Using CAPS lock in writing is lazy, pedantic, and uncreative. If characters yell, use descriptions. Also, if you're going to write within a world created by another with certain rules and concepts, the least that you can do is spell the terms correctly. I don't know what a "Boogy" is, but I do know what a "Bogey" is. Google and spellcheck are stupidly simple to use, so please take the effort to use them.

And these are comments just from the story's description!

Author's Response: thanks for your input but all caps is also used for shouting or yelling. I've seen it on many stories on this site and others.
2016-06-06 22:34:56
Spell check spell check spell check!!! Also, would be much better if you told it as a storyteller instead of a 3rd party play by play announcer! Has potential! :D:D:D

Author's Response: Thank you for your input. I thought I got all the spelling mistakes. I even have a friend double check for me. :D :D :D

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