2016-07-18 18:46:16
I have been saving your story to read in one go. I was glad I did. I loved it. I loved how you portrayed both Remus and Tonks and what they did before the battle. It was nice to read Tonks as the independent woman she should be instead of a blubbering wreck when Remus would not accept her love. It was brilliant, thank you for writing it.
2016-06-24 18:33:05
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2016-05-30 15:18:16
I actually can't understand why you don't get more reviews! This story is great, the characters are lovely and your Imagination fills in all the holes that the books left us with. As you can see I really enjoy this story and hope that you keep up the good work. Especially after that little (or huge) cliffy.

Author's Response: Yeah, attracting reads and reviews is a mystery I have yet to crack. But it definitely makes me appreciate the reviews I do get, so thanks very much for taking the time to leave a note.

I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks again for the review.
2016-05-16 20:14:33
I really like this story and finally got around to write a review for it. Sorry it took me so long.
I think that your grasp on the characters is good, especially Andromeda, whom I like very much. She is fierce and vunerable at times. And Tonks is just the fire cracker she always was in my head as well. Bit I think that the way you portrait her also shows why she was a highly skilled auror. She has training and is cautious as well as surprising and a bit of a wild card.
The scene with the sharade made me giggle. That is something Tonks would surely do. And the crazy muggle jokes are hilarious.
Anyways. Enough rambling.
Keep up the good work and I am looking forward to reading more of your story.


Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far.

Thanks for your thoughts on the characterizations as well. That's always a tricky thing to get right, so it's good to know that someone things I'm on the right track.

Thanks again.
2016-04-29 18:20:37
It's great to read a story about Tonks mum and dad

Author's Response: Hmm, duplicate review. Thanks anyway, I'm glad you like the story.
2016-05-02 19:59:32
It's sad they lost all of remuses things

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.

Yeah, it is sad, but I don't think of Remus as being a very material person. He'll find a way to carry on.
2016-04-29 18:20:37
It's great to read a story about Tonks mum and dad

Author's Response: Oh hi! Reviews! Thanks so much!

I'm glad you like the concept. Tonks is so cool that I figure her parents have to be as well.

Thanks again.


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