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Reading Reviews for Hanging on a Wandtip
  
2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by putitonpaper Act I, Part I

3rd March 2017:
I'm amazed at how much you were able to accomplish in 756 words. Like, wow, I'm so pumped for what's coming. I'm not sure how you did it but I feel like I can totally picture everything in my head. The man standing in the freezing cold to the fact that it's pitch black to the fact that we clearly have some untoward characters in a room scheming about something. And I feel this "don't blink or you might miss it!" mood oozing out of the chapter.

Your description of death is so well done. This may be blasphemy on this website but those last 3 paragraphs may be better than any description of death I've read from the great JK herself.

At this point, my review is probably as long as your chapter! So I'm just going to finish with a well done and I'm excited for the next chapter.

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Review #2, by quill2parchment Act I, Part I

2nd March 2017:
This was an amazing first chapter.

The mystery of it definitely has me intrigued, and I'm really enjoying your writing style as well. It's flows so naturally. I really hope you update a second chapter soon!

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