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Review #1, by magnifique11 Just Don't Write It

27th March 2017:
Awh :) This was so cute and fluffy! Albus getting over his grief felt a little rushed, but it was all for the happy ending so that's okay! I really enjoyed how you brought Lorcan in though, I think it's kind of odd when people just make Albus friends/in a relationship with Scorpius as if he wouldn't have other friends, so that felt very real/relateable. Overall a very cute, feel-good one shot! :)

Author's Response: Oh hello and thank you for the review. It wasn't so much about Albus rushing grief, he still has it even when he starts dating Lorcan, it's just that he thinks he should be allowed to be happy again. It's like when someone dies, even if years pass and you're happy once again you are still grieving no matter what.

Yeah, me too, I mean HE IS A POTTER, why wouldn't he have the ability to make other friends?

Thank you so much, have a lovely day!
-ImaRavenclaw


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Review #2, by lovegood27 Just Don't Write It

12th February 2017:
Hi, I'm here to review your entry :)

Okay, so first of all: Harry and Ginny split up?! What what what?! Why?! How!? I'd love it if you do another one shot on it (any excuse for some more Albus/Lorcan action...) ;D

Secondly, a Ravenclaw Albus? That's something I haven't seen before, but I like the idea...it would be interesting to see the family's reaction (assuming Lily and James aren't Ravenclaws too). At any rate, I can totally imagine Albus being intelligent enough to go to Ravenclaw.

Aw, poor Lorcan! It must have been so horrible for him to have to endure Albus and Scorpius dating, and it's something people can relate to as well (or I can, at any rate :P) Did he hook up with all those other students to distract himself? That would be a good idea. But yay, at least he got what he wanted! Lorcan and Albus make such a good couple :D

AH THEY GET MARRIED YAY. Did the poem kind of act as a proposal? NEVER MIND I JUST WANT TO READ MORE ABOUT THEM, THEY ARE JUST SO ADORABLE. And Albus changed Lorcan's mind about true love! I found that so sweet :)

Sorry for the weird review, I was doing a random commentary for the whole thing, but anyway-great story, please please write more ;)

Author's Response: Hey thanks, sorry that I've taken so long to reply! Yes they did. I like my fics to vary so sometimes I do that! Maybe I could write something else...

I don't know. I've had Albus in basically every house except Gryffindor, ha ha. I think he's LITERALLY NEVER BEEN in Gryffindor in one of my stories.

I never really thought about that. I think that Lorcan just slept with all of those people more to get Albus's attention rather than chasing away the loneliness. They do, don't they?

I don't really think so. I think it was more of a 'look, I wrote this after our night together'. He showed Lorcan on the day of the wedding if I remember correctly. It is a bit confusing though!

It's not weird at all. It actually reminds me of the reviews I get from Paula(TheProkaryote) and Julie (Banshee).

Thanks so much for reviewing, and I hope to see you around!

-ImaRavenclaw


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