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Review #1, by sushmita Remus makes a discovery that will change his life.

16th May 2017:
I think u have the essence of the story down from remus' pov but there's a lot of grammatical errors, typos that draws attention away from the story. I will try to point out specifics as well. Your title has Padfoot misspelt. Also how does remus think peter has been a rat for 12 yrs based on the map alone. Typo "potion is extremely difficult "-was.

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