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3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Annabelle Chapter Three

25th February 2017:
very interesting. Makes you want to read more.

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Review #2, by AppreciativeReader Chapter Two

19th January 2017:
Intriguing story so far.

Author's Response: Thank you! Hope you'll enjoy the next chapter, waiting for it to be validated.

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Review #3, by blackballet Chapter One

16th January 2017:
Hi there! I saw this on the recently updated page, and thought I would try it.

It was a really engaging first chapter, and am excited to read more. There are a couple little mistakes, like missing commas and other punctuation after dialogue, but other than that, there don't seem to be any mistakes. I also really enjoyed your descriptions, especially in the flashback section.

One thing that I personally didn't understand was the 2002 sentence. It felt out of place, and I couldn't understand why Draco was asking that.

I can't wait to read more, and will be watching for more chapters for sure!


Author's Response: Hi Balckballet,

Glad you enjoyed it.
I actually started writing this a long long time ago but retook it recently. When I first wrote it, they were going to be students at Hogwarts in their last year. But now that I'm older I thought it better to be post-Hogwarts.

I'd be glad to do more editing to it over time.

I'm still trying to decide the structure of the story but what I have in mind, I think this will be long and it will make more sense over time...

The 2002 reference is because they are 22 years old at that time.

If it took place in 2016/2017 they would be 35/36. However, there will be more time jumps. From now and from then.

Hope that made sense!
Still waiting on a chapter validation and currently writing another one :)

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