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Review #1, by BBHP Chapter Five

27th April 2017:
I've really been enjoying this! For a while there I didn't think you would keep updating this and I really hope you do. Sirius/Lily stories are so good. This one is exciting and interesting and makes me wish I was actually there.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It genuinely means a lot that you took the time to leave a comment. Life has been a little crazy, so I've been left with little time to write. I have a lot of ideas for this, too, so I want to make sure that I do this right. But stick around. A new chapter will be up soon :)

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Review #2, by Dinthemidwest Chapter Four

21st February 2017:
I've always been a fan of Lily/Sirius-you've got a great start!

Author's Response: Thank you, I appreciate it!

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Review #3, by Dinthemidwest Chapter One

21st February 2017:
Good beginnng chapter-I like the title! The Marauders are one of my favorite story subjects!

Author's Response: Thanks! I never was interested in the Marauders all that much until I started writing, and now I'm pretty obsessed. Hopefully this lives up to your expectations!

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Review #4, by crimson quill Chapter Three

27th January 2017:
I've enjoying this so far. I'm interested to see where it's going as it's not following canon as such. I don't read a lot of fics from this era anymore (more of a next gen gal now) but I use to read a lot of them. It brings back good memories of other fics from this era. I liked how passionatly you talked about the story in your authors notes, it's lovely to see that personal note in people's writing. good luck with the rest of this fic! :) xx

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's true, I am straying a bit from canon, but I am taking some bits and pieces from canon to flesh out the story. For the most part, though, I'm making a completely different story line. It's funny, I used to never like reading non-canon fan fiction, but after I started writing, I've found that it's fun to be able to have some creative liberties and I've come to like reading non-canon just as much as canon (can I say "canon" any more than I already have? o_o )

I appreciate that you find meaning in my author's notes. This story really is important to me, so thank you for taking the time to read it and review. I genuinely appreciate it!

Stay tuned ;)
- R


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Review #5, by pepperspicer Chapter Three

27th January 2017:
Me again!

I just want to smoosh Lily and Sirius together hahaa. Glad Lily got some good news amongst everything else going on for her.

You've got a really solid conversational style, I think I've mentioned in a previous review how natural the conversation feels. I also like the little stories backing up things that we might have heard mentioned in the books, Moody's injuries etc.

This story is obviously something personal to you and your writing reflects that really well :)

Looking forward ot the next one!

Pepper x

Author's Response: Thank you, Pepper! I'm so thankful that you are continuing to enjoy it. I was hoping that the conversations came across the way that I had intended :)

Thanks again!
- R


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Review #6, by pepperspicer Chapter Two

24th January 2017:
Remus is such a cutie in this :D and I really like your descriptions, especially of the Evans' kitchen :) I also really like how the story is slowly setting the scene, you're not jumping into anything overly exciting yet which is nice! It's good to pace yourself, I'm worried I pace myself a little too much and it's boring, but then I think back to how much detail goes into the original books and how much I enjoy reading it. I'm really interested to read more about the order and about Sirius, because he really is my favourite ;D

Looking forward to the next one :)

Author's Response: It's really good to hear that you appreciate the slower pace that I'm trying to take. I feared that it would be too slow for some, but I really don't want to rush this story and flesh it out a bit.

Thank you again for your input! It means a lot that you are enjoying it so far! A new chapter should be up in the next few days. I submitted Chapter Three late last night ;) I'm pretty excited for this one!

- R


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Review #7, by pepperspicer Chapter One

23rd January 2017:
I thought this deserves a review! I enjoyed it and I was surprised to read a story that starts at the end of the school year! I'm a big Sirius fun so I'm very much looking forward to how this turns out ;D and I love Meredith and Lily's friendship its really natural and cute :)

Keep it up, I'll be following :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm genuinely excited that you're enjoying it so far. It's a story that's really important to me, so it means a lot. I'll be adding chapters as quickly as I am able.

Stay tuned ;)
- R


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