relationship in the works...but you'll have to wait and see! ;) I agree though, I think younger Sirius would be good for Hermione.

I have the next chapter in the works, so keep an eye out for that!

Thanks again!


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Review #4, by PendleWizard Chapter 3

2nd May 2017:
I'm really enjoying this and am itching to read more!

I love the way Hermione is struggling to act like a stranger. It would be so hard to un-know things, even to remember what you were supposed to know and not know, wouldn't it? I think they way you've got her bumbling about is brilliant. I just know she's going to commit some humungous faux pas before long - calling James Harry or Snape Professor. Do we get to hear her interacting with dear Snivellus soon?

You've go the Marauders about right, too, I think. I mean, she's stumbled out of the forest acting oddly and doesn't seem able to answer simple questions like what her name is. And her clothing and manner of speech would be slightly odd (and a bit American) to them - Britain was a lot less cosmopolitan in 1977. She'd definitely seem more than a bit weird. Sirius is determined to find out more about her. Yes he would be, wouldn't he? What is he going to find out?

James feels true, too - all that self-assured mickey taking. It'll be interesting to read how Remus takes to her, once he's no longer indisposed.

All in all, this is a thumping good read. Here's to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you for your great review! It really makes me feel great when people take the time to not only read my story, but to compliment it as well.

Hermione is pretty fun to write. But the Marauders are actually really difficult! Their personalities are so different and strong, and I just hope I can do them justice. Sirius is definitely determined to figure Hermione out. He's just a little more aware of her than the others. You'll have to wait and see what happens! ;)

I'm getting ready to post the next chapter, so keep on the lookout for that!

Thanks again!


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Review #5, by Chemical_Pixie Chapter 2

30th April 2017:
What a big time jump for Hermione!

I am a fan. I like how you use specific chapters from HP in your disclaimer. Very professional.

Also, your descriptions and characterizations are good. I like the interaction between Hermione and Dumbledore, and it will be interesting to see how she'll interact with the Marauders!

Author's Response: Hey thanks! Writing Hermione's interactions with the marauders is proving harder than I thought. I hope I can do them justice.

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Review #6, by Chemical_Pixie Chapter 1

30th April 2017:
BBHP! I just saw that you posted a story on here, too, and I thought that I'd give it a read. I'm glad that I did. I'm looking forward to what comes next; this will be a very fun read!

Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for giving my little story a read. I don't claim to be anywhere near as good of a writer as you, so for you to take the time to check out my stuff is pretty cool. Thanks!

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Review #7, by Cheo Chapter 1

11th April 2017:
Looks like it will be a good idea, looking
Forward to seeing how this turns out.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading!

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