2016-05-27 19:18:23
Awh this is such a cute premise for a story! I don't think many people really consider what happened to Trelawney, as interesting of a character as she was - so I'm really intrigued to see where you take it from here! I think Harmonia is quite a spitfire, but I like her! I was a little thrown off when you switched to her nickname, Nia, halfway through, just because there wasn't much of a gradual introduction or anything like that - but I caught on eventually :). Overall this was a really cute first chapter and I'm excited to see how you move forward!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! My first reviewer! I'm glad you like her, I have a lot of ideas for Harmonia that I hope you will enjoy. Thank you for letting me know about the whole nickname thing, I didn't really give it much thought as I had already planned to shorten her name- you're so right! I will go back and edit the transition when I have some time.

Really appreciate the review it keeps me inspired! :)

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